What a wonderful wonderful poem. It truly is very very touching. You've once again managed to tell us a truly magnificent and heartfelt story in a very simple, expressive and clear manner. I just loved reading the poem as it painted a very clear picture of all the things that were going on, of course the picture that u gave helped too :D. I just simply loved your story and once more--telling it as a poem just makes it that much better.
Thank you so very much for sharing such an awesome piece of work.
Write on!
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