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Review of Mirror  
Review by Clarified Chaos
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I enjoy your piece a lot and know it would make a great short story if you so desired! *Smile*

*Star*What I Like:

I love the conversation, you clearly state what your character is doing in the bathroom [shaving], and you require people to see things from a different angle. I like that.

*Star*What I Disliked:

The only thing I disliked was that the conversation gets somewhat confusing and hard to follow. Maybe it was your intention, maybe it was not. Although, that is the only thing that distracted me from your piece.


As I said, I throughly enjoyed your piece and hope, if you ever do turn this piece into a short story, that you will inform me.

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