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Rated: E | (4.5)
That was brilliant!!
The article speaks for itself and for all of us here trying to visit alien mindscapes and recondition our own thinking to point directions to different reality tunnels . You have put it in beautifully constructed sentences.
I too have been fascinated with the relation between madness and creativity for a very long time . What we perceive as madness is just a different thought process and actions based on that thought process , but is that something we have to be skeptic about I'v wondered.
Anyways , I really enjoyed it and hope to read more from you soon.
Rated: E | (3.5)
I loved the way you have expressed all those feelings in the poem . The poem does justice to the dark , dejected , depressed underlying thoughts which I believe might have planted the idea of the article in your mind.
My favorite lines were :

" My name is Envy
Because everyone has what I don't
My name is Longing
For a reason to move on "

Nice work!!
Write on!! :)
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Rated: E | (3.0)
This might be your stepping stone to fame!
The poem is really good work . You words rhymed in style and never lost the thought it was supposed to emanate .I guess we will be seeing more work from you soon.
Just keep in mind to not loose the meaning just to focus on the rhyming , this is something I have seen a lot.
Write on!! :)
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