What the heck is the story about??????? You read to the end expecting a classical ending but their is no end at all. Very lousy piece. Wish I was allowed to vot lower than 1, -7, for example....
This is a truly great piece of writing. The description and the language easily carries the reader with it and makes them feel the loneliness, the tides, and even the 'sense' of Samantha's argument. The thoroughness of the author in cleaning the copy of grammatical inaccuracies is also commendable. Were it not that personally, I would have taken a different approach to the end, I would give it a full 5 points. Great work EvilDawg
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