Marvellous!Excellent story,it has it all,witch,magic and good point.I just didn't expect that end and it really was surprise for me.I hope that you write a story for children.The style in you're story is simple and readable,and to speak the truth thing that children would love it.I go see something else from you.Keep on writing! Sincerely Vesnicka
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