|Absolutely amazing concept! This story will go far, I am sure of it.
I'd love so see the story line where it becomes so bad for Tim that he has to go crawling back to Natalie begging her for forgiveness... And just thinking of all the different types of characters you could introduce excites me!
I'd love to see a character from Tim's past (like a rival or an ex that he had a REALLY bad break up with, or even a cousin who finds out about his money and uses his weakness for feet against him), I think your story has so much potential!
Great start, just keep adding regularly and this story will become a hit!