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I tend to try and be fairly succinct, I have a deep love for verbose and interesting language, taking large preference to poetry. If you want some critique or suggestion on such, I'd be happy to help!
I'm good at...
poetry reviews!
Favorite Genres
poetry, emotional and dark
Least Favorite Genres
none
Favorite Item Types
poetry, short stories
Least Favorite Item Types
every other type
I will not review...
novels
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Review by vapid
Rated: E | (1.0)
so where is it? There's nothing more than a sentiment to do something here, do you have an idea yet? Do you have anything written down? This should have been an update, not a piece.


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Review by vapid
Rated: E | (3.5)
well, first off, I stumbled across this with the read and review button and was quite skeptical given the size of this, after all, a lot of people will just push out these sort of sentences to gain attention, but looking at the actual point of the piece,I was proven wrong. I only have one glaring problem with it, it's too short, you could expand on this and flesh out the topic more.


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Review by vapid
Rated: E | (2.0)
the rhymes themselves are nice, but the actual sentences and the rhythm aren't polished, this leads to it feel childish, like it could be in a dr.seuss book instead of anything insightful. THe rhymes feel forced and unnatural, seeming more like you had a due date or you were just itching to make content instead of making anything personal or meaningful.


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Review of Dance in the rain  
Review by vapid
Rated: E | (5.0)
the way that the rain and the natural aspects are personified is quite nice, the rhythm is well thought out, the mood is constant and clear, honestly, this is one of the best poems I've read here. Don't know if I could suggest any changes or critique it at all given the skillful craftsmanship.


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Review of Pain  
Review by vapid
Rated: E | (4.0)
simple and intriguing giving the reader a basic grasp of the situation, quite clever writing, though I felt it had a lack of diversity with the vocabulary and lacked anything to make it truly memorable, if you added length or attempted to reword it, that could be fixed.


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Review of The Pocket Watch  
Review by vapid
Rated: E | (3.5)
sounds interesting, but it lacks substance, not quite enough to hook a person but definitely a decent prologue if nothing else, but it feels too dependant on what would come next instead of being its own thing. overall, it's a good beginning, but that's all it is, a beginning.


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Review by vapid
Rated: E | (1.0)
it's a bit too fluffy and short to do anything meaningful or even last that long in my mind, past that you've done nothing but make vacant rhymes with hollow and dull point, if any at all, there's no personality here, it feels like a machine could of written it.


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Review by vapid
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
though the wording was quite nice, you should have picked whether to lean into rhyme or remove it completely, or otherwise it seems too random, past that it didn't come with anything concrete or a mood that felt like it could really hold it down, try to build a more solid concept before writing a poem.


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