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Review of Shattered  
Review by Jayden Wyte
Rated: E | (5.0)
We all have that one weak spot, that kryptonite. It may always haunt the very fine fibers of our very being, however, a life with only pure pleasures is not a life worth living. We need those flaws to help us to know where to build on our foundations, and to move forward.
Never stop writing.
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Review of Closure  
Review by Jayden Wyte
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoy how you carefully chose your descriptive words.

The piece resonates as a cloud of mixed emotions that grows towards one focal point: anger.

Then, all at once, realization kicks in that the true feeling isn't anger at all, but heart break.

Short, sweet, and effective. Thank you for sharing.

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Review of Liquid  
Review by Jayden Wyte
Rated: E | (4.0)
Keep going. I'd love to read what happens next.
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