hey ! i'm very touched with this poem . It's telling about all the sad moments in one's life.I sunk myself in the poem while i was reading it.
You have written it all sequence wise...about the despair....the complete journey and at last wished for an innocent life which could be enjoyed . you've ended it in a nice way!!! :)
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