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Rated: E | (4.5)
I loved your story. I especially like the ending, he really did get into the stories. The characters are believable and interesting. I know people who can not afford a vacation. *Frown* I think you gave the character a real vacation, his own journey into reading. In fact, I thought it was so good, I have never read Tom Sawyer, but plan on doing so in the near future. I could use a vacation too. It seems all the spelling and grammar is correct as far as I can see. I think it flows well from beginning to end, logically. Overall, I think you did a great job. Keep up the good work.
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