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Review by Samantha Chu Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like the general idea and topic of the poem. I do think it could maybe flow a bit better in some places and a few lines have an odd rhyme. There are also a few places that are a bit confusing to me. For example, what is "coming dire". The second verse feels the most awkward to me with the rhyming and language. To be honest I was puzzled about "informing fire" at first but I have come to realize it's a clever reference to the Holy Spirit. Hope this helps!
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