Interesting, it made me think of a news story from last week. A 25 year old man went missing 10 years ago. He was just found wedged between the wall and a huge air conditioning unit in the grocery store where he worked. I wondered why nobody complained about the smell. I enjoyed this one. Good work or play, however you feel about writing.
Wow, this was good. It's funny I thought it was going to end with a twist. I thought the old man had been duped into helping the woman commit suicide. That would be a good story too wouldn't it? You could write an alternate ending like that.
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