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Review of A Life's Work  
Review by Long John Silver
Rated: E | (5.0)
Interesting, it made me think of a news story from last week. A 25 year old man went missing 10 years ago. He was just found wedged between the wall and a huge air conditioning unit in the grocery store where he worked. I wondered why nobody complained about the smell. I enjoyed this one. Good work or play, however you feel about writing.
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Review of The Librarian  
Review by Long John Silver
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is cool and I love the last line. I'll bet that librarian sends away a lot more people.
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Review of On The Beach  
Review by Long John Silver
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hey, I'm hooked. Now I have to read all your stuff and I'm tired so I will come back tomorrow. Great work pal.
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Review of Can I Watch?  
Review by Long John Silver
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so cool! Fast paced and informative. I learned something and you piqued my interest. Now I have to go look this subject up on line. Great writing my man.
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Review of They Dote On Me  
Review by Long John Silver
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Wow, this was good. It's funny I thought it was going to end with a twist. I thought the old man had been duped into helping the woman commit suicide. That would be a good story too wouldn't it? You could write an alternate ending like that.
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