Really liked this. Reminded me of an episode of outer limits or something. One thing, I thought that you over explained the patriarchal future control "on the link" which was pretty obvious in the first couple of paragraphs. Whenever a writer over explains something to me, I always feel he/she is insulting my intelligence. Anyway, other than that, and that it was perhaps predictable (obvious from the offset that someone who is dependent on a system can't live without it) I enjoyed it.
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