|I've been asked to Review this and I got to say. I'm a fan.
Let's start with the Pro.
A great writer with great detail, obviously caring about what he writes and enjoys writing.
But now the Con.
The lack of ". As a reader, it's far too painful and distracting. I don't know when someone is talking and have to deduct it. Quotation marks are needed. It just seems messy without them.
If you had " then it would be four, but without them it brings it down