This is a wonderful peice of hard work and has a touching flow. The ending has got to be the best and the story really gets me on the very edge of my seat!!!!!!!! The only advice i can give is keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will love to see further work and hope you have fun with writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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