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Review by Felis Mc Catus
Rated: E | (5.0)
this article does a good job at enlightening one of the most consequential terrorist plots of history and you do this in a way that is both informative and engaging.I knew nothing about the gunpowder plot prior to reading this, but you made me understand the importance of it. I also really liked how you described the situation in England and how it led to the Gun Powder plot. The article portrays a fascination of the gunpowder plot, and it does so with accuracy and style.


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Review by Felis Mc Catus
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A frightening story that had me sitting on the edge of my seat. You managed to set the tone of the story with few words, and I quickly understood the characters' personalities. The tension accelerated for every line until the end which left the story in a gloomy tone.👍

Although there was little to criticize, something I believe you could improve on is varying the way you are telling your story. There is a lot of dialog between the characters, but you could also describe what they are thinking to a greater extent. This will make your characters more realistic and relatable.

Overall an excellent horror story, keep it up😊
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