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Rated: 18+ · Poetry · Experience · #1683404
Thoughts about the "first time".
kissing
touching
he's on top
is in me
we're coming





This is my attempt at a Gogyohka. It is a new form of Japanese short poetry. It's 5 lines with no set syllables, but should be short and succinct. A Gogyohka should capture an idea, observation, feeling, memory, or experience in just a few words.





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