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by Kotaro
Rated: E · Poetry · Nature · #1969909
Prompt was winter. Second place tie.
crunch of broken snow
mortal clouds of exertion
summit lies ahead

or
crunch of frozen snow
mortal clouds of chilly breath
summit lies ahead

The top one is original.
Which do you prefer?

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