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Rated: E · Poetry · Personal · #2112341
A 'sijo' poem about waiting for your answer
Waiting breathless for your answer, I tremble, eager yet not
Until I hear from you, yes or no, two paths are visible
Whatever your response, one path will be forever lost





Won 3rd place in the Oriental Poetry Contest

Form: Sijo - More ancient than haiku, the Korean SIJO shares a common ancestry with haiku, tanka and similar Japanese genres. All evolved from more ancient Chinese patterns.

Sijo is traditionally composed in three lines of 14-16 syllables each, totaling between 44-46 syllables. A pause breaks each line approximately in the middle; it resembles a caesura but is not based on metrics.

The sijo may be narrative or thematic, introducing a situation or problem in line 1, development or "turn" in line 2, and resolution in line 3. The first half of the final line employs a "twist": a surprise of meaning, sound, tone or other device. The sijo is often more lyrical, subjective and personal than haiku, and the final line can take a profound, witty, humorous or proverbial turn.

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