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Time takes a toll on membership
Heaven is quiet

The entries have been fewer the past few millennia

The king is saddened

The entry criteria is high and the door narrow

All of the misconceptions are to be blamed

Just to being good would truly fill it to capacity

For most the elevator will go down

With a misunderstanding of why

The king can hear the masses cry

The proud father mourns for their souls
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