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Rated: E · Fiction · Sci-fi · #2343459

Active duty soldiers receive a vision upgrade, but it comes at a price.

In 2032, the Pentagon unveiled Project Luminous, a classified program to enhance soldiers’ vision with nanoparticle injections. The procedure was simple: a single shot to each eyeball, embedding microscopic particles that amplified infrared light detection. It turned night into day, granting soldiers the ability to see heat signatures through walls, track targets in pitch darkness, and even perceive infrared frequencies through their eyelids. The nanoparticles bonded with retinal cells, rewiring the brain to interpret these frequencies as vivid colors—crimson for body heat, violet for electrical currents, emerald for distant heat sources. For soldiers in the deserts of contested zones, it was a godsend. They called it "Fire Eyes."


But when the veterans came home, the gift became a curse.


Sergeant Marcus Kane was among the first to undergo the procedure. He’d served three tours, his Fire Eyes spotting insurgents through mud-brick walls, saving his squad countless times. But back in Chicago, the world was a kaleidoscope that never stopped. Streetlights pulsed violet, radiators glowed crimson, and even the warmth of his daughter’s sleeping body shimmered through her bedroom wall. Closing his eyes didn’t help—the nanoparticles let infrared pass through his eyelids like glass. Sleep was a battle against a relentless carnival of colors.


Most veterans adapted, using military-issued light-blocking eyemasks to dampen the glow and force darkness. But not everyone could cope. The VA hospitals filled with Fire Eyes vets complaining of migraines, hallucinations, and paranoia. The constant sensory overload fractured minds. Some saw patterns in the colors—omens, ghosts, or conspiracies. Others turned to drugs or alcohol to dull the visions, only to spiral deeper.


Marcus was lucky. He had his family, a job at a veteran-run mechanic shop, and a strict routine of eyemasks and blackout curtains. But when he was arrested for a bar fight—defending another vet from a civilian’s taunts—his world unraveled. The judge, unsympathetic to "Fire Eyes syndrome," sent him to Cook County Jail. No eyemasks allowed. Prison rules deemed them a security risk.


Inside, the infrared world was inescapable. The cellblock was a furnace of colors: inmates’ body heat painted the walls in crimson waves, the electric buzz of overhead lights streaked violet, and the distant kitchen ovens burned emerald through concrete. Marcus couldn’t shut it out. Sleep became impossible. The colors danced, merged, and whispered. He saw faces in the heat patterns—comrades he’d lost, enemies he’d killed. His cellmate, a Fire Eyes vet named Ruiz, was worse off. Ruiz muttered about "the green man" watching him, clawing at his own eyes until guards restrained him.


The prison was a pressure cooker for Fire Eyes vets. Without eyemasks, their minds buckled. A vet in solitary screamed about violet snakes crawling through the walls. Another hanged himself, leaving a note about "the colors that won’t stop." Marcus felt his own sanity fraying. He’d lie on his bunk, eyes squeezed shut, but the infrared bled through, painting his eyelids with nightmares. He started to see patterns too—a crimson pulse that seemed to follow him, like a heartbeat in the walls.


Desperate, Marcus and a few Fire Eyes inmates devised a plan. They’d smuggle aluminum foil from the kitchen, molding it into crude eyemasks during lights-out. It wasn’t perfect, but it dulled the infrared enough to let them sleep. The guards caught on after a week, confiscating the foil and tossing Marcus in solitary for "contraband." Alone in the concrete box, the colors were worse—sharper, angrier. The crimson pulse was louder now, like a drum in his skull. He banged on the walls, begging for an eyemask, but the guards ignored him.


Word of the Fire Eyes crisis spread outside.


Activists protested, claiming the military had turned soldiers into experiments without considering the aftermath. Leaked documents revealed Project Luminous had rushed human trials, ignoring warnings about neurological side effects. The VA scrambled to distribute eyemasks, but prisons lagged behind, citing "security concerns." A class-action lawsuit loomed, but for Marcus and the others, it was too late.


In solitary, Marcus stopped sleeping altogether. The crimson pulse became a figure—a silhouette that moved through the walls, watching him. He didn’t know if it was real or madness, but he talked to it, pleading for rest. On the seventh night, he smashed his head against the wall, hoping to knock himself out. He woke in the infirmary, eyes bandaged, the colors finally gone—but so was his vision.


When he was released a year later, Marcus joined a support group for Fire Eyes vets. They met in darkened rooms, wearing eyemasks like a uniform. Some had gone blind like him, others still saw the colors. They shared stories of the pulse, the figure, the madness. No one knew if it was the nanoparticles or their broken minds, but they all agreed on one thing: the military had given them sight, but taken their peace.


Outside, the world moved on. Project Luminous was quietly shelved, the nanoparticles deemed "unstable." But for the veterans, the colors never stopped. Even in darkness, they burned.

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