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Rated: 13+ · Short Story · Writing · #2350147

Once a writer begins writing, he finds quitting isn't an option.

The Obsidian Labyrinth


          Elias Thorne had always been a writer of relentless dedication, but even his most ambitious projects had limits until The Obsidian Labyrinth. He'd stumbled upon the idea late one autumn night, a vision of a forgotten city teeming with spectral architects and their shifting, impossible structures. It felt different, urgent, as though the story wasn't waiting to be told, but demanding to be written.

          At first, it was exhilarating. Elias's apartment, typically a chaotic monument to procrastination, transformed into a monk's cell. Coffee cups formed precarious towers, unread mail piled high, and the scent of stale coffee and ink mingled with the crisp autumn air filtering through his slightly ajar window. He wrote with a furious passion, the words flowing from his fingertips as if he were merely a conduit. His characters, the haunted architect Kael and the spectral guide Lyra, spoke to him with startling clarity, their urgency echoing his own.

          His friends, concerned by his sudden disappearance, tried to reach him. His phone, buried under a stack of research books, vibrated with ignored calls and increasingly worried messages. "Elias, are you alive?" read one from his best friend, Ben. "Just checking in, man. It's been weeks." Elias would glance at the screen, a vague guilt coiling in his gut, but the pull of The Obsidian Labyrinth was too strong. He'd type out a quick, dismissive reply, "Deep in the trenches, almost done!" and plunge back into the shifting corridors of his creation. Sleep became a luxury he couldn't afford, a fragile bridge between two writing sessions, often haunted by half-formed phrases and the whispering voices of his characters. His body grew gaunt, his eyes bloodshot, but a manic energy pulsed beneath his skin, fueled by the relentless rhythm of his keyboard.

          The story began to take on a life of its own, not just in his mind, but tangibly. He'd swear he heard the soft scratch of Lyra's spectral fingers against his walls, or the low, resonant hum of Kael's impossible architecture emanating from his speakers, even when nothing was playing. Once, he rose from his chair, intending to make a rare journey to the kitchen, only to find his fingers drifting back to the keyboard, a strange compulsion guiding them. A new paragraph, one he didn't consciously plan, materialized on the screen, detailing Kael's frantic search for a hidden passage, a passage Elias hadn't even conceived. A shiver, colder than the autumn air, traced a path down his spine.

          He tried to resist, to push away from the desk. He knew it was unhealthy, knew he needed a break. He walked to the window, forcing his gaze away from the glowing screen, but an unbearable anxiety clawed at his chest. His heart hammered, his hands trembled, and a profound, aching emptiness settled over him, as if a vital organ had been removed. It was a withdrawal, a desperate craving. He felt the story calling him back, a chorus of silent voices demanding completion. He saw a flicker in his peripheral vision, a shadow passing just beyond his apartment window, though he lived on the third floor. He spun around, but there was nothing. Only the waiting screen, its cursor blinking patiently.

          He returned, defeated. The keyboard welcomed his touch, and the words flowed again, bringing with them a strange, temporary solace. He was no longer just writing; he was servicing the story, a willing instrument for its unfolding. The characters grew more vivid, their pleas and commands more insistent. He started to see them in the periphery of his vision: Kael, gaunt and haunted, lurking in the shadows of his living room; Lyra, translucent and ethereal, watching him from the corner of his eye, her expression a mix of sorrow and expectation. They were no longer confined to the page; they were here, in his apartment, waiting for him to write their next move, their next anguish.

          One morning, when the first weak rays of the sun pierced his grimy window, Elias looked at his reflection in the dark screen. He barely recognized the hollowed-out face, the matted hair, the eyes that held a terrified, desperate recognition. He wasn't Elias Thorne anymore. He was merely a vessel. He saw the faint, shimmering outlines of the Obsidian Labyrinth in the shadows around him, its impossible architecture beginning to bleed into his reality. The walls of his apartment seemed to ripple, to shift, forming angles that shouldn't exist. He heard the faint, metallic clang of Kael's pickaxe against stone, the whisper of Lyra's breath beside his ear.

          He tried to scream, but no sound emerged. His fingers, skeletal and stained with ink, continued to tap, tap, tap, weaving the endless narrative. Just then, a frantic pounding echoed on his apartment door. Ben, finally breaking in. The lock splintered, and the door burst open. Ben stood there, aghast, taking in the squalor, the stench, and Elias, hunched over his keyboard.

          "Elias! Oh my God, what have you done to yourself?" Ben cried, rushing forward.

          But Elias didn't respond. His eyes were wide, fixed on the screen, but they were devoid of recognition, blank and fathomless. His lips moved, not speaking, but whispering the words as they appeared on the screen, his own voice a low, raspy drone. His fingers danced across the keys with an unnatural speed, an automaton's precision.

          Then, at the very bottom of the page, a new sentence appeared, written in a stark, chilling font: And Kael, the architect, felt the last vestiges of his mind unravel, his body a mere puppet in the hands of the shifting Labyrinth, his will incorporated by its endless, inescapable design.

          Elias's fingers continued to tap, relentlessly, charting the next turn in the Labyrinth, the next step of the architect, now trapped within its pages forever. The story would never end, and neither would its scribe.

Word Count: 975
Prompt: Write a story or poem about a writer who doesn't want to stop writing.

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