Ideas & stories for my novel: Krysalynn

This is a world that I've had forming in my mind for a few years now. I've been trying to put it down on paper, but unfortunately I'm only able to in small samples of writing.

Please forgive me--these samples aren't complete. I'm warning you now.

Since it is a huge work in progress, I welcome any words of wisdom to aid in its creation.

Thank you, Enjoy!