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Rated: 13+ · Short Story · Sci-fi · #2341063

The random factors in a world where thoughts are transparent and mapped

"Landscape's green," Tom muttered, scanning the digital overlay of neural telemetry beamed in from the crowd. The sea of glowing minds pulsed in calm, positive hues, a synchronized mosaic of approval. From their surveillance van, stationed three blocks from the amphitheater, he controlled an array of drones and sensory equipment like a conductor with a symphony of data.

"Sector C-12 shows a spike—glowing red, boss," Julie said, her voice smooth, clipped. She sat beside him, her fingers flying over the control panel, pupils flickering as she synced the local sector scans with her HUD.

Tom zoomed in. "Got it. Deploying a microdrone. Let’s get visuals..." A second later, a live feed shimmered into view. A woman, face flushed with fury, screamed at her partner. Her Coke-soaked T-shirt clung to her chest, the stain like a wound. The husband cowered, murmuring apologies, while the surrounding crowd chuckled and elbowed each other at the domestic drama.

"Non-political. Random disturbance. Ignore it," Tom said after a beat. Julie gave a short nod, and the drone zipped upward, vanishing into the swarm above.

He turned his attention back to the main feed—an audio-visual overlay comparing real-time crowd sentiment to the President's speech. Neural satisfaction levels ticked upward with every phrase.

"He’s got them," Tom observed, tone analytical. "The terrorism rhetoric’s hitting home. No significant negatives yet."

Julie relayed that data to the White House speech team. They would tweak the closing segment, sharpening the focus on national security.

The speech peaked. Cheers erupted across the stadium as the President delivered his final line, and the crowd surged into a standing ovation.

"That’s a wrap. Archive the speech, send the final report to White House Staff," Tom instructed. "Good work, people. We’re off the clock."

Later, the crew packed up their mobile surveillance unit: retracting MEG and IR drones, collecting directional mics and long-range cameras, and loading everything into the armored lorry. By sunset, the arena stood quiet, stripped of the machinery that had dissected every twitch of its audience.

The team made their way to the hotel and, following tradition, gathered in the bar. The ritual of debriefing over drinks was both catharsis and camaraderie.

Tom, like always, bought the first round, courtesy of the project budget.

"To a job well done," he toasted. "Now, remember—corporate boardroom at eleven, billionaire’s party at three. Depart at nine sharp. But tonight? Relax."

Julie drifted close, her thigh brushing his—a quiet, intimate gesture amid the hum of conversation. She leaned in, voice low.

"The board meeting I get—corporate espionage. But why surveillance at a party?"

Tom sipped his whiskey, then replied, "The host’s a paranoid tech mogul. Thinks half his entourage are leeches. He wants us to map relationships during his product launch speech—spot who’s loyal, who’s calculating."

Julie raised a skeptical brow. "You know that parties are noise, right? Emotions run wild. Half the readings will be drama and nonsense."

"Exactly. But during the speech—fifteen minutes of clarity. That’s when the masks slip."

Julie nodded, glancing at the rest of the team. They were laughing loudly now, swapping highlights of the day.

"They're already well into it," she whispered. "Fancy calling it a night early?"

Tom smiled, his voice warm. "Slip away first. I’ll follow in fifteen."

He joined the techs.

"Alright team, what were your favorite randoms today?"

The room buzzed with excitement.

"E14—heart attack! We alerted paramedics just in time. Guy’s stable now. We saved a life."

Fist bumps followed.

"F4—two dissidents. We flagged 'em before they could unroll their banner."

"Nah, winner’s the woman flashing her boobs in Row 3. The crowd loved her, security not so much!"

They howled with laughter. Tom laughed too—then slipped out quietly, leaving the night to them.

The next morning...

The corporate meeting was routine. Three board members had hostile intent toward the CEO, and two of them showed anger bordering on hate. Surveillance confirmed everything the CEO had suspected.

By mid-afternoon, they arrived at the billionaire’s estate—a vast manor nestled in manicured hills, crowned by a turret that would serve perfectly as their command post. The team fanned out, embedding micro-cameras and sensors into walls, chandeliers, and even cocktail platters.

Julie was point on the floor. Her red dress was striking—elegant, backless, with just enough thigh to catch attention without drawing it.

Tom leaned in when no one was watching and kissed her cheek.

"You look like a billion dollars," he whispered.

"Last night, you said I was priceless."

They shared a grin. Then she vanished into the crowd, her necklace camera feeding directly to Tom’s console.

On the monitors, emotions flickered like auroras—greed, lust, ambition. Each guest glowed with motives. But one dot—white, neutral—stood out.

Julie.

A heart at peace, Tom thought. No drama, no extremes. Just stillness. She's a true random. Invisible to the tech. It is only broken people who reveal their secrets.

Then he saw another white dot.

A tall man, built like a soldier, face bisected by a long, ragged scar. Calm. Too calm. The tech couldn’t penetrate the object in his jacket's inner pocket.

Tom zoomed in. The man moved toward the main hall, and leaned casually against a wall—strategically placed near an exit.

Tom frowned. "Security, sending you a target. Potential weapon."

"Copy, sending team now."

"Julie, eyes on?"

"Yes. Ex-military, too composed for this setting. Looks dangerous."

Then everything snapped into motion.

The man saw the security team and reacted instantly—weapon drawn, two men down before they could respond. Screams erupted. The crowd scattered. The man blended into the chaos, disappearing into the gardens.

Tom deployed infrared drones. The man glowed beneath the trees—but as soon as the sentinel drones closed in, static washed the feeds.

"Shit, he's armed and trained—took out the drones. Security, you getting this?"

"In pursuit."

Then—a gunshot from inside the house.

Julie’s feed was out.

Tom froze. "Where’s the billionaire? Who’s with him?"

A drone raced toward the inner sanctum.

Too late.

The billionaire lay slumped on the floor, a bullet between his eyes.

Julie was gone.

The man had escaped.

Tom stood frozen, hands shaking over his console, the rest of the team silent.

"How?" he whispered. "How did they beat my gear? How did I get Julie so wrong?"

Outside, sirens wailed. Helicopters thudded overhead.

Inside the turret, silence.

A heart at peace, he'd thought.

But now... it gave him no peace at all.


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