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Rated: E · Fiction · Sci-fi · #2351512

A family moves in to their new home and explores what they now own.

The Hansen family had moved to the remote Montana ranch just three weeks earlier, trading the noise of suburban Chicago for wide skies and silence. Dirk Hansen, seventeen and already broad-shouldered from years of wrestling, led his younger brother Kyle and three neighborhood friends (Jax, Milo, and Seth) on what was supposed to be a simple afternoon hike up the ridge behind the new house. The property line ran all the way to the tree-covered flank of Blacktail Mountain, and Dirk wanted to see how far the family now owned.

They were messing around, skipping rocks into a creek, when Jax’s foot slipped on loose scree and he slid down a brush-covered slope. Instead of hitting dirt, he vanished into a dark slit in the rock that none of them had noticed before. The others scrambled after him, shouting, and found him sitting inside a perfectly rectangular opening hidden by overgrown juniper. The edges of the entrance were too straight, too smooth, to be natural.

Dirk clicked on his phone’s flashlight. The beam caught polished stone that curved inward, then revealed a wide, gently descending tunnel with faint blue lines glowing along the floor. The air smelled clean, almost artificially fresh.

“Dude,” Milo whispered, “this isn’t a bear den.”

They should have gone back for adults. Instead, teenage curiosity won. They walked single file for what felt like twenty minutes, the tunnel sloping steadily downward, the walls seamless. The glow strips brightened as they moved, as if responding to their presence. Finally the passage opened into an immense cavern lit by soft white light from nowhere and everywhere.

They stood on a balcony overlooking a city.

Below them stretched terraced islands floating in a vast underground sea, connected by arched bridges. White buildings with curved roofs clustered along shorelines and rose in gentle spirals on the larger islands. Trees and gardens grew everywhere, and narrow boats moved silently across the dark water. Far in the distance, more islands faded into mist. Everything looked pristine, untouched, as though the inhabitants had stepped away for lunch and never returned.

A calm, genderless voice spoke inside their heads at the same moment, perfectly clear, perfectly understandable.

Welcome, heirs. Genetic continuity confirmed. Baseline augmentation absent. Initiating integration protocol.

Dirk staggered. Kyle grabbed his arm. The others looked around wildly, trying to find the source of the voice.

“What the hell was that?” Jax hissed.

Before anyone could answer, a warm pulse bloomed behind their eyes. It didn’t hurt. It felt like the moment just before falling asleep, but in reverse. Images flooded in, not theirs: a blue-green planet seen from space, then a rogue world the color of dried blood sliding silently through the outer solar system. Orbital shifts. Tidal chaos. Impact warnings. Frantic construction of shelters deep inside mountains on every continent. This one, beneath what would millennia later be called Blacktail Mountain, completed exactly one year before the final strike.

They saw the last evacuation ships lifting off coastal cities while tsunamis taller than skyscrapers rolled inland. They saw the shelters sealing automatically when no authorized personnel arrived in time. They saw twelve thousand years pass in fast-forward, lights dimming to standby, gardens tended by quiet machines, air and water endlessly recycled.

Then the visions stopped, and the five boys were simply standing on the balcony again, breathing hard.

Kyle spoke first, but not out loud. His thought appeared in Dirk’s mind like text overlaid on reality.

Did you guys just see that too?

Every head nodded.

Another pulse. This one deeper. Dirk felt something settle behind his eyes, painless but permanent. The others flinched at the same moment.

Integration complete, the voice said. Neural lattice installed. Full recall active. Computational coprocessing online. Telepathic mesh established. Medical nanites deployed. Welcome home.

They spent the rest of the day exploring in stunned silence (mostly mental silence, because speaking aloud suddenly felt slow and clumsy). The city was empty of people but not abandoned. Small robots glided along paths, trimming plants. Lights brightened when they approached buildings and dimmed when they left. A medical bay examined each of them in turn, pronouncing them healthy but “severely unaugmented” before the nanites finished their work.

By the time they hiked back out (guided by an internal map that simply appeared when they needed it) the sun was setting over the ranch. They emerged from the hidden entrance dirty and exhausted, but their steps felt lighter, their vision sharper. None of them spoke until they reached the farmhouse porch.

We tell no one yet, Dirk thought, and the others agreed instantly.

School started the following Monday.

On Tuesday, Milo turned in a calculus quiz he’d barely studied for and scored 100%. On Wednesday, Jax recited the entire periodic table plus atomic weights from memory during chemistry. By Friday, Kyle (previously a solid C student) aced an English essay exam by quoting passages from books he’d skimmed once in seventh grade. Dirk, who’d always struggled with history dates, corrected the teacher on the exact day the Battle of Thermopylae began.

Teachers noticed. Counselors were consulted. Parents were called.

At the dinner table that Sunday, Mr. and Mrs. Hansen stared at report cards that had jumped from average to perfect across every subject.

“Boys,” their father said slowly, “what exactly is going on?”

Dirk looked at Kyle, then at the empty chairs where Jax, Milo, and Seth would normally have been sitting if this were any other weekend. He took a breath.

“Dad, we need to show you something on the mountain.”

And in his mind, perfectly recorded from the moment they’d first stepped into the glowing tunnel, Dirk queued up the memory and prepared to play it back (every image, every sensation, every impossible truth) for the adults who still had no idea they now owned the last intact refuge of a civilization that had died twelve thousand years ago.
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