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Review of Eyes of Mist  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Most probably, the centre of the story will be the enmity between the Shakaree and the Falamar. We would see Ayala as the central character. She knew well that the Shakaree were evil. Despite that fact, she tried for an honourable peace settlement or tried to destroy them. We don't know what will happen ultimately. But, an exciting story is waiting for us. I assure you.


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Review of Toressa  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a lyric of a true love song. The lyricist can touch our hearts. The teller truly loves Toressa very much. Their souls are joined as a single unit. So, the physical distance between them doesn't matter at all. They always remain in contact with each other. It will last forever.
It is a characteristic of real love that they can discover others' presence. That makes the entire environment romantic. The lyricist is fabulous. Overall, we witness a good romantic song.
I especially like two parts of the song.
"You're with me everywhere I go
No matter what I do"
Another important part is-
"I close my eyes and hear your sighs
As whispers from the leaves
Your gentle touch I love so much
Comes lightly with each breeze."
These two parts combined tell the entire theme of the song.
What a beautiful creation it is!
Write on!

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Review of Love  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
There is indeed no guarantee that your love will be rewarded. It would get a reward. Why does it happen? Because we wrongly think of an infatuation as love. That can create a disaster in our lives.
Only the love of God is guaranteed. So, devote yourself to him. Our life will be peaceful.
Nice poetry.
Keep writing.

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Review of Night Shift  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
How difficult the night-shift duty is! That is explained here in the simplest of words. The poet may have some experience with night shift duty. Otherwise, it can't be such lively. Sleep is the biggest enemy of that type of duty. To avoid it, black or cold coffee is useless. After some time, the physical condition doesn't permit any more strains. We search for some rest. In that way, the night shift is another critical tired day over.
Write on!

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Review of Welcome Home  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Here the teller is welcoming his friend who remains hidden inside his heart. We know that God resides in our hearts as an eternal soul. But, due to our sinful works, sometimes we can not find him there.
The narrator wants to return to his sacred life. So, he is again starting to realise God's existence inside him. He requests God to give him company forever. Every human wants this. But, only a few feel this as they are sinless souls. If you want to realize his presence forever, you have to be sacred.

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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is another great poem by the poet. He is thinking deeply about our society and how we get close towards perfection. It is not an easy task, not an impossible one, too. Nothing is possible without the wish of God. So, why should we not devote ourselves to God? If he wants, we can do miracles. So, there is an inspiration to adopt the path of spirituality to build an honest and powerful society.

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Review of Clowning Around  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a perfect Flash Fiction that fulfils all the characteristics of an accurate Flash Fiction.
A sad incident took place. Captain Smith and Detective Jones came for an investigation. Their observations and conversations were a source of the story. Those helped to come to a decision.
The story is well-written and full of suspense.
A bright future is waiting for you. Go ahead.
Keep writing.

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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Pinkie Pie set her sights on the DJ of her fundraiser event and her silky feet. But, it was a pathetic experience. It was almost impossible to clean the dirty feet like DJ had. It was extremely dirty. But, for the fundraising, Pinkie Pie accepted the challenge. That should be appreciated.

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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Gaining an unlimited weight is a curse that happens in Bowser's life. An uncontrolled life leading is the reason for that.
Is it possible for Bowser to regain normal life? We don't know. But he should make a try at least.
However, it is a burning issue. I must thank the author who prefers a real-life problem.

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Review of Rock Gets Revenge  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Rock and Roll were two siblings. But they were attached to a sexual relationship. They were very aggressive.
They had the contract for two weeks. Roll remembered Rock, there were another nine days left. So, did it perfectly. Those words strike in Rock's mind. How did he spend these days? He severely took serious revenge on Roll. Roll wasn't prepared for those. However, she survived.
Good and interesting story.
Write on!
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Review of Love for poetry  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Like other poets, this poet also loves poetry. The poet has been passionate about this artistic field of literature. Word selection is a key feature of every poetry. The poet is very much concentrated on that particular part. He would like to write various patterns of poetry.
You are now in our community. I hope that we will see many beautiful poetries in future.

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Review of The Hunter  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This chapter creates tremendous suspense. What will happen ultimately? That can not be predicted but exciting fiction will surround us, it is definite.
The main character is Eva. That can't be incorrect. The character of LA has yet to appear. The character of Ariel is looking ferocious. Though it is too early to comment on anything. He was alive eight hundred years ago! Eva got
Rakshasa Queen Erzabel's summon.
Anyhow it is going to be an interesting story.
Suspense is all over.
What will happen next?
Write on!

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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Scootaloo was hungry. So she wanted to buy the premium "Blast Bar". It was nutritious. The cost of one was five dollars. She did not have half of that. She was very much insulted.
Hunger is such a thing, that it can hamper one's character. That happened in the case of Scootaloo. She saw an earning option. A few shy guys were there. She offered her body for their entertainment. They enjoyed it too much and Scootaloo got thirty-five dollars as a deal.
When she was released, she returned the bars from that money. What did she know? Encash your treasure, the sex, in a time of need. It spoiled Scootaloo and would spoil many. The authorities should take some action, mainly for the poor teens. Otherwise, we would see many Scootaloos.
It's a very thoughtful story.

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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's one of the greatest rhyming poetry ever read before. Due to the blessings of God, we saw Lahaina and West Maui as the paradise of the heavens on the earth. But they were in utter chaos which was the cause of their destructions. It is very difficult to rebuild them once again but not impossible.
It taught them a lesson. Unrest, jealousy and pride always hamper our unity and cause severe damage. It will take time to make that huge loss. They also learn if you ignore the gifts of God. So they learn some useful lessons. I hope that will help create a good society.
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Review of Broken  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is the real truth of every life. We don't know what will happen tomorrow. We would expect something. But, there is no certainty, that will occur.
That lady is brokenhearted, hurt and scared today. Do you find any shine of confidence in her? No!
But, if you saw her before that bitter experience. You would find her in a completely different direction. She was complete, confident unblemished and always ready to fight against evil powers.
Is there not a mirror image you? Maybe or may not be. But you must see some similar characters in your way.
It's an excellent poetry.
Write on!

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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It's an erotic story but a well-built short story. The central character is none other than Apple Bloom and another important character is a shy guy Wave. How do they spend time in the gas station? That is the subject of the story.
At the Gas Station, Apple Bloom made her feet dirty to attract the guys. Wave responded very quickly. Her purpose served. Wave cleaned up her feet. She left that small Gas Station.
A well-paced story. The reader will be happy to read it. That's all. A short time entertainment. Not much left think later.

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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is truly a brilliant poetry. The poet tells us the real truth of our lives.
What should be our best policy? That strategy must be admired by all. How can it be possible? As per the poet, a kind word is more effective than beauty. You can easily win other's hearts through a nice and kind word. If you develop this weapon, you will be a popular person.
This tiny poetry has enough strength to win our heart.
Go ahead.
Keep writing.

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Review of On the Other Side  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a story of true love. This type of love is the birthplace of acute romanticism. Not only that, but that kind of perfect love can tune two souls as a single soul. So, despite the physical distance, they can listen to the melody of others.
These types of lovers can feel others' presence always in their minds.
It is a wonderful poetry.
Write on!

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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
What a brilliant poetry it is! Through this beautiful tree, the poet wants to show how wonderful our life is! We should enjoy every bit of it. But unfortunately, it doesn't happen at every moment. Many people complain about their mournful life. They ignore the little blisses for an attractive target. These blisses are a gift of God. After failure, they feel their faults. But it is too late to realise. Their physical condition doesn't permit them to begin afresh. Time already extracts their level of energy to a great extent.
So a wise person always does the same as the poet's recommendation. That human always honours the closest relationships. They prefer love and a peaceful life and hate unrest and lust. However, we prefer to live in childhood trauma as they have joyful experiences. But in our lives, we have pain, hurt and hard struggles. Those give us experience on how to overcome adverse situations. It's a big lessons of every life.
It's a great beginning.
A bright future is waiting for you.
Keep writing.
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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a brilliant chain of five Shadorama is a syllabic poem. It originated in Spain. It fulfils all the characteristics of that type of syllabic poetry.
In April, we saw the lovely excitement of "Game of Thrones". Every participant and other WDC members enjoy it very much. I especially like how Jace congrats every participant. It's a lesson for us on how to adopt true sporting attitudes. It gives you a boost and other participants, too.
It is one of the most valuable poems of all time.
Write on!
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Review of Lessons  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's truly a wonderful Flash Fiction. There are only two characters, Tim and the small boy. That boy wanted to know whether Tim saw any ghosts or not. Tim felt funny in his attitude.
But, the story was story was running at a faster pace and interesting way. Ultimately, the boy disappeared. Tim learned what the ghost was.
The compactness of the story must be appreciated.
Write on!
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Review of Summer  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's truly a fantastic rhyme that draws the image of a warm summer's image nicely. But is it a proper Haiku? It's a big question.
The primary condition of a Haiku is it should be unrhymed in nature. So, how can rhyming poetry be a traditional Japanese Haiku? So, it can't be a traditional Japanese Haiku.
The next important thing is the purpose. The main purpose of a traditional Japanese Haiku is to draw the beauty of the image of mother nature which is brilliantly performed.
A Haiku contains a single u rhymed sentence whereas that rhyme contains three rhymed sentences. It's a big mistake.
Other characteristics of the Haiku have been followed exactly.
The performance is truly notable. Except for the two important rules. I hope those mistakes will not be repeated in future.
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Review of I Forgive You  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a truly excellent poem of true love. If your love is real unconditional for someone wholeheartedly, you must forgive your lover though you know that the human is a guilty person. This is the beauty of true love. It is blind and can't be blamed on that person. So despite several faults, you will forgive that person.
It's a real-life story.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's an extraordinary short story. The central character of the story is David Welton.
The beginning of the story creates an enormous suspense. He found himself in an unknown place in an unusual manner. What happened? He remained addicted, At last, he knew that he had taken a short-term loan. He had to pay it back now.
He was sent to jail if it remained unpaid. David could not find any way. He was forced to play poker. Bank intimated to him that an anonymous source paid twenty-seven thousand dollars. He could take a sigh of relief.
It is a well-paced story.
The readability is awesome.
Write on!
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Review of Promise and Hope  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is an important rhyming poem about how we feel this world has become. Despite a lot of problems and pains in our material world, we get some scopes of respite as Jesus Christ, our saviour, is there to rescue us. So why don't we rely on him? He shows us the proper ways to avoid pain and sorrow. A true devotee accepts those ways and enjoys an immaterial peace of the heavens though the soul remains in the planet.
This poetry is the true inspiration for us to adopt spiritual path.
We shall remain grateful to the poet for this poetry.
A bright future is waiting for you.
Keep writing.
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