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Review of Boulangerie  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a nice humour poetry. Supposedly, it looks funny. A man who is an avid eater is halfway through, he finds that he has forgotten to have his snacks. So he turns to get those. But he sees the march of an endless hungry people for bread. He returns to his work and sees the dream of rolling a stone up an endless bread hill.
But, if we try to see the real meaning of the poetry in-depth, we will find, that this poetry tries to highlight a burning issue of the modern world. This is nothing but hunger. Many people in our nation are even now below the poverty level. They suffer to earn a little food. I saw them. They are habituated to starvation. A little glimpse of that mournful scenario has been exposed here. It's a sad scene.
Some think that it is a pessimistic thought. But it's reality.
Now we focus on that man who is strong in calculating every matter. His wisdom provokes him to stone up an endless bread hill. That is truly a positive thinking. We should do something for those helpless people. Wishing to serve something for the nation in your limited capacity should be the primary objective of our lives.
I especially like the message.
It is an excellent poetry.
Write on!


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Review of She was Beautiful  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It occurs prologue of a story. If we follow the writing carefully, we must find a poet is writing a story. The teller describes her beauty with perfection. Her body is totally beautiful. The poet collects the whole body's glamour from nature. It's truly artistic.
There is a hint of suspense, too. But it is not so clear. I think that will be more clear as the story goes on.
The beginning is impressive.
Continue this rhythm.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It is a very exciting chapter. It's full of suspense. Does Princess Daisy find one of her thieves in Club 64 Cafe? This thief is none other than pop singer Diva! It looked seemingly impossible. But Princess identified Diva as a bandit. So she entered into the green room with Toadette.
Most surprisingly, Diva also identified Princess Daisy and a list of stolen had been found from the singer. So, the doubt is correct!
What will happen next? It's unknown to us. We have to wait for the next chapter for further happenings.


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Review of Autumn leaves  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is beautiful poetry that creates an image of nature when the season is beginning. The style of writing is perfect.
The readability is awesome. It follows all the rules of an ideal traditional Japanese Haiku except one.
All three lines should be unrhymed in nature. But here, the first and third lines are in rhyme. That is a violation of rule. That should be corrected.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
At last, the Princess Daisy appeared with her style and glow. She took everything in her control immediately. A dramatic environment was created. Princess began to torture Toadette. Toadette dropped from the top of castle.
Did she die or remain alive? We can't predict anything. To know the reality, we have to wait for the next chapter.
The story is running well.
Maintain this pace.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a true story of our real life. We, the general public, are often tortured at the hands of fate. A few people become frustrated and mournful. They give up their fight. The poet mentions them as 'weak'.
But some people behave oppositely. They re-group themselves after a setback. As per the poet, they are 'brave'.
The teller's lover is one of those courageous persons. So she feels proud of him.
It's an emotional poem. But, this poetry contains great lessons for us. First, the poet nicely differentiates between 'weak' and 'strong' persons.
Secondly, the 'strong' people can struggle against the adverse situation. So they have a scope to be a winner.
Thirdly, only the winner will get respect, honour and love from other people.
So, the lover feels proud of him.
Finally, nobody will remember the deeds of a loser.
The line I especially like:-
"You went into a cruel battle and fought your way back

You rised from the despicable clutches of evil and survived to tell the tale"

It's an wonderful creation.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In the first chapter, we find Hannah as a central character of the story. Some other characters also play an important role surrounding her, especially Brigette.
It is a mysterious story. It is yet to be solved. But we reckon that there is at least one incident from ancient Greek history that is very closely related to the entire matter.
In an old palace, Hannah selected an attractive room from where she could see
a lucrative island. She wanted to go there. Brigette helped her. But, on that island, her life was in danger. Brunette gave her a painkiller juice. It worked magically. Hannah didn't know the formula of the juice.
Was she gone in past? That is also unknown.
Excellent start. It's full of suspense.
We are waiting for the next chapter.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Princess Daisy will come soon. So, intelligent Toadette tries to collect some information about her. This is Toadette's basic preparation. So, Penelope is the perfect person to collect that information. Penelope helps her to get a few pieces of information about Princess Daisy.
But is it enough? The answer will be received in the next chapter. We are waiting for that chapter eagerly.


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Review of Harukaze  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a wonderful traditional Japanese Haiku that can draw the perfect image of Harukaze, the Spring wind. A pink flower blossoms which beautify nature. That flower was Swaying in the sensual rhythm. Harukaze enters. His sweet winds add a separate dimension. So those flowers can sing their songs.
The description is very lively. It also follows all the required characteristics of an ideal traditional Japanese Haiku should have.
It's a beautiful artistry.
Continue your delightful creation.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
An inhumane torture took place in Toadette. The leader was none other than Penelope. Though in Gambling, she won a handsome money but the torture was truly brutal. There was no scope to take a breath.
After returning to the castle, Her Highness was also waiting to torture further and did it shamelessly.
Toadette heard the news from Her Highness. Princess Daisy would come next to find stolen valuable treasure from the Mushroom City. Her Highness ordered Toadette to help her. Does Toadette become a reliable and faithful servant? This order reflected the same. At least, a hint was there.
What will happen next? We have to wait for the next chapter.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a traditional Japanese Haiku. It follows the syllable rules accurately. The image of a Winter day of nature has been drawn perfectly and lively, too. It is a three-lined unrhymed portry. The selection of words is awesome.
It is a tough but lovely art.
Write on.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a great tribute to true patriots who love the nation and sacrifice their lives for the sake of the National interest. They set some ideal examples in front of us. So those soldiers deserve a Memorial Day tribute definitely from what the poet does perfectly.
We also should follow him and pay the respect that they deserve.
The time demands that poetry.
It's an excellent poetic work.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very important set of quizzes. These answers should be known to every person. Otherwise, how can we be a true religious? This is our basic need.
We may not know all the answers. But, this set of quizzes gives us a scope to increase our religious awareness. So we remain grateful to the author.
God bless everyone.
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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
As per the order of Her Highness, Toadette began to spend time with Penelope. But she couldn't think that she would see the Hell soon. That castle was the paradise of Gambler. Little Princess was also habituated to gambling regularly. Could you imagine that fact? It was unreliable but true.
Toadette felt better if that bitter incident didn't take place.
Anyhow, what will happen next? We are waiting for that.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
We, most of the people, are made a stranger's journey in our world. How many people know their real identity? So, the poet is trying to search for that. It's the most valuable in our life.
What does a real identity mean? It is the identity of our soul, not our body. That means where do I come here? What should I do actually? And most importantly, where should we go? As we are souls, we are directly a part of God. As he creates the souls. Some people reckon that we are a fraction of his body. If we think calmly our relationship with him remains forever.
From real-life experiences, a philosophy has been created that helps us to reach near reality. The poet does the exact thing.
I especially like the last two lines...
"The cock crows like a prophet at dawn,
Arise, and labor awaits."
These couple of lines tell the entire story.
There is nothing to tell about spelling and grammar mistakes.
But, the thinking style of the poet has a positive impact.
I hope to read your poems in this community.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's an excellent poem. The poet wants improvement as a whole. We have some wrong notions about development. People know destructive attitude is the best policy to protest. But, it's a wrong conception. We destroy public and religious properties. Some losses can't be re-paid. So, people lose faith in their fight.
If we peacefully try to settle that problem, a positive outcome is expected. It's obvious. So, try to build an organised and constructive revolt. That will be more fruitful. This main objective of the poem.
Excellent writing.
Write on!


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In this chapter, we see that despite slavery, Toadette gets some space to respite. She meets little Princess Penelope. Her Highness does that interaction. Toadette cleans the feet of the little Princess.
After that, Her Highness gives responsibility to be with Penelope when she is in the garden.
It proves that she is in a good book, Your Highness. Is this the first step to be released? It would be.
Let us wait for the next chapter.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's such poetry that tells us about crossing intentions and breaking the narrative. We, the teller and he meet at that time when the season demands that. Everything is going okay until a dirty deal comes from his side which is full of greediness. But, the teller was not so weak. She doesn't accept that dirty contract.
Her mind was strong and honest. She can think positively. That inspires us to follow the same.
It's an excellent beginning. A bright future is waiting for you. So, utilize the opportunity.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
That rhyming poem looks like pessimistic poetry, but it is the reality. The poet saw life very closely. So, he can understand the last funeral of humanity has been already done. We become selfish and forget how to love conditionally. Only, God who is our guide, can love us without any condition. He will embrace us in his house cordially. This is the one hopeful issue.
It's an excellent poem.
Write on!


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It's truly a rough beginning for the Toadette. As a person, Toadette is not a short structure. But in that city, she is nothing but a doll. Your Highness took her example too thoroughly and that was tough, too. In the end, she selected Toadette as her foot slave. Spending time with a famous person like Your Highness is a dream for everyone. Now, Toadette's had been fulfilled. But, the experiences of the day created a fear about Her Highness. A life of a true slave had been ensured.
What will happen next? I'm waiting for the incoming happenings.


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Review of A Lost Escape  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a simple-looking rhyming poetry that tells the real truth of every life. It is a piece of advice from an experienced person to the teens.
The tendency of our teens to flow the times away idly. But, an experienced person knows the value of time. Once it passes away, that time will never return. So, try to grab all the little little happiness that time gives you. If you let them go, they will never come back. You have no way other than to regret it in the future.
Today you are young, you have enough strength to fight against tougher situations. But, that stamina will be lesser with your age. Your heart will be stronger than it was in the past, but your physical ability does not permit you to do the same. It's a painful situation, but the situation is out of your control. So, real wisdom is not to go away every happy moment. It is an advice, especially to the teens.
The poet gives these tips from his personal experiences to intimate the proper direction of life. From my experiences, I also admit those.
It's a brilliant poem.
Write on!


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Review of The Sirens.  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's an excellent poetry. The Siren songs are sweeter than honey. But we, almost every person, are afraid of it. But why? The poet tries to search for the answer to it.
The siren song is beautiful yet deceptive. It attracts us and do not want our money. Why are we afraid of it? Because it will certainly take our lives. So we feel fear about the Siren songs.
A classic poem.
Write on!


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Who knows, what will happen in my life tomorrow? We can guess it to some extent but an accurate interpretation is almost impossible.
The same thing happened in Toadette's life. Before coming to Toad's town, she couldn't think to be a foot slave. But, Her Highness recruited her as the foot slave.
There is no future for a slave, we know that well. Toadette also knew that. She was an optimistic person. So she was hopeful for her future.
Again, she is the central character of the story. Therefore, there will be some twists that will rescue her.
What will be those? There is no hint about those. With the flow of the story, we must know that.
I'm waiting for the next chapter for further development of the story.
Write on!


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Review of Room 314  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It's a suspenseful short story that has only one character. He is none other than the teller of the story. It is very mysterious. We also can find the flavour of a horror story, too. So it becomes scary.
The teller enters a hotel. But surprisingly, there is not a single person in the desk reception or anywhere. Only an unending silence is there. So, from the beginning, the writer can create enormous suspense.
After a lot of turmoil, the teller can finally reach the allotted room. The room number is 314.
But, after entering the room, he does not get any sort of relief. The situation becomes more scary.
The narrator begins to see some strange sights. Sometimes, he hears some sounds that hammer in his heart and with the growing fear, he starts panicking. He decides to leave that mysterious hotel. But he finds that someone has locked the room from the outside very tightly. Will the teller survive or not? This is the key question. It is a fast-paced story and ends very quickly. That forces me to read it again.
Very compact style of writing.
Continue this performance.


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Review of Hope  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's truly a great rhyme that shows us the way even in the toughest moments. Hope is such a thing. If you see the slightest ray of possibility, it may boost up to overcome all sorts of difficulties. That strength helps you to sort out the problems and takes you to the target which you want to achieve.
On the other side, a hopeless person loses all the energy to come back again. So, that human can't recover from that unwanted situation. So, the journey of that person ended sadly.
What do we learn from these two opposite situations? We must not be hopeless in any stage of life that will extract our entire energy to come back again. We should always remember that there must be some ways to recover what is not in our minds in the present scenario. So, if we think about the problem continuously until getting the solution, we must be successful. We just require patience.
That's a very important lesson of our lives. This poem will give us sufficient inspiration to be positive-minded and hopeful.
It is an artistic creation.
Write on!


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