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Review of Winter Kisses  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! It's a superb romantic scene from the Winter days! Can we expect more Romantic? A kissing image between two lovers makes more sense of romance in the introduction of the snowflakes. That sends them into a frozen fantasy world where only whispers and winter kisses are there.
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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a brilliant poetry for us! Can you read our minds? You tell the truth. WDC is our second home. Where we can get a sigh of relief. There are many creative ideas we can find here and there what helps our creativity. We can share our ideas and feedback, too. Even written and unwritten connection can be sent easily to other friends. Overall, a brilliant atmosphere is here to explore ourselves.
It's an excellent poetry.
Write on!
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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It's a long chapter. How did Minh T and Toadette spend an evening in the Mushroom City? That is very simple, not very important. It just shows that your work can create a huge impact on your attitudes. Toadette and Minh T we're slaves. So, their mentality were very narrow. It was very unfortunate but true.
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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This rhyming poetry is dedicated to her departed soul of twin sisters. When she remained alive, her movements were strictly restricted by the advice of a physician. It was truly a painful life. Everkund God made her free from all sorts of illnesses and sufferings through death. She can go anywhere freely.
The teller felt it from her heart and shared it in the form of emotional poetry. Though there was death it was not so tragic. When someone suffers due to an incurable disease. That death can only give relief to intolerable pains.
Excellent piece of poetic work.
Write on!
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Review of Intro  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Duane Stockwell,
You are truly a creative writer whom everyone wants to read. Writing a novel needs patience and efficiency. It also requires adding some art in the story what time demands. So, the novelist is an artist.
I hope that you will begin one of them chapterwise. I love to read good novels.
I am welcoming you in this literary community.
I'm waiting for your first chapter of a novel.
Keep writing.
With good wishes,
Ashok
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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
The aeroplane was out of control. There was no scope for survival. The pilot did not have the efficiency to handle this type of plane. What would happen? So, Toadette came forward with Minh T. Her leadership did miracles again. They, all passengers, arrived safely in the Mushroom City. Toadette became the heroin. Every toad tried to connect with her.
The chapter was written very dramatically.
What will happen next?
We have to wait for the next chapter.


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Review of Toe in the Water  
for entry "Music to My Ears" 
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Music is such a thing that can easily connect with your heart through the ears. That is the most simplest but effective way to make a connection. It's truly electrifying. So once the heart of the audience catches it, it is not easy to forget. Despite this fact, we hesitate to create a relationship with that musician. Why are we feeling shy? We don't know the answer. But it happens.
It is an excellent observation power.
Write on!
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Review of Closer to older  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poetry is a bit longer but tells the ultimate truth of every life. Her past was not peaceful. But she had to live with those. She is the representative of all humans. Our lives are a mixture of love and hate. All feelings of happiness can't last forever. So we have to stay in pain. But, in each moment, we are getting closer to that moment of everlasting peace.
After death, God embraces our souls, and at that moment, we get everlasting peace. So, wise people always consider death as the beginning of a new part of life which is full of love and
peace.
What thoughtful poetry it is!
Write on!
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Review of Prologue  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The prologue suggested that the novel would be an interesting autobiography of the teller. It was an ancient period's story. Every kingdom liked to control over the neighbourhood kingdom. It was very brutal. They always searched for the weak points of others. To perform they could make joint ventures with the same dirty mentality.
Even, today that dirty politics. So, wise people advise us not to disclose weak points to anybody.
I expect a nice novel.
Write on!

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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
What the scenarios! Toadette and Minh T learned a few lessons for another time. Toadette was a feet slave of Princess Peach. So she behaved roughly with Toadette. Everything that Toadette did on the journey was nothing but her orders. It was quite natural. Being the Highness, the Princess should have control over her servant.
Toadette loved Her Highness's daughter Penelope as her own fairer. She also depended on her. But Penelope also began to use her power on Toadette. Penelope ordered as a Princess, that was remembered by her. Therefore Toadette had to obey those orders. In the chapter, Penelope repeats the same.
Servant and Highness can't make a relationship.
Even today, in the era of democracy, we often bosses get pleasure in harassing the subordinates.
These are important and unavoidable lessons.
Write on!
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Review of Devil magic Blues  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It is truly a wonderful writing effort that tells us how we get Rock N Roll, the parallel music. It's too hard to deliver but the writer does it with perfection. How can music create an impact in our hearts? That item is a perfect example. We have an emotional attachment to music, that much we understand.
It is a great beginning.
Write on!
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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Penelope, Minh T and Toadette returned home safely. But Your Highness ordered them to participate in the Big Star Festival with her. So, preparation began. How did Minh T and Toadette prepare themselves? That is the subject of the chapter. No mentionable happening was there.
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Review of Toadette's Story  
for entry "Chapter 34 - Lady Bow" 
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
After a long long uncertainty, they most probably released. Again, the factor was Toadette. Lady Now wanted her body as a loan for a night. Toadette tolerated that disgusting offer for the sake of other members of the group. After a ten-hour slot, Toadette got back to Penelope and Minh T. Most probably, there was no danger left. Would they be allowed to return home? That type of indication was there.
What will happen next?
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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I reckon this is not a story, it is an outline of a great novel. There is a lot of scope to be an interesting storyline.
Malik is the hero of the story. There was a rumour that his father was a powerful Damon. So, they called him the "Son of a Devil".
Once, a terrible drought struck the village, causing crops to wither and water sources also dry. The villagers were desperate for a solution. Despite their brutal attitudes, kindhearted Malik felt for them and prepared himself to on a journey to find a legendary spring said to possess magical powers.
That was a very hard task. He struggled a lot along the way and became successful.
After his return, none call him the "Son of a Devil".
It is a dramatic, adventure and an emotional story.
I especially like the message which is in the story. Reminding everyone that true strength lies in one's character, not in the rumours. Even, we, the civilised people, also make the same mistake. It is truly unfortunate. I have a further comment to the writer of the story. Please, Split the story into chapters. Then patiently shape those chapters. I hope that will be a good novel.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Penelope, Minh T and Toadette were facing the toughest oppositions in Boo's Mansion. Despite the intelligence of Toadette who won every taught battle, she didn't get any clue about survival. Boos used modern technologies. Ultimately, they squeezed them very tightly.
Would they rescue? We can't understand it. Let us hope for the best.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
We expected an exciting chapter. It fulfilled our expectations. The chapter was full of uncertainty. Anyhow they reached Boo's Mansion but entering was not so easy.
At the last moment. Boo's accepted themselves. But Toadette greeted Your Highness to send them to the Death Mansion.
What will happen next?
We have to wait for the next chapter to know it.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Penelope, Minh T and Toadette began another adventure in the Boo's Mansion in a forever forest. Minh T and Toadette are set in a 360° circular path in the forest. They started their journey in the morning but it was night. But they were rotating in an endless circular way! Was there no way to retrieve it? Suddenly in a few inches distance, Toadette spotted Penelope. They forgot her existence! However, there was no harm done.
Here that chapter ends.
But how would they be rescued from the circular arena? There is no clue. Another exciting chapter is waiting for us.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary peanutbutter

It's a poem of true love. A proper love should be unconditional. That does not mean that you forget that friend who came in time of danger and rescued you. Now you don't need help from that friend. So you refused to know that helper. But, we don't know what role the will play. Suppose you need help of that friend, but after today's denial, can you beg help from him? If you can, you must be shameless.
It's a brilliant beginning.
Keep writing.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary peanutbutter

It's a short but very meaningful poetry. In our lives, friendship is the most valuable gift of God. A fortunate person would have a good friend with whom that human can share self-emotions, both sad and joyful. So, the teller requests the partner to remain a true friend forever.
It is a good emotional poetry.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary James A. Osteen Jr.

It's another crucial piece of poetry by the poet. The Military service gets honoured too high all over the world. It's due to their sacrifice and moral values which they generally maintain.
Due to the popularity of the Military, many young star wants to be in the Military. But, it is not so easy task. Before involving in this service, one should go through a hard training period. Once you pass, you will be in a most prestigious national job.
Inspiration is there to be a Military.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary James A. Osteen Jr.

It's another wonderful creation by the poet. With the increasing population, if you don't arrange it before the prior time, your travelling date may be delayed. So, the travelling business has flourished all through the world. The poet is pointing out the facts and inspires us to grab this new job opportunity. There is ample scope for earning in an honest but challenging way.
This poetry shows us an alternative route to achieving success.
Write on!


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Review of The Poet  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary James A. Osteen Jr.

It is the true story of every poet's life. If there is a piece of paper and a pen in the poet's hand, he begins with his creations. Where does he collect those ideas? From daily life experiences. So, readers reckon that these rhymes are their daily lives.
One day, the poet passes away but remains immortal for creation in our hearts forever.
It's a great poetry.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary Samberine Everose

Can any human control natural calamities? It's impossible. So, in those needy moments, Military personnel come to rescue us from certain death. Therefore, they become heroes of us. Not only that but their activities inspire the upcoming generations to be Military as a career.
It's an excellent poetry.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary Samberine Everose

It is one of the best rhyming poetry ever read. Our all ideas are always true and correct, but we often do not succeed. Why? Because we don't perform it correctly. We should maintain a middle-of-the-road voice, which we can't. We need to re-use our old ideas to perform a new one. Just the use of wisdom is required for it. It is simple. It's truly an inspiration to do a lot within our limitations.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In this chapter, we saw Minh T and Toadette lived a topical slavish life. There was no scope for respite! Her Highness never felt for her servants. Even in modern days, we often see subordinates are deprived by the higher authority. But it can't be endless in the Democratic environment whereas in the Kingdom, it was endless.


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