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Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It's an excellent poem. The poet wants improvement as a whole. We have some wrong notions about development. People know destructive attitude is the best policy to protest. But, it's a wrong conception. We destroy public and religious properties. Some losses can't be re-paid. So, people lose faith in their fight.
If we peacefully try to settle that problem, a positive outcome is expected. It's obvious. So, try to build an organised and constructive revolt. That will be more fruitful. This main objective of the poem.
Excellent writing.
Write on!


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In this chapter, we see that despite slavery, Toadette gets some space to respite. She meets little Princess Penelope. Her Highness does that interaction. Toadette cleans the feet of the little Princess.
After that, Her Highness gives responsibility to be with Penelope when she is in the garden.
It proves that she is in a good book, Your Highness. Is this the first step to be released? It would be.
Let us wait for the next chapter.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's such poetry that tells us about crossing intentions and breaking the narrative. We, the teller and he meet at that time when the season demands that. Everything is going okay until a dirty deal comes from his side which is full of greediness. But, the teller was not so weak. She doesn't accept that dirty contract.
Her mind was strong and honest. She can think positively. That inspires us to follow the same.
It's an excellent beginning. A bright future is waiting for you. So, utilize the opportunity.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
That rhyming poem looks like pessimistic poetry, but it is the reality. The poet saw life very closely. So, he can understand the last funeral of humanity has been already done. We become selfish and forget how to love conditionally. Only, God who is our guide, can love us without any condition. He will embrace us in his house cordially. This is the one hopeful issue.
It's an excellent poem.
Write on!


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It's truly a rough beginning for the Toadette. As a person, Toadette is not a short structure. But in that city, she is nothing but a doll. Your Highness took her example too thoroughly and that was tough, too. In the end, she selected Toadette as her foot slave. Spending time with a famous person like Your Highness is a dream for everyone. Now, Toadette's had been fulfilled. But, the experiences of the day created a fear about Her Highness. A life of a true slave had been ensured.
What will happen next? I'm waiting for the incoming happenings.


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Review of A Lost Escape  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a simple-looking rhyming poetry that tells the real truth of every life. It is a piece of advice from an experienced person to the teens.
The tendency of our teens to flow the times away idly. But, an experienced person knows the value of time. Once it passes away, that time will never return. So, try to grab all the little little happiness that time gives you. If you let them go, they will never come back. You have no way other than to regret it in the future.
Today you are young, you have enough strength to fight against tougher situations. But, that stamina will be lesser with your age. Your heart will be stronger than it was in the past, but your physical ability does not permit you to do the same. It's a painful situation, but the situation is out of your control. So, real wisdom is not to go away every happy moment. It is an advice, especially to the teens.
The poet gives these tips from his personal experiences to intimate the proper direction of life. From my experiences, I also admit those.
It's a brilliant poem.
Write on!


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Review of The Sirens.  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's an excellent poetry. The Siren songs are sweeter than honey. But we, almost every person, are afraid of it. But why? The poet tries to search for the answer to it.
The siren song is beautiful yet deceptive. It attracts us and do not want our money. Why are we afraid of it? Because it will certainly take our lives. So we feel fear about the Siren songs.
A classic poem.
Write on!


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Who knows, what will happen in my life tomorrow? We can guess it to some extent but an accurate interpretation is almost impossible.
The same thing happened in Toadette's life. Before coming to Toad's town, she couldn't think to be a foot slave. But, Her Highness recruited her as the foot slave.
There is no future for a slave, we know that well. Toadette also knew that. She was an optimistic person. So she was hopeful for her future.
Again, she is the central character of the story. Therefore, there will be some twists that will rescue her.
What will be those? There is no hint about those. With the flow of the story, we must know that.
I'm waiting for the next chapter for further development of the story.
Write on!


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Review of Room 314  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It's a suspenseful short story that has only one character. He is none other than the teller of the story. It is very mysterious. We also can find the flavour of a horror story, too. So it becomes scary.
The teller enters a hotel. But surprisingly, there is not a single person in the desk reception or anywhere. Only an unending silence is there. So, from the beginning, the writer can create enormous suspense.
After a lot of turmoil, the teller can finally reach the allotted room. The room number is 314.
But, after entering the room, he does not get any sort of relief. The situation becomes more scary.
The narrator begins to see some strange sights. Sometimes, he hears some sounds that hammer in his heart and with the growing fear, he starts panicking. He decides to leave that mysterious hotel. But he finds that someone has locked the room from the outside very tightly. Will the teller survive or not? This is the key question. It is a fast-paced story and ends very quickly. That forces me to read it again.
Very compact style of writing.
Continue this performance.


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Review of Hope  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's truly a great rhyme that shows us the way even in the toughest moments. Hope is such a thing. If you see the slightest ray of possibility, it may boost up to overcome all sorts of difficulties. That strength helps you to sort out the problems and takes you to the target which you want to achieve.
On the other side, a hopeless person loses all the energy to come back again. So, that human can't recover from that unwanted situation. So, the journey of that person ended sadly.
What do we learn from these two opposite situations? We must not be hopeless in any stage of life that will extract our entire energy to come back again. We should always remember that there must be some ways to recover what is not in our minds in the present scenario. So, if we think about the problem continuously until getting the solution, we must be successful. We just require patience.
That's a very important lesson of our lives. This poem will give us sufficient inspiration to be positive-minded and hopeful.
It is an artistic creation.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a thoughtful poem that tells us how we create love. How can we control our greediness? How can we build a cordial relationship with nature? These questions are very crucial for leading a happy and healthy lifestyle. These are described here in the poetry.
The poet draws some images of nature. It is artistic. Whether we want or not, we can deny the contribution of Mother Nature. From her, we take oxygen and ground for strides. These two are fundamental things to live a life. Without the love of near and dear ones, can we survive? No. That is also explained here.
Good writing.
Write on!


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Toadette joined as a foot slave to Princess Peach for a permanent job. She came from a poor society. So, it is a difficult task to adjust there. Her life becomes hectic. She has to opt for the erotic ride. She has no alternative.
How will be those experiences? We have to wait for the next chapters to know that.
That beginning creates suspense for the incoming story. That's great.
Continue...


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
We, all people, are struggling tremendously. Sorrow comes into our lives in various forms. It is quite obvious.
Who and how can we save from those unwanted sufferings? Only God can save us. He remains always merciful to his children. So he must protect us from the incoming dangers. Therefore, a devoted person is always rescued by the Lord Jesus. This is the rule of law. Just pray for the Almighty's mercy. You will enjoy an undying youth.
It's an excellent poem.
Write on!


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Review of A Visual Echo  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's simply a great Echo Poem. When we go to a lonely place. That place should be soundless. The slow wind is passing only. That creates echo mainly the last word which creates another meaning to us. That has been drawn beautifully by the poet with a few selected words that ask some meaningful questions to our inner 'I'.
It is an excellent creation.
Write on!


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Review of Witch's Soul  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's an exceptional attempt. It tells us about witchcraft, witches, the Divine, and feminine rage. Our souls are always restricted by the divine knowledge of the Goddess of the Moon. So that knowledge is real. We want to know who am I. We are souls. So we are immortal. As souls can't die. So, reclaim your archetypal, cosmic, right as a divine feminine to thrive. The ignorant non-believers in this power suffer a lot.
It's an excellent poem.
Write on!


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Review of Lost Umbrella  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a nice and compact story that forces me to read it several times. Lily is the central character of the story. She lost her favourite umbrella on a rainy day. Lily searched for it but luckily did not find her lovely yellow umbrella here and there. As much as she loved that umbrella, she didn't think to replace it. So, that rainy season passed away without an umbrella.
On another day, she observed her umbrella in a cafe. She rushed there and got back to her favourite umbrella. A kind man rescued that and stored the umbrella if anybody searched there. Lily remained truly grateful to that unknown man for his kindness.
Now she holds that umbrella tightly as it has no scope to lose further.
Nice entertaining story. I enjoy it very much.
We get two important lessons. First, a few people may be corrupted but not. Many kind-hearted people make the world beautiful.
Secondly, we get another less. Always remain conscious. Otherwise, you may have to pay heavily.
We should try to follow those lessons.
Write on!


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Review of For Her  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
Rated: E | (5.0)
What an attractive beginning for a newbie writer! Though it is tiny in size, it's extensively romantic. That romanticism is applied to her.
She was also passionate about him and what we understood from the conversation. It is a positive sign that inspires them to maintain a lovely partnership.


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Review of Time  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a great rhyme about time which has been written with tremendous competency. Time has enormous value in our lives. It's flowing in his self-speed. He is merciless and waits for nobody. So, the wise persons never misuse time. They always try to utilise it to the maximum level.
It is a brilliant poetry.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a nice little poetry about the self-garden of the teller. We can see the most precious winds and can get the floral and clay essence of the garden as the beautiful descriptions are.
A sweet and attractive image of nature has been drawn. That indicates that Spring is coming up with her beauty.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this poem, we can see the reflection of our real-life experiences. It is truly brilliant. At the time of birth, we compete, some of them are healthy, rest are unhealthy. But competition is always going on.
In this way, we gain something but lose many, too. Some friends and relatives disappear from our lives due to conflict of our opinions. That is sad but we have to tolerate those. But, some dear and nears are no more in the world. It is truly pathetic. We mourn for them. But, there is no way to retain them except for our memories. The poet touches on that point softly.
With our age, we lose our activity. The Red and Green colours go away at this age. Only Blue and Black remain in our lives. Blue is a symbol of poison. That is the pain an old person feels. Whereas 'Black' indicates the hopeless situations of a life.
But it will happen in almost every life. So be mentally prepared for incoming tough days which will help you feel less pain.
This is the true story of every life.
Write on!
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Review by Ashok Banerjee
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's not only an entertaining creation but also an excellent satire. Parody in the style of Weird Al. This time is for those who especially love the VAST and HUNGRY guys.
Through this satire, the poet expresses a burning issue. A fatty person faces a lot of troubles but can't change their self-attitude. He presented one of the saddest problems in the wrap of humour.


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Review of The Promise  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
Rated: E | (5.0)
We live in today and don't know what will happen tomorrow. This is the mystery of life that makes us optimistic.
In this poetry, there are two men. They are separated due to unwanted circumstances. But they keep their promise. Their separation can not force them away from the promise. That is true gentlemanship.
That is the beauty of the poem.
Write on!


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Review of Cockroach  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a wonderful snapshot of a night. We can see a scene lively. The cockroach, a little bug, is watching us minutely. Fear psychosis is such that can cause any kind of panic. A few of my past experiences were witness of those. We laugh but they can't.
That family also has that kind of fear psychosis. So they are panicking.
It's extremely well written.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a wonderful rhyming poem about a stray cat and a silly dog with two people. It's mainly written for children but adult readers also can take lessons from it.
It's a simple incident that shows us how to adjust to a bit unfavourable situation. This lesson should be learned by kids and aged persons.
The expression is simple but striking and needs the hours.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a great forum, especially for the newbies. They can get guidance and advice about reviewing. What can they want more? That's a great opportunity for us.
I reckon that every newbie should utilise that golden chance gleefully. But, even other members who seek help with their review can also ask for review help.
In the end, it will possibly be a popular forum soon
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