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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Princess Daisy went away to that Kingdom in a private aeroplane from where she came from. The journey commenced from the Rooftop of the castle. But before the time of the departure, the Princess expressed her affection to Toadette and gave some tokens to Toadette. She could feel that Princess Daisy had some softness to her. It has an emotional end.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Toadette knew very well how cruel Princess Daisy was. So, when Princess was in deep trouble, she thought to see the result from a safe distance. Again Toadette thought, Princess Daisy should get a chance for rectification and enter into the small war.
At last, General Guy lost but not before he made everybody wounded and tired. He promised to help the Army with those shy guys. They had a beautiful scope to mainstream lives.
Will Princess Daisy change herself or not? That's the question of millions of dollars.
We have to wait for the next chapter.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
When the ruler becomes arrogant and does not care about the general public, a few gangs of anti-social elements become active. Through violence, they can't do anything good for society and are ultimately destroyed.
Princess Daisy was that kind of ruler and shy guys were that anti-social elements.
Toadette's brilliance worked once again and through Penelope, she rescued first. Then saved everyone.
Princess Daisy was happy to get back her favourite ball again.
That's a beautiful way to teach us about the influence of the ruler in our society.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Toadette was arrested and sent to a supreme darkroom by the shy guys. There was none to help her. She was intelligent and confident. So she was starting to find the way without getting nervous. The shy guys were strong but not intelligent. Toadette capitalized on this opportunity and came with the golden ball of Princess Daisy.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary Dave Ryan

It's another wonderful piece of poetry that is written by the poet Tim Chiu. From his personal experiences, he realized that a successful career was required for self-motivation and improvement. The success of the company and your career are co-related to each other. So, forget your bitter experiences and disappointments and stay focused on your new goals which will give you fame and respect.
That is the best way to inspire us in the new target-orientated market policy.
It's a brilliant effort.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary Dave Ryan

It's great poetry by the poet. Here, he mixed his experiences, philosophy of life and political motivation nicely. It is no doubt a superior, refreshed and developed report that must show us the way to achieve goals as a team, not for personal success. So, this free-verse poetry inspires us to grow up socially but not individually which is the prime importance of fantastic poetry.
The style of writing is awesome.
Write on!


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Review of Addiction  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Happy Anniversary Dave Ryan

It's a great beginning. Our life is a battlefield. From our birth, it begins and will be ended at the time of death. We have to fight for everything. There is no scope to take some rest. So, many people try to find relief from the addiction. That may come in various forms. It is a wrong step but tired humans often cherish them. They have to pay heavily later. Fortunately, some people don't repeat this mistake, they become winners. The poet wants to show us the truths of life.
Suggestions
Concentrate on selecting your genres. Through genres, we can understand the subject or theme of the writing. It is impossible to understand anything from
'None'genres. So be careful about selecting genres.
Your style of writing is brilliant.
Carry on this performance.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It is an extremely exciting chapter. The group of four, Princess Daisy, Penelope, Minh T and Toadette, were going to fight against the Shy guys. That would be a difficult task, they knew it. But they did not expect those guys to follow them from the beginning of the train journey. Minh T was the betrayed! Maybe or maybe not! The answer is unclear. But Penelope had been rescued after a tough fight. Toadette fought lonely against four shy guys. She made two of them wounded first. But, they combined trapped her. Would she be rescued?
The chapter ended with this vital question.
What will happen next?
We have to wait for the next chapter.


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Review of Shoes Are Fun  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: E | (5.0)

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Happy Anniversary SandraLynn Team Florent!

A child, especially a baby, gradually interacts with the rest of the world with wonder. In this poetry, a child expresses what a shoe is! The child can differentiate the what is his shoes, his father's shoes and his mother's shoes through sound and activities. What an innovative idea that has been beautifully described by the poet.
It's an awesome creation.
Write on!


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It's also an interesting chapter. The troupe of four, Princess Daisy, Penelope, Minh T and Toadette, realized that they should practice hard if they threw a meaningful challenge against the shy guys. They began to prepare themselves and mainly concentrated on foot exercises.
Princess Daisy wisely advised her mate to concentrate on boxing, too. Shy guys were experts on that.
We also saw that Toadette and Penelope's relationship turned into a new route. She began to see Penelope as her child.
What will happen next?
Is there anything dramatic?
We have to wait for the next chapter.


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Review of Liminal  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a very thoughtful free-verse poetry that tells about an intuition which can be earned from that kind of experience only.
Loneliness is a curse. Therefore, the person screams silently for a friend to share their feelings. But, that pain remains untold. So, that human has to live a lonely life.
We often face many obstructions in our lives. It is quite obvious. Sometimes, our critical psychology doesn't allow to settle us again.
But, in the end, the poet adds a positive message for us. God lives inside our hearts as an eternal soul. He can not leave us. He will accompany us. That must inspire us to be a devotee of the Almighty.
It's an excellent beginning.
Keep writing.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It's another chapter that gives us clues about the future happenings! The environment of the palace was too erratic. So Toadette suffered heavily. Again, there was a hint of shy guys. Most probably, we would find them in an important role. What will be that? We can't predict. We should keep our patience to know that.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
After the dramatic incidents, the four ladies came back safely to the hotel. Princess Daisy took care of Toadette. She saw that Toadette ate nothing. So she sent the rest of the food to Toadette through Penelope and discussed Toadette's past life. It was sad but that discussion helped to heal the pains which she carried in her heart.
At the same time, Princess Daisy came closer to Toadette.
It is an important chapter.
What will happen next?
We have to wait for the next chapter. Something special will be waiting for us!
Let's see.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary Sharmelle's Expressions

If God proposes, any person can't dispose. This is proved once again in this chapter. Despite several life-taking occurrences, they came out safely. Of course, the credit went to Toadette once again. But came back from an utter instruction. She could get back
that crown of Princess Daisy. A laborious but successful day passed away.
What will happen next? We can't predict.
I hope some exciting moments are waiting for us. Can we see any of them in the next chapter?


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's truly a fantastic creation. It is a perfect love poem. The teller honestly loves his lover whom he calls Princess. He has many precious things in his life, but not comparable with her. Everything fades in front of her. So, the obsessed teller doesn't want to remember those. His life is surrounded by her. He loved her very much in the past. It is continuing now at present and he will love her forever in future, too, until death. That emotion of love is real and true. I must admire it.
Suggestion
We can not see dressing in the genre 'LGBTQ+'. If you replace it with 'Relationship' that will be more meaningful.
It's an excellent poetic expression.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: E | (5.0)

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It's great poetry where the poet tells us about the sense of purpose. What is this 'sense of purpose'? It's simple but urgent. It is undoubtedly an emotion. How can we achieve this? There are many steps. First, we need to realise whether it is possible for me or not. We often dream of achieving many things. Only a few of them can be earned. So, a correct assessment is required you can do this or not. If you can, you should begin your training with an experienced trainer. Continuous learning and practice will give you perfection. That's called a professional approach which is necessary to fulfil your goal in life.
It has been written wonderfully.
Write on!


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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It's truly a chapter that is full of excitement. Princess Daisy, Penelope, Minh T and Toadette went for the dessert visit. They saw the mysterious place where those guys probably resided. Except, for Minh T, they all entered there that place operated with highly scientific knowledge. Princess and Toadette went through an escalated floor. They became slightly wounded. Ultimately, Princess ordered Toadette to attack them forcefully.
What will happen then? We have to wait for the next chapter.




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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Princess Daisy, Penelope, Minh T and Toadette took shelter in a hotel which was not so comfortable. It was not luxurious except Air-conditioned facility. In a single room, four small beds. There was no scope for privacy. On that room, Minh T massaged Toadette's whole body through her bare feet. Was her intention to make Toadette fit again or make her more unfit? We will get the answer in next chapter.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It's truly a fantastic poetry. But, there is little confusion about whether it is a perfect Haiku or not. It deals with the season. This is the beauty of Mother Nature. It's a characteristic of a Haiku. But ultimately, it draws an image of our heart. That is a characteristic of an ideal Senryu, not a Haiku. So it is a traditional Japanese Senryu.
However, it is undoubtedly a good tiny poetry. That effort impressed me a lot.
Carry on this wonderful performance.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
The original Queen Marissa, the popular and honest Queen, has come back again. the reactions of the general people are naturally positive and joyful. They were disgusted by the torture of false Queen Oliva. They want their old Queen. But, there was no democracy. They could not elect their ruler by the voting system. So, they have no other alternative to be chosen.
But, some intellectuals become active in saving those people and their motherland. This is their duty. Their cordial help makes the task easier for Queen Marissa to come back again to reestablish the peace.
In the modern day, the intellectuals are also the key factors of the society. Their strong protest against the improper policy of the government can help to withdraw that policy.
Every character is executed properly.
However, some pockets are not relevant. It hampers the pace. Although those do not affect much.
It's a good presentation.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a superb writing effort. It's very interesting and has a lovely experience to read due to its funny representation. The writer of this journal applies comedy to establish his very serious writing attempt. It gains tremendous readability. I can not find any pocket where the pace is hampered. Technically it is a classic effort.
What is the message which is hiding in that journal? This is the most crucial question. When that well-known student of science, mainly in nuclear physics, intimated that The universe is about to collapse after 22 billion years. None become happy. What is the reason behind it?
There are two types of people. One is frustrated for some reason. They don't want to live long. Can they be happy to hear this? If they know, the universe will be destroyed within 22 days, that will make them happy. So, they become unhappy as usual.
Others also remain unhappy. They lead a happy life. The universe will remain intact for 22 billion years! But they can not survive more than 100 years. It's a great pain to them. How can they tolerate this? As a result, they all ignored that student.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It's a wonderful Flash Fiction that has been written with the inspiration of Lauren Alaina's song of the same name as the title.
Though entire things are presented in a wrap of comedy and smiling mood. But, is it such an easy matter? I don't think so. The philosophy of adopting less travelled road may create danger in our lives. We all know that. But we tend to adopt the shortcut route. We often deny safe but longer distances. That may invite the cause of fatal danger. It's a very vital issue. The writer enlightened on this serious problem. Aa Flash Fiction follows all those characteristics which Flash Fiction should follow.
It's a conversation between two people, the teller and his coworker.
From the beginning they always straight towards the end with a smooth pace which gives awesome readability, too.
As a whole, it's simply a brilliant performance.
Write on!


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Review of I Want You 2  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a beautiful description of the Summer's natural beauty. I understand that the area belongs to a hot and humid region where southern winds remain active at that specific time. The teller with his daughter are enjoying the environment very much. The eyes of the daughter tell a distant tale which does not follow that part of the universe. But, the narrator understands that leave should be taken as early as possible to enjoy the beauty of the Summer.
But there is an aura that acts in the minds of the teller. Is his life on the proper track or not? It's the most important question. He tries to search for the answer. At last, he gets the answer that he is on the correct route.
"Summer's kiss upon my skin" has been beautifully symbolized. That wind indicates we have to adjust ourselves to the nature of the universe if we want to live a joyful life.
It is an extraordinary finish.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a truly wonderful poem based on the uncertain lives of fishermen. Suppose we read an adventure story which is full of suspense and drama.
Those fishermen watched that milky shadow that was furious and could send them to Hell. The face of fishermen's
turned ashen, white, and pallid,
The teller's chin trembled, as he was frozen to the spot.
The massive tail rose and hammered down on the water with a thunderous roar, freezing sprays rained down.
A seagull's cry broke their coma. They understood that they saved. I decided to return. They would tell the story. Will they believe it or not? This is a tough question. Only time know the answer to it.
I especially like how classically the poet used the 'Drama' genre in this poetry. The poet created an example of how to use suspense in the poetry.
Undoubtedly, fishermen struggled too hard to earn. Sometimes they return in void hand. Don't you find any similarity in our lives? We set a target to fulfil.
We get success so often. But, after a few moments, failure embraces us. Is not comparable to the life of fishermen?
It is an excellent attempt.
Write on!




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Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I very much like this Trnket page. There must be a reason for this. Almost every Trinket tells a story. You may create a poem easily through these Trinkets. Though it needsPrincess Megan Rose 22 Years 's permission. It is the source of creativity. I must appreciate the effort.
I hope that your ideas will enrich us in future, too.


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