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Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: E | (5.0)

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It's great poetry where the poet tells us about the sense of purpose. What is this 'sense of purpose'? It's simple but urgent. It is undoubtedly an emotion. How can we achieve this? There are many steps. First, we need to realise whether it is possible for me or not. We often dream of achieving many things. Only a few of them can be earned. So, a correct assessment is required you can do this or not. If you can, you should begin your training with an experienced trainer. Continuous learning and practice will give you perfection. That's called a professional approach which is necessary to fulfil your goal in life.
It has been written wonderfully.
Write on!


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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It's truly a chapter that is full of excitement. Princess Daisy, Penelope, Minh T and Toadette went for the dessert visit. They saw the mysterious place where those guys probably resided. Except, for Minh T, they all entered there that place operated with highly scientific knowledge. Princess and Toadette went through an escalated floor. They became slightly wounded. Ultimately, Princess ordered Toadette to attack them forcefully.
What will happen then? We have to wait for the next chapter.




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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Princess Daisy, Penelope, Minh T and Toadette took shelter in a hotel which was not so comfortable. It was not luxurious except Air-conditioned facility. In a single room, four small beds. There was no scope for privacy. On that room, Minh T massaged Toadette's whole body through her bare feet. Was her intention to make Toadette fit again or make her more unfit? We will get the answer in next chapter.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's truly a fantastic poetry. But, there is little confusion about whether it is a perfect Haiku or not. It deals with the season. This is the beauty of Mother Nature. It's a characteristic of a Haiku. But ultimately, it draws an image of our heart. That is a characteristic of an ideal Senryu, not a Haiku. So it is a traditional Japanese Senryu.
However, it is undoubtedly a good tiny poetry. That effort impressed me a lot.
Carry on this wonderful performance.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
The original Queen Marissa, the popular and honest Queen, has come back again. the reactions of the general people are naturally positive and joyful. They were disgusted by the torture of false Queen Oliva. They want their old Queen. But, there was no democracy. They could not elect their ruler by the voting system. So, they have no other alternative to be chosen.
But, some intellectuals become active in saving those people and their motherland. This is their duty. Their cordial help makes the task easier for Queen Marissa to come back again to reestablish the peace.
In the modern day, the intellectuals are also the key factors of the society. Their strong protest against the improper policy of the government can help to withdraw that policy.
Every character is executed properly.
However, some pockets are not relevant. It hampers the pace. Although those do not affect much.
It's a good presentation.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a superb writing effort. It's very interesting and has a lovely experience to read due to its funny representation. The writer of this journal applies comedy to establish his very serious writing attempt. It gains tremendous readability. I can not find any pocket where the pace is hampered. Technically it is a classic effort.
What is the message which is hiding in that journal? This is the most crucial question. When that well-known student of science, mainly in nuclear physics, intimated that The universe is about to collapse after 22 billion years. None become happy. What is the reason behind it?
There are two types of people. One is frustrated for some reason. They don't want to live long. Can they be happy to hear this? If they know, the universe will be destroyed within 22 days, that will make them happy. So, they become unhappy as usual.
Others also remain unhappy. They lead a happy life. The universe will remain intact for 22 billion years! But they can not survive more than 100 years. It's a great pain to them. How can they tolerate this? As a result, they all ignored that student.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It's a wonderful Flash Fiction that has been written with the inspiration of Lauren Alaina's song of the same name as the title.
Though entire things are presented in a wrap of comedy and smiling mood. But, is it such an easy matter? I don't think so. The philosophy of adopting less travelled road may create danger in our lives. We all know that. But we tend to adopt the shortcut route. We often deny safe but longer distances. That may invite the cause of fatal danger. It's a very vital issue. The writer enlightened on this serious problem. Aa Flash Fiction follows all those characteristics which Flash Fiction should follow.
It's a conversation between two people, the teller and his coworker.
From the beginning they always straight towards the end with a smooth pace which gives awesome readability, too.
As a whole, it's simply a brilliant performance.
Write on!


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Review of I Want You 2  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a beautiful description of the Summer's natural beauty. I understand that the area belongs to a hot and humid region where southern winds remain active at that specific time. The teller with his daughter are enjoying the environment very much. The eyes of the daughter tell a distant tale which does not follow that part of the universe. But, the narrator understands that leave should be taken as early as possible to enjoy the beauty of the Summer.
But there is an aura that acts in the minds of the teller. Is his life on the proper track or not? It's the most important question. He tries to search for the answer. At last, he gets the answer that he is on the correct route.
"Summer's kiss upon my skin" has been beautifully symbolized. That wind indicates we have to adjust ourselves to the nature of the universe if we want to live a joyful life.
It is an extraordinary finish.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a truly wonderful poem based on the uncertain lives of fishermen. Suppose we read an adventure story which is full of suspense and drama.
Those fishermen watched that milky shadow that was furious and could send them to Hell. The face of fishermen's
turned ashen, white, and pallid,
The teller's chin trembled, as he was frozen to the spot.
The massive tail rose and hammered down on the water with a thunderous roar, freezing sprays rained down.
A seagull's cry broke their coma. They understood that they saved. I decided to return. They would tell the story. Will they believe it or not? This is a tough question. Only time know the answer to it.
I especially like how classically the poet used the 'Drama' genre in this poetry. The poet created an example of how to use suspense in the poetry.
Undoubtedly, fishermen struggled too hard to earn. Sometimes they return in void hand. Don't you find any similarity in our lives? We set a target to fulfil.
We get success so often. But, after a few moments, failure embraces us. Is not comparable to the life of fishermen?
It is an excellent attempt.
Write on!




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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I very much like this Trnket page. There must be a reason for this. Almost every Trinket tells a story. You may create a poem easily through these Trinkets. Though it needsPrincess Megan Rose 22 Years 's permission. It is the source of creativity. I must appreciate the effort.
I hope that your ideas will enrich us in future, too.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It's another side-story chapter, not have much impact on the main story. But this chapter shows us again how much patience Toadette has.
Toadette and Minh T were permitted to anywhere. Princess Daisy applied a simple condition to come back within half an hour time.
Minh T did the damage. She went to magician Merlee's house with Toadette. That lady magician forced them to perform the feet-cleaning job. Ultimately, the Toadette's common sense saved them.
There was a repayment contract done.
What will happen next?
We don't predict but waiting for the next chapter.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It is expected that desert land will not be easy. But, these kinds of difficulties one after another is truly unexpected.
First, baby Penelope felt sick in hot conditions. So, Toadette had to carry her for the rest of the journey.
Secondly, they fell into a trap by criminal gangs. They tried to take their lives. They were rescued due to the intelligence of Toadette. That incident made her the most dependable person of Princess Daisy.
Finally, they were rescued from that life-taking danger. What will happen next? The answer is unknown. We are waiting for the next chapter.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In this chapter, we can see that these four go from Toad Town to Mt. Rugged through a train journey. It's a desert. So, suffering is inevitable. They all begin to suffer. The environment is too hot and dry. So, thrusting is an obvious trouble. What will happen now? Interesting desert experiences most probably come in the next chapter. How will be they? We have to wait for the next chapter.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a fantastic short story based on ancient Indian culture. But the messages are true forever.
It's a bit dramatic. But, the length and number of characters are minimal.
Once upon a time in India, A kingdom named Bharanipur. The ruler was King Ripudaman. He was intelligent and honest. But, Prince Vats was completely the opposite in behaviour.
There was a powerful sage named Bhadra who lived with his wife and daughter in this Kingdom. In the festival of spring, Rishibala and Prince met each other. They fell in love at first sight. But, he left Rishibala alone.
After consultation with the wife, Bhadra decided to meet the Prince. The Prince denied knowing Rishibala. Sage cursed him for losing his youth. He immediately lost his youth and became old. Prince several times requested to forgive the curse. Sage also felt mercy but, there was no way to take back the curse. But there was a way of rescuing, it was time-consuming. But there was no way to accept it. What is that condition? If the Prince continuously adopted honesty for seven years, he would be relieved from the curse.
Even after seven years, he always maintained a disciplined life.
There are a few messages.
First, if you are a dishonest person, you have to pay heavily for your deeds.
Secondly, it gives an idea of ideal punishment. The punishment that can rectify a person, is the ideal punishment.
The pace of the short story is fast and appreciable. That gives an awesome readability.
It's truly an impressive performance.
Write on!


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This chapter has a little importance. Princess Daisy, Penelope and Toadette came to Minh T's shop where Minh T took care of Penelope's feet. Toadette intimated to her what they were searching for. Minh T also said that she saw a man with a Crown who went towards the Southern part.
After listening to that, Princess Daisy offered her to join this small group. She had any doubts about Minh T or if there was any other purpose. That remained undisclosed. But Minh T became a member of the group.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's very thoughtful poetry about our moral objectives. We should always be going towards a bright and prosperous future. Our desires demand so. But, we opt for the wrong path. The poet tries to show us the same through this. The valuable times passed away. Our target becomes tougher with every ongoing moment. But, it is not possible to achieve our dreams though not an easy task. We should attempt wholeheartedly. Hope, the result must be positive.
Now, our time demands these sorts of inspirations.
To the improvement of our society, this type of dedication is needed.
Write on!


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Review of Haiku #65  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a pure traditional Japanese Haiku. Through this beautiful Haiku, the poet wants to create an image which tells the situation of birds just before the winter season. The poet observed it correctly and that experience applied in the poetry perfectly.
The other characteristics of an ideal Japanese Haiku are also followed.
Overall, a brilliant poetic effort.
Write on!


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This chapter does not contain the main story. It is a side story. Princess Daisy, Penelope and Toadette entered the bus from the castle bus stop. The journey began. A child, a boy, started to disturb them. His mother didn't try to stop him which she should.
Princess Daisy observed that and punished her mother for her inaction. From her, Princess cleaned the feet of the entire group.
The chapter teaches us some lessons.
First, a child may do something wrong unintentionally. The parent must correct the behaviour. Otherwise, that parent has to pay heavily.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a very vital chapter, especially for Toadette. Being a slave, she knew, that she was a valueless person. But what did she see now? Two Princesses were fighting between them for the Toadette? Unbelievable. It was a big consolation for her.
That is the importance of the chapter.
What will happen next?
We have to wait for the next chapter.


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Review of Six word memoirs  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is true meaningful poetry that is taken from our real life. Some memoirs are inspired but some don't. Those make us bored. So we lose enthusiasm to do anything, either positive or negative. So our consciousness goes to sleep. It's very tough to awaken again. But there is no alternative way to avoid the lanes of life if you wish to lead a prosperous life. Therefore, we awake as fast as possible.


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
If we watched minutely, we would observe that the relationship between Princess Daisy and Toadette became easier. Is that the way to recover from the Hell? It is very early to predict anything. But, a possibility is growing.
Princess Daisy told the internal story of her life, the relationship between her and Peach. It's a very personal matter. If she didn't feel closeness with Todette, she would not tell those. It proved, that a soft corner about Toadette might be growing in her heart.
It's an excellent turn.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It's truly a fantastic forum. This forum is dedicated to spreading literature. Every month, it highlights a few contests but not activities. That makes the forum unique in characteristics. It will help people to be aware of various contests of WDC.
Brilliant effort.
It should be continued.
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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
It's a perfect image of nature that we generally see in Autumn season. In a forest, we often witness that type of scenario.
The Red and Golden crunchy leaves imprinting the forest floor. That scene is very common but expressing that in this fantastic way must be admirable.
Most importantly it attains all the characteristics of an ideal Haiku. That's a truly awesome performance.
Write on!


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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
We saw previously, that the Royal members of the Castle are big but their hearts were as small as possible. Princess Daisy was one of them.
But Princess kept her word of feet messaging. She had a broader heart. So she massaged the feet of Toadette without any sort of hesitation.
It's truly wonderful.
What will happen next? Only the next chapter can tell that.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Almost every person faced the most difficult time in their life when that human needed true advice from a person but didn't get it. The loneliness was caused by suffering.
Everything was looking dark. No lane of life couldn't be seen. Now, our hearts cordially wanted the support of a guide. But all wishes of our lives can't be fulfilled.
If you don't lose your calmness, you must see the bright lights again in front of your eyes. Just keep your patience.
It's an excellent and thoughtful poetry.
Write on!


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