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Review of Royal's Jester  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
It's a good short story. Though, Royalty and Jester, lived two completely different lives. Despite that, they were involved in the relationship.
You may be rich, even maybe poor, but that doesn't matter in your happiness. It is a mental state. They were feeling pain in their respective hearts. Those were explained beautifully by the writer.
If it opts for conversation modes in the state of descriptive, the story will gain more readability. So, my advice to adopt this in your second draft is that the structure will remain the same.
It is a pretty beginning.
Keep writing.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a very appealing lyric. Even, if we consider it as poetry of love, it also remains incomparable.
The teller is a lover. He loves a beautiful lady. So, even the narrator does it in her arms, what would be better than that? He found paradise in those arms. He just wants to be a satellite of her. So, she is the home planet of her.
What a romantic thought it is. Excellent performance.
Write on!


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Review of Kudos To You  
for entry "Kudos to you Cubbee" 
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is truly great news for us. You are always looking for creativity. That is perfectly reflected in this exclusive Kudos. It's a tremendous performance. This journey of creativity should be going on.
I hope that you will give us something new in future, too.


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Review of In Rememberance  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a great artistic creation by the poet. That poem is in memory of a relative who passed away a few months ago. It is a tribute to that relative. It was unfortunate but in our way of life, we have to adjust to these mourns. Once that person was the undivided part of our life. The narrator could not think alive without the human. But, the bitter truth is that relative is no more in the material world. Despite that, we have to live a meaningful life and go forward to fulfil the goal of life.
It is a sad but well-written poem.
I also pray for the departed soul.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a very important poetry. It is the story of our daily lives.
We have a lot of ups and downs in our lives. These are obvious in every life. When time doesn't support us, we must be careful but shouldn't break down and keep patience. If we do that, we must overcome it.
It is an excellent piece of writing.
Write on!


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Review of The others  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's truly a thoughtful Monologue. We, every person, have a separate entity. Though we want to make a good combination with others, our rate of success is at a minimum level. So, what should we do now? Try to understand yourself first. Then try to criticise others. That will help you to realize other people.
It is an excellent beginning.
A bright future is waiting for you.
Keep writing.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It is a perfect short story that fulfils every characteristic of this form.
There are only two main characters- Richard and Julian. They loved each other. Despite that, their desire remained unfulfilled.
Richard is a tragic hero. He did everything for Julian. But she didn't approve of their marriage, the ultimate aim of a sacred love.
Richard became disappointed and lost interest in life.
At that time, Julian expressed her love over the phone. That was too late. Richard died in an encounter with the police.
The pace of the story is fast and smooth. So, the readability is excellent.
There is a lesson in the story. Julian loved Richard, but always tried to hide it. That created an entire complication. If she expressed her love to Richard on time, they would have lived a happy life. Don't hesitate to intimidate your love to the lover. It's a great lesson.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It was a pity that Jones almost broke the relationship between Welks, X, Y and Z to examine their ability. It was unhealthy but needed for their final recruitment. But, Jones did those in his instructor's order who was guiding everything from the shadow.
Jones reported positively about those four guys. But in the case of X, he added, "X has absolutely no memory of you or the voyage". Is it not indicated that the man is the commander who included here the first time and named him X?
We can guess it but the answer is unknown in the chapter.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
X and his mates grew up under a very strict discipline. However, they maintained a good relationship between them. But, in front of the authorities, they were mechanical and always performed their task perfectly. So, they were all allowed in the examination. That atmosphere also helped to build their characters.


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Review of Courage  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (2.5)
If you want to get a successful life, you have to reject all kinds of negativity, first. and then have the courage. If you can prepare yourself in such a way, you must achieve success in life. It is a great advice. The writing also inspires us. But, it is not a short story at all. It is nothing but a report of one human's success who loves nursery.


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Review of The Search  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a very interesting fanfiction story. The teller is a lady who searches for his man Matt. She always gets him after a thorough search. Lost again and find him. That will be continued.
It's symbolic. We are searching for our goals. After achieving that, we again run behind a new target. That endless journey is going on until our death.
It's a classic writing effort.
Carry on this performance.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
How did X survive? That history was described in this chapter. That was tragic, dramatic and sad.
Many people considered him a demon or a monster. Soldiers claimed that he could destroy military camps singlehandedly. He had that ability.
He took birth in unfavourable situations and was brought up there. His father taught him to fight. When X's father died, the commander promised to take care of X. He made him X.
It is truly an exciting story which is full of adventure for X. Mystery and fantasy help it to get the perfect shape.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Aiden lived in a small village among the rolling hills. He had an endless dream in his eyes. To fulfil them, he began his life's journey. This is the journey of hope. In this mission, he faced a lot of obstructions. He struggled to overcome but never gave up. So, success kissed him at the end.
Like Aiden, every human should try their level best to achieve the goal of life. If they are sincere in their tasks, they must fulfil their targets.
It's a very interesting article. We can learn something.
A bright future is waiting for you.
Go ahead.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
That was a Wednesday morning, four hours or so. The incident already occurred on the previous day. Suspense began. Who was the culprit? This was the million-dollar question. Suspects were a few. The fingers of betrayal towards Steve, Bill, Shannon or any other? It's too early to predict anything.
Suspense continues.
Write on!


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Review of Untitled (Love)  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The poet draws several images of Mother Nature. They are correlated with each other and build a complete chain of images that mesmerise us. It looks very simple but attractive. That art of simplicity adds special attractions.
It's an excellent artwork.
Keep writing.


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Review of Eyes of Mist  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Policymakers have been making policies since the beginning of civilization begins. The process is continuing today, too. It will also be continuing in the future.
If those policies are harmless and good for humanity, we must appreciate them. However, some of the policies create complications. That hamper our progress. Those are drawn here.


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Review of Eyes of Mist  
for entry "9 - Doubts" 
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Tamaril told the story of his past life to Jorcan and Ayala. Though, the names were changed. They didn't believe that story. Despite that, Jorcan wised to listen to the entire story. Though, it was untrue but he wanted to extract the lessons inside the story. That decision proved that he was a real wise person.


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Review of Eyes of Mist  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That chapter told us about the origin of Tamaril. Where did he come from? We saw earlier that he was writing a book of war and was in a cave where Jorcan and Ayala were there.
Tamaril was a prince. But, due to the unhealthy rivalry, we saw all over the chapter, he was in that position. Politics was there when civilisation began. If it was too dirty, a revolt took place. Characters like Tamaril suffered.


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Review of Eyes of Mist  
for entry "7 - White Woods" 
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Jorcan and Ayala entered into white woods. Ayala was physically weak but Jorcan took care of her thoroughly. Her intimacy with him always becomes deeper. That was truly a positive sign.
On the other hand, Tamaril tried hard to meet her but he was again unsuccessful.
What will happen next?


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Review of Eyes of Mist  
for entry "6 - The Guardian" 
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Tamaril was in the who tried to attack the Jorcan and Ayala from the shadow. They got nervous. But, a good sense of Tamaril prevailed. So he controlled himself to do the damage.
Ayala became senseless in that incident. Jordan was a bit anxious but remained strong. Then, he decided to take care of her properly. So Ayala got a guardian as Jorcan.
In the end, a little misunderstanding happened between them. Jordan left the but a long time ago. Would he return? This is the main question. We have to wait to know the answer for the next chapter.


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Review of This is a test.  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
It is just a test. How to connect your mind, heart and soul- this is that test, as Charles Bukowski shows us the way. Especially, a creative writer must make a proper connection between these three. Otherwise, that creation will not be able to touch the hearts of readers.
The writer enlightened this important fact. We shall remain grateful to the author.
The topic is very important. But, reader readability is average. There are a few pockets where pace hampers. Please rectify that.
Overall, the performance is satisfactory.
Keep writing.


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Review of Eyes of Mist  
for entry "5 - Dark Journey" 
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It was indeed a dark journey that began. Ayala and Jorcan, both suffered a lot due to insufficient food. They found some caves for living.
If toppers live together, the relationship becomes easier and simpler. We saw their relationship became easier. One day, Shakaree talked about his past life. He loved a girl named Isha. She looked like Ayala. Unfortunately, she was murdered by the Falamar.
At the end of the chapter, a living shadow came towards them. Would they survive? We don't know the answer. We have to wait for the next chapter for further happenings.
Write on!


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Review of Snake skin  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Yes, I must admit your effort. That poem tells us about the man. The eyes of a person can disclose the untold identity at first sight. It's true. My experiences also tell the same. That identity is stamped in our hearts permanently. You express those well.
Suggestions
You need to work hard with the genres. Here, experience is the key factor. Psychology is also playing an important role. You should include those two genres.
Why do we use genres?
To specify the theme of our theme of writing.
It is not your philosophy but your opinion. Why do you change it to the 'Opinion' genre?
Again, you write well.
Continue your performance.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
After returning to the hotel, Sweetie arranged for Cherish to clean their feet. Not only her, but Apple Bloom, Scootaloo and other friends of her also there to enjoy the foot massage from Cherish. It was truly a different experience. The Taste was different. But he liked most the taste of Apple Bloom's feet.


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Review of Eyes of Mist  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Luckily, Ayala and Jorcan are both rescued but injured sufficiently. The Shakaree appointed Ayala as his slave. Ayala observed that the Shakaree didn't try to take any undue advantage as the superior. They struggled a lot for survival. In the end, Jorcan disclosed his identity to Ayala.
What will happen next?


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