Overall Impression:You reviewed an item of mine and I am returning the favor. I have read this poem before, although I didn't review it. I enjoyed reading it the first and second time.

Structure/Form:I'm not sure if this is a certain poetic structure. I can note that each stanza has four lines and the rhyming scheme is a,a,b,b etc. The structure works and the rhyming does not feel forced.

Emotion:The emotions that of the Jester as he finishes his performance and waits for applause. The poem then reflects on his feelings of life and the audience he just performed for.

Favorite Line(s)
The jester finishes and slowly looks around,
He can’t see the audience, and hears no sound

Two great lines to open the poem and they drew me in.

Suggestions:
None.

I enjoyed reading your poem and thank you for sharing it.

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Hello Angus. I didn't know you wrote poetry either. Congrats on getting this poem published, it deserved to be in print. I like this poem, it has a dark, vague feeling. It unsettles the reader by repeating that "something" is coming. This poem has a post apocalyptic theme to it as well.

Structure/Form:Works with the poem.

Emotion:
The emotions I felt while reading the poem, isolation, fear, despair and anticipation for something to come for him.

Favorite Line(s)
You can feel it out there. The more it's not there, the more it is.

Deeply moving.

Suggestions:
None.

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I found your poem on the Newbie page and want to say Welcome to WDC. Your poem is deep and reflects getting rid of someone in your life (this is I interpret it).

Structure/Form:
The structure works for me.

Emotion:
Finding freedom.

Favorite Line(s):
I cut you off so I can breath

I would suggest making this two lines, it would fit better with the rest of the poem. I do like this line, its descriptive and fits the tone of the poem.

Suggestions:
I would suggest to remove bound. Its not needed and slows the line down.
from the bond of bound togetherness.


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I am reviewing this for the Easter egg hunt for the newbie reviews. This poem kept my interest. Two wolves fighting inside someone and you chose which one wins. If you feed the wrong one you are not going to be a good person and vice versa.

Structure/Form:
I think free style and it works with the poem.

Emotion:
The internal struggle of mankind to be good or evil.

Favorite Line(s):
The wolf you choose to feed.

This line is like a hidden treasure at the end of the poem.

Suggestions:
I would suggest reading through the poem and considering every word and every line. Make sure it works with the poem and its flow.

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I was hunting through your portfolio for eggs, this one has an image and I hope it counts for the contest. Either way I get to read your poem! I like this poem it mixes beautiful images with a violent act.

Structure/Form:
Done well.

Emotion:
There is a darkness to this poem and a deep sadness within each line.

Favorite Line(s):
Only a peaceful moment
Before sounds of night hides my cries

These two lines close the poem very well.

Suggestions:
None.

I enjoyed reading your poem and thank you for sharing it.



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Another egg! Thanks. I keep finding them on your portfolio. This poem has a darker tone focusing on feeling rejected. The end shifts and it shows the reader the person accepted and moved on while the other never changed.

Structure/Form:
Done well and works with the poem.

Emotion:
The emotions shift from being hurt to prevailing in the end.

Favorite Line(s):
In the end as I soar high and

I like this line, it shows how one can triumph in the end.

Suggestions:
None.



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Overall Impression:
This is a short poem reflecting on the problems of the world. I like the stanzas when you state how the world could be. The contradicions between the two create a nice balance.
Structure/Form:
Perfect.

Emotion:
Sadness and hope.

Favorite Line(s):
I see the world as it was.
I see the world as it is.
I see the world as it could be:
Full of brotherly love.

I picked this stanza, because it is sums the poem up very well.

Suggestions:
None.

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I am reviewing this for the egg! This poem is about wishing on a star. I like how the wish is for peace and tranquility for all.

Structure/Form:It seems like this poem has a poetic structure, but I'm not sure which one. It would help if this information was given to the reader.

Emotion:Hope for a better future for mankind.

Favorite Line(s):
Thee with all my might, that there will be Peace on earth, Goodwill towards man and Tranquility.

Lovely sentiment.
Suggestions:
The poem feels a little choppy. It could be because of the way its supposed to be structured. This poem could also be re-written in free style. I have taken some of my structured poems and created a second version of them. This is only a suggestion and you can use it or not.


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Overall Impression:
You reviewed an item of mine so I am returning the favor. I chose this poem and saw it had a lovely blue ribbon. The poem is a funny tale of losing a ones keys.

Structure/Form:Not sure, there is no mention if a poetic style was used. I noticed there is a rhyming scheme and it doesn't feel forced.

Emotion:Frustration and in the end a little embarrassment mixed with relief.

Favorite Line(s)
My giggling husband was dangling my keys.

My favorite line, this is something my husband would do.

Suggestions:
None.
I enjoyed reading your poem and thank you for sharing it.

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Overall Impression:
I picked the same image for the the 30 Day Image Contest. I liked how you used the prompt to describe lightning as a weapon to get justice.

Structure/Form:
You chose Tanka and the poem follows the format. The syllable count is spot on.

Emotion:
You stated this poem was to help deal with emotions from an abusive past. You can feel the anger within the poem, but it has a reason. Poetry is a great tool for letting out emotions and working through them.

Favorite Line(s):
Revenge, best served from heaven.

A perfect line to end the poem.
Suggestions:
The poem is done well as a Tanka poem. It would be nice to make a second version of this poem either free style or Cateno Rondo. This poem could have more of an emotional impact if was longer. This is only a suggestion and you may use it or not, its up to you.

I enjoyed reading your poem and thank you for sharing it.


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