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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jackiesmuse, I came across this story while random reviewing.


My impressions of:"The Countdown WC: 297"  by Jackiesmuse

Clarity:A great title that describes tis story well.

Writing style:Family children drama.

My favorite line:--- He was always joking about having enough boys for a baseball team.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A nicely written as well as described short family story that most people should relate to because they've been through it too.

A typical scenario you can't make everybody happy at once there is always going to be somebody unhappy.

Jackiesmuse, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Have a great weekend.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Kenzie, I came across this story while random reviewing.
Kenzie, welcome to disAbility Writers Group. It's good to have you here. I feel you will enjoy it here as I have, a great atmosphere with friendly and helpful people.

My impressions of:"You Need Those Cookies WHEN?"  by Kenzie

Clarity:A great title for this story.

Writing style: Personal parental drama.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A great idea for this well written short story.
This strongly written story has brought back memories for me. Not in cooking but in science projects for the science fair Monday night and I'm told about it Sunday night. As with your cooking project I improvised and made due and succeeded though didn't win no prizes. It was definitely a learning experience and I feel that most parents have went through similar.

Kenzie, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Have a great weekend.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hi Tamo, I came across this story while random reviewing.


My impressions of:"Uncertain Circumstances"  by Tamo

Clarity:Interesting title

Writing style:Folktale drama


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A interesting tale, with good descriptions that make it easy for the reader to picture the setting.

I'm not exactly sure how the title describes the story or what it's about.

Tamo, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider double spacing with a blank between paragraphs, this will make it easier and more appealing to readers. Consider shortening the long sentences and breaking down the long paragraphs into shorter ones. This makes it less intimidating for browsers or potential readers.
Quotation marks for spoken text is pretty standard.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi again MoonChilde, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Pop-Pop's Chocolate"  by MoonChilde

Clarity:A good title for this ritual story.

Writing style:Family rituals

My favorite line:--- However, anytime one of the kids would reach into the bowl my grandfather would say gruffly, “The dark chocolate is mine.”---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:This is great. Short straight to the point, just the way today's readers like things.

This well written piece has my has gotten my memory to working trying to remember all those small rituals that so easily get lost in time. A great idea for this story.

MoonChilde, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Have a great day. :)

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi Use I Am, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: ""Whispers of Hope""  by Use I Am

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: in the quest for dreams, no one declines--
A strong well worded inspirational uplifting poem.
A great flow to this strong poem. I like that this poem is very positive with uplifting energy flowing.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the portrait of a great and helpful soul born and then rising with time.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics.

Use I Am, thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hi CSCJR, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Making Space: Emptying the Upper Shelves"  by CSCJR

Clarity:Seems to be a good title for this tale.

Writing style: Personal drama.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: Sounds kind of like that dream I had. Most every one has been through days when they felt the shelf was about to collapse. Those hard times are what makes us stronger. There is a way out and it sounds as if you are at the doorway.

A lot of good stuff here, just a bit of tidying up.
Some good parts for a future work.

CSJR, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Calm down. Breath. Make somebody smile. Smell the roses. As my daughters used to tell me chill LAX.

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Review of Thank You  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi again MoonChilde, I came across this story while random reviewing.


My impressions of:"Thank You"  by MoonChilde

Clarity:A good title for this delightful tale.

Writing style: Romance experience drama.

My favorite line:--- However, after all was said and done, you left behind a tiny spark of me that I could build into a roaring inferno.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: Well I hate that it took seven years, I'm glad you came out better.

We learn from our mistakes, then get stronger even though we never realize it until it's done. A great attitude you do have.

A well written and structured thank you letter to a jerk. Your positive attitude is refreshing.

MoonChilde, thank you for sharing this entertaining letter, it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi Dr M C Gupta, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "TRYING TO WAKE UP THE AWAKE: a sonnet "  by Dr M C Gupta

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A nicely written poem with a good rhyming pattern that gives this poem a unique flow. A cute, even humorous ending lines.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:This reader see's the portrait of a saint trying to wake up souls, some that do wake others that don't.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can see.

Dr M C Gupta, thank you for sharing your delightful poem. Write On!

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Review of Imagine Paradise  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi MikeDK, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Imagine Paradise"  by MikeDK

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A nicely written free verse poem about imagined paradise. A unique idea for this lovely poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:The portrait of a soul sitting on a riverbank trying to imagine if paradise would be any better, is painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:The mechanics of this poem look good.

MikeDS, thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

Hi Ken, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "To Begin Again ..."  by HuntersMoon

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A beautifully formed 64 line poem. A great job with the rhyming pattern to give this poem a rhythmic flow.
Wouldn't it be awesome to be able to travel in time with the ability to fix mistakes that occurred.
A new Garden of Eden. What a sight that would be.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:The portrait of a craft lost in the dimensions of time, is painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:All looks great.

Ken, thank you for sharing this awesome time traveling poem.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi again FixTheLizard, I came across this story while random reviewing.


My impressions of:"Echoes of the Lost Expedition (ep3)"  by FixTheLizard,

Clarity: A good title for this tale.

Writing style:Adventure fantasy drama.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written adventure in the dark wilderness, I am glad they made it to the morning.
I like the reference to the eerie carved symbols in the trees.

This story gets the readers attention and leaves him wanting more.

FixTheLizard, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Keep writing.

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi RabiaJ, I came across this story while random reviewing.


My impressions of:"The Environmental Escapade"  by RabiaJ

Clarity:A good title that describes the content of this article well.

Writing style: Environmental impact article.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A very informative article. Sad but true humans are the worst for the environment of good old mother earth.

A good well spaced and structured layout full of valuable information about the environment of our planet.

Even with the best intentions humans don't seem to really appreciate anything until it's to late. When its gone and we can't have it then we miss it.
I sincerely hope that we can somehow begin to repair some of the damage that we have caused for our planet.

We need more articles like this to make people more aware and begin to work toward repair for the environment.

Environmentalist is certainly a proud field to be in and I'm sure there will be plenty of demand for articles like this in the near future.

RabiaJ, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Ayla, I came across this story while random reviewing.


My impressions of:"El chico del juego"  by Ayla

Clarity:A good title for this gaming tale.

Writing style:Relationship drama.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written story with strong character and an ere of mystery. This reader is a bit confused with the story repeating itself. I don't know if that is intentional it appears to be a draft of a work in progress, maybe.

Good descriptions that help the reader to visualize the setting.

Ayla,thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:A good proof read and edit never hurts.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi Angel, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Love me or hate me"  by Angel

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:We are who we are, couldn't change that even if we wanted to.
This poem is short yet the point comes across strong. I like that each line starts the same. That helps the strong rhythmite flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see an individual standing strong like a statue.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I see. I am who I am.

Angel, thank you for sharing your lovely poem.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi Mary, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "To An Absent Friend"  by Mary Pavey

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A beautiful poem with a random rhyming pattern that adds to give its unique flow. I understand, strong words indeed.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:The portrait of a young person remembering an absent older family member is painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can see.

Mary Pavey, thank you for sharing your poem.
So you are 120 years old? :)
Write On!

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Review of UTOPIA  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

Hi InterGalacticDonkey, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "UTOPIA"  by InterGalacticDonkey

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Human nature can be both a blessing and a curse.
A deep poem about human nature and how easily swayed we can be.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:The portrait of a child growing up on life's path way is painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:Looks fine to this reader.

InterGalacticDonkey, thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi FixTheLizzard, I came across this story while random reviewing.


My impressions of:"Echoes of the Lost Expedition"  by FixTheLizzard

Clarity:A good title for this tale.

Writing style: Action adventure drama.

My favorite line:--- Sitting around a crackling fire, they marveled at the vastness of the rainforest, its ancient trees whispering secrets in the breeze.----

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A good idea for this adventure tale. Well written story with good characters and realistic dialogue. Good descriptions that help the reader to visualize the setting.

A good structured story that appears inviting and easy for the reader.

FixTheLizzard, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider making the opening lines stronger to get the readers attention from the start.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi StoryMaster, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Read This; It's FREE!"  by The StoryMaster

Clarity:A great title that describes the content of this article well.

Writing style:Personal opinion

My favorite line:---The desire to receive everything for free is understandable, but you must step back from that and realize it is a selfish desire.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: How can you renew your membership with gift points? I had heard that and I read it again in this article yet I can find no path to do it that way.

A very informative article about WDC and many of the free benefits. It is true that there are many web sites that get your attention with the word free yet when you go there you find that they are slowly reeling you in to ask for a fee. Nothing is free especially today. Well that is business, of course if everything was free it wouldn't work. Profit is the reward for work so naturally all businesses need to make profit to survive.

WDC is indeed a great website with numerous free activities. Also for free you get to associate with some of the top writers in the field. Not to count you get to associate with the top writers of the future.

StoryMaster, thank you for sharing this work for free, it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi use 'Iam', I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"the journey of hope"  by use 'I am'

Clarity: A nice title for this tale.

Writing style: Fantasy friendship drama.

My favorite line: ---Through the valleys of despair and the peaks of triumph, Aiden learned that the true measure of life lay not in the destination, but in the beauty of the journey itself.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well told journey of hope. Nicely structured story that is easy for the reader.

By listing all three genres your work will be available to more potential readers.

This story carries a familiar flow. Faith in the promise of tomorrow. Well said.


Use 'I am', thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider experimenting with adding a little action.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

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Review of Fear of Flying  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Sinbad, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Fear of Flying"  by Sinbad

Clarity:A good title for this tale.

Writing style: Personal biographical drama.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:Nicely written story that expresses your feelings on flying very good. If humans were meant to fly wouldn't they have been born with wings?

They say your chances of crashing in a plane are very slim compared to automobile accidents. My wife has the same fear, that's what I tell her.

Although your feelings can be felt through this story it is written in an entertaining, even a bit humorous way. Well done.



Sinbad, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Review of A Frank Letter  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi Jay, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "A Frank Letter"  by Jay O'Toole

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A delightful poem with a bit of humor to boot.

A great job with the rhyming pattern that adds to this poems unique flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: The portrait is painted for this reader of two people, one of which is trying to talk the other one into going on a diet.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can see with the grammar spelling or mechanics.

Jay O'Toole, thank you for sharing this delightful poem.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi Amethyst Angel, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Ode to the Emerald Isle"  by Amethyst Angel

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well written acrostic poem for St Patrick's Day.

A nice rhyming pattern that gives this poem an easy going flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: A portrait of the Highlands of Ireland are painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this beautiful poem.

Amethyst Angel, thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Weirdone, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Our Wicked Cool Teacher"  by Weirdone-Back in the games

Clarity:A good title for this tale.

Writing style: Modern horror drama.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written tale of school-teacher horror.

A good structured story that is easy for the reader.

Strong characters with good dialog. Good descriptions that make it easy to picture the setting.

A good ending. This was the cute style horror not the dark gloomy horror.



Weirdone-Back in the games, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Review of Ode to New Love  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

Hi Drake, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Ode to New Love"  by Drake

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well worded romance poem with a random rhyming pattern. This poem carries A rhythmic flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the portrait a young couple fussing over nothing, then threatening breakup.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: Curious why you did not start the poem with a capital letter.

Drake, thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Maria Mize, I came across this story while random reviewing.


My impressions of:"WHEN DARE + DOUBLE-DARE = FIRE"  by Maria Mize

Clarity:A good title that describes the contents of this story well.

Writing style: Biographical drama.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:Well written biographical tale. As youngsters most all of us go through phases and make mistakes sometimes worse than others.

Written in a nice structure, very informative with good details. A good strong opening which quickly draws the reader in to the story keeping his attention all throughout to find out how it ends.

Maria Mize, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None.

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