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I love to do reviews! I can get lost for hours reading all the amazing work from everyone here! I am honest when I review, I love to offer advice or suggestions, sometimes another set of eyes can be a big help!! I know that I always appreciate another opinion or help so I just want to offer the same to others!!~
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Spotting ways to change up just a couple of words and make the flow even better. As well as noticing ways of making the writing stand out even more with adding text color or placement.
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Dark
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Sci-Fi
Favorite Item Types
Poems
Least Favorite Item Types
None really
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Review by Jen~
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello! I am taking part in a review raid today and your story was on the list of items to be reviewed. I have just finished reading it and I wanted to leave you some positive feedback!

I really liked reading this, it has a cute and upbeat mood and tone to it as I read along! It made me remember when I was little I used to read The Babysitters Club book series...this made me reflect on those days! I thought this was uplifting and the story line was great. The reader gets easily lost in the story and it holds their attention throughout the entire story!

Great job!~

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Review by Jen~
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello! I am taking part in a review raid today and your story was on the list of items to be reviewed. I just finished reading it and I wanted to leave you some positive feedback!~

I enjoyed reading this! It was a well written and entertaining story that the reader can easily follow along with. Halloween is always a time of year that some of the greatest stories are made!

Great Job!

Write On!

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Review of The Well  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!~ I am taking part in a review raid today and your story was on the list of items to be reviewed. I just finished reading your story and wanted to leave you some positive feedback!

I really liked this story and enjoyed reading every word of it! I found myself instantly drawn into it at the very start, it grabs the readers attention and keeping them drawn in throughout the entire story. I loved the details and ways that you expressed things. It makes the reader be able to envision what they are reading inside their head. You can smell the stale water left behind in trickles as it runs down the clay walls. The musty smell and the cold damp mud, the reader can easily see the well. I love that the boys almost got away with their secret!

Great Job!

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Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am taking part in a review raid today and your story was on the list of items to be reviewed. I just finished reading it and wanted to leave you some positive feedback!~

I really enjoyed reading this story, it was cute and humorous and reads in a uplifting tone! I loved the way things on earth were described, the details allows the reader to easily picture them in their head as they read along. I thought that the earthly ways they had to learn in order to fit in were super cute. I can very easily picture this as a children's book with amazing photos that lights up the faces up children as they read it!

Well written, easy to follow along with. Saw no errors or typos.

Great Job!~

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Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello!~ I am taking part in a review raid today and this was on the list of items to review. I just finished reading it and wanted to leave you some positive feedback!

I liked this poem and enjoyed reading it. I think that you used awesome details and expressed emotions very well. I love how no matter what happened each day, what it may bring, good or bad, that at the end he was just happy to have gotten through another day! I think that we all should think more like that and not let things get us down. This was well written with a meaningful message to it. I saw no errors or typos.

My only suggestion would be to play around with font styles and text colors, maybe try centering it and if possible adding a cover photo and it will make it even more eye catching!

Great Job

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Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am taking part in a review raid today and your story was on the list of items to be reviewed. I just finished reading it and wanted to leave you some positive feedback!~

I was instantly sucked into the story from the very start. I found myself hanging onto word after word, lost within the words. This was a great story, it is heartfelt and touching. The happiness when she answered the phone and found out that she had made it was easily felt by the reader. I enjoyed reading this and think that it is very well written!

Great Job!~

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Review of Firefly-Waterfall  
Review by Jen~
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello!~ I am taking part in a review raid today and your poem was on the list of items to be reviewed. I just finished reading it and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!~

This was a great topic to write about and you did a nice job at it. I think it is possible for sure for opposites to attract. I think that the differences are what make things interesting. You wrote this expressing both sides/views and the reader can easily relate.

Great Job!~

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Review of Home Fires  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!~ I am taking part in a review raid today and your poem was on the list of items to be reviewed. I just finished reading it and wanted to leave you some positive feedback!`

I liked this poem and enjoyed reading it. It was well written and expresses something wonderful! The joy it brings when our loved ones are home safe and sound is amazing. The fear and worry melted away when she saw her son home and that is heart touching.

Well written. I only suggest maybe adding some text color perhaps!

Write On!~

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Review by Jen~
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hello!~ I am taking part in a review raid today and your poem was on the list of items to be reviewed. I just finished reading it and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!~

I enjoyed reading this, it made me laugh. My oldest daughter is in her first year of college right now and she just went through this before Christmas break. I know that she felt a lot like this. You for sure expressed finals and the grief they cause the students well!

Write On!~

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Review of The Enigma  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!~ I am taking part in a review raid today and your poem was on the list of items to be reviewed. I just finished reading it and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!~

I loved this poem! The expressive details that you use allow the reader to get lost within your words. It easily lets the reader get drawn in and holds their attention throughout the piece. It has a suspenseful and mysterious tone to it, catching his glance and feeling such emotions...very nice job!

My ONLY suggestion would be to play around with different font styles, add some text color and perhaps center it. You will be amazed at how much more that will pull this piece together!

Write On!!

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Review of "Lost Time"  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi there! I am taking part in a review raid today and your poem was on the list of items to be reviewed. I just finished reading it and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!~

I enjoyed reading this poem, it is well written and the reader easily finds themselves relating to it. Reflecting on their own memories as you express yours.

I noticed a typo I believe on this line:

For me the world always been a big piece of cake.

(For me the (worlds) always been a big piece of cake)

That is the only typo that I noticed. I do think that if you removed the periods at the end of each line it will flow better.

Nice Job!~

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Review of Deserted island  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello! I am taking part in a review raid today and your story was on the list of items to be reviewed. I have just finished reading it and wanted to leave you some positive feedback!

I was instantly drawn into this story at the first line. It is well written therefore holds the readers attention throughout the entire story. The story line of vacationing on a deserted island would be magical and you describe things so well that it is easy to picture the island in your mind. The twist at the end, a war going on and they have no way off the island! I want to know what happens next! That is what we all want as writers, to make our readers wanting more, and you did that well here!

Nice job!~

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Review of Nothing waters  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! I am taking part in a review raid today and your poem was on the list of items to be reviewed. I just finished reading it and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!~

I really liked this and enjoyed reading it. I can relate well, I suffer from mental health issues myself and you described this so well. Sometimes it does feel as if you are drowning in a sea of nothing yet cannot find a way out. There are days you think you cannot go any further, but you can and you will. I believe that mental health issues are overlooked by doctors and frowned upon by society. It is like it is some sort of plague that people are scared of. You captured the feelings of depression well.

My only suggestion is to add font style and text color, a cover photo and maybe center it. It will make it even more eye catching!

Great job writing about a tough topic!~

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Review of Breathe  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello!~ I am taking part in a review raid today and your story was on the list of items to be reviewed. I just finished reading it and wanted to leave you some positive feedback!~

This was a very intriguing and interesting story. It talks about how fighting, to the death, is what she must do. It is a story that grabs the readers attention and keeps them drawn in throughout the entire piece!

Well written and a enjoyable read!

Nice job!~

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Review by Jen~
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello! I have just finished reading your poem and I wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!`

I really enjoyed reading this poem! It is about something very special, friendship. I loved the tree and all that it stood for. Through the years it stood strong and even after it was gone, it remained in the soil waiting. Kind of like how true friendships will always stay buried in our hearts and memories. Anyone who reads this poem will be able to relate to is, we have all had valuable friendships that we cherished throughout our lives. It is a important part of life, to have friends who support, accept and encourage you. Just like all of the amazing friends here at WDC!!~ True friendships!!

Well written and a nice flow to your words. I only suggest that you try out font styles and some text color. It will pull your piece together even better and make it more eye catching!

Nice Job!~

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Review of Green  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello! I am doing a review raid and your poem was on the list of items to be reviewed. I just finished reading it and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!~

I was instantly drawn into this at the very start, and it continued to hold my attention throughout the entire poem! This was well written, it has a message and meaning that is important in life. Always try, never give up and believe in yourself.

My only suggestion would be to maybe play around with font style and add some text color, also if you can add a cover photo it really makes it even more eye catching!

Nice job!~

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Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I just came across your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback!

This was a well written poem that told a very enjoyable story. I love that the end was that you were back on the road! It was a uplifting and rather sweet poem and I found myself smiling as I read.

Great Job!!~

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Review of The City  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello! I just came across this and finished reading it, wanted to leave you some positive feedback.

This was a well written piece and I found myself singing it in my head as I read along! You use great expressive details that allow the reader to get a image of what you are describing. I saw no errors or typos, this was overall a great piece!

Well Done!!`

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Review of My Vow to You  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I just came across your poem and wanted to leave some positive feedback and friendly advice!

I LOVED this! It is perfectly written to express a promise and vow to the one that you love. I loved the little hints of humor, the trash was a nice touch!! It is true the way you described it, those little things really do mean a lot!

I only suggest that you try out the different font styles and text colors and it will make it even more eye catching!

Nice Job!

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Review of The Law  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I had read your other poem for this prompt and just came across this one and I wanted to leave you some more feedback!

As I said before, within just a few short lines, you tell a powerful message and meaning. Life is always full of love and sadly hate as well..and it is loves crime! Perfectly said!

Another nice job!

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Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello! I just came across you poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback!!

This was a interesting poem and I enjoyed reading it. It is things like this that will happen to us that makes us realize some of those life lessons! Well written, holds the readers attention and I saw no typos or errors!

Great Job!

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Review of Tweeze  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I just came across your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback!

This is well written and tells a story of what truly can become an addiction to some people. They will pick and pick and not care the damage they do. I watched a whole episode about it on Dr.Phil actually. This is written is such an expressive and detailed way.

Great Job!~

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Review of The Picture  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!~ I just came across your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

I really enjoyed reading this, I think that it was well written and I simply loved the meaning of it! Friendship is something that is so valuable and when you find it you should treasure it! A true friend is amazing to have and you expressed it well in this!

I only suggest that you maybe try some font styles and text colors...perhaps even center it! It will really pull it together nicely! Also adding a cover picture to it will make it even more eye catching!

Nice Job!~

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Review of It Is The Law  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I just came across you writing and I wanted to leave you some positive feedback!

I really liked that in a matter of 3 short lines, your work held a great and powerful meaning. It is like a unspoken rule that in our lives we love...and there are so many types of love. It is an amazing and scary thing to experience.

Great Job!!~

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Review of The Stoning  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello!~ I just came across your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback!

This was a well written and very enjoyable poem to read. It flows nicely and the words tell a amazing story. This is something that, as I read, I could easily visualize. The meaning and story line are so intriguing and pull the reader in!

My only suggestion would be maybe try out some different font styles and some text color..perhaps center it to. It will really pull it all together.


Nice Job!~

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