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I love to do reviews! I can get lost for hours reading all the amazing work from everyone here! I am honest when I review, I love to offer advice or suggestions, sometimes another set of eyes can be a big help!! I know that I always appreciate another opinion or help so I just want to offer the same to others!!~
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Spotting ways to change up just a couple of words and make the flow even better. As well as noticing ways of making the writing stand out even more with adding text color or placement.
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Review of Accept  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I just read your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

I really liked this! It holds a powerful and true meaning and message! We are trained through life and we do accept things because that is just how it is. Sometimes though it is ok to NOT accept things in life, bullying, abuse and those type of things are things we learn that we will not stand for or accept!

Perhaps try out font styles, text colors and centering it and see how much it makes it even more eye catching!

Great Job!


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Review of One  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I just came across your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

This is a good poem and I liked the message that you expressed in it! There is so much bad that happens that is almost overshadows any good. We need to take more time to focus on the good things that happen so maybe someday the bad things will fade into the background some!

My only suggestion is to play around with the font style, text color and maybe center it. It will really pull it all together nicely!

Great job!~


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Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I just came across this and wanted to leave you some positive feedback~

I loved that this was all about what is important in life because 99% of the time we all get caught up in the day to day chaos of life and forget about the important things. We forget to stop and smell the roses as they say! And I think this was a great piece because it makes the reader realize just how important things really are. The beach was easy to envision since you described it so well! I believe that people do need to adventure more in life and make the most wonderful memories!

Great Job!~


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Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!~ I just came across your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

This is a very deep and beautiful poem about the amazement of love and the creation of a life that comes from that very love! This was well written with smooth slowing words, easy to read and follow. Saw no typos or grammar errors. My only suggestion would be to play around with the font styles and text colors and it will really just pull it all together even more!

Great Job!~


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Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello again! Liked your style of writing so decided to read some more of your work. This was another very neat and humorous short story that truly is an enjoyable read. The story again has the funny line twist at the end at I think that is just like the cherry on top!!

Look forward to reading more of your work!


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Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I came across your story and wanted to leave you some positive feedback~

I think that that was a very cute story, the ending is a sweet little twist to what the readers mind is probably expecting to come next! I loved it! I think it is well written with a smooth flow to the words and just a great little story!

Great Job~


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Review of Fall's Spire  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!~ I came across your poem and wanted to leave some positive feedback!

I enjoy reading a Haiku poem. I am always amazed at the amount of details that can be expressed withing such a few amount of words. Reading this is a smooth and even flow of words, no errors of any type seen.

Great Job!~

Write On!~


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Review of Loss  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!~ I just came across your poem and wanted to leave some positive feedback and friendly advice!

I really liked this poem, it hit very close to home for me. I just lost my father 2 weeks ago so I can for sure understand and connect with this. You expressed the grief and pain of a loss well. We all have to deal with loss in some form or another as we go through this life...it is how we chose to deal with it that is defining.

Well written. My only suggestion would be maybe play with the font style and text color, and maybe center it. It will really pull it all together well!~

Write on!~


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Review of The Memory  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello!~ I just came across your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

I loved this poem, the meaning and the message! I just lost my dad 2 weeks ago and I am learning that memories are priceless..they are what keeps us connected to the things in life that we have experienced. They are like small little images that take you back to that very moment and time.

This was well written, with a smooth flow to the words.

I did have a little stumble reading this part:

Do you have a memory?

We all do I'm told.

We take them all along with us,

and keep as we grow old.

I believe just adding a coma and changing one word would make it even out...perhaps:

(Do you have a memory?)
(We all do, I'm told.)
(We take them all along with us,)
(to keep as we grow old)

One other thing I noticed is your syllable count per line. The above section for example:
Line 1~ 7 syllables
Line 2~ 6 syllables
Line 3~ 8 syllables
Line 4~ 6 syllables

Other then those couple small things this is awesome! If you played with the font style and added some text color it would really pull it all together well!

Great Job

Write On!~


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Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello!~ I just came across your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

I think that you did a great job expressing the love and the desire to be with one another. Love is an amazing thing and makes us feel so many different emotions. When we can not be with the one we love, those emotions increase and you showed just that within your words!

My only suggestion would be to play around with font style, text color and maybe center it and it will make it even more eye catching!

Great Job!~

Write On~


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Review of The Home Sampler  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello! I just came across your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

I can relate very much to this poem. I like the way that you expressed the chaos of the different threads and how the knotting caused you to fall apart. This is a good way to show the confusion and the ups and downs of bipolar disorder. Unique!

My only suggestion would be to play around with some font style, text color and maybe center it and it will make it even more eye catching!

Nice Job!

Write On!


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Review of Poetic Canvas  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello! I just came across your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

I liked the expressive details that you used in this poem. It makes the reader able to "see" what you are writing about...the sky, squirrels, woods...and all those thoughts!

My only suggestion would be to add some text color, play around with the font style and maybe center it and it will make it even more eye catching!

Nice Job!~

Write On~


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Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
We all face battles within ourselves where we have to chose a different path perhaps, and you will face a slew of negative emotions that will try to convince you to be down instead of up! I call them my demons!

Well written free verse, sends a powerful point across!

Write on!~


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Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was very moving and emotional. You for sure write in a way that captures the readers attention and not only that, but you make them feel from the heart.

The only suggestion I can offer if to maybe play around with font style, text color and placements on your writings. It really changes it and makes it even more eye catching!

Great Job!

Write On!

Look forward to reading more of your amazing work!


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Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the way that you can write in a carefree way that makes the reader feel all warm and cozy. You invite the reader in and they want to stay! I loved this poem and how it portrays exactly what it should...A new year, fun and happiness~ You expressed this very well~


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Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I just read your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

I loved the carefree way that Halloween is expressed because in this day and age a parent has to be so protective that it almost takes the fun out of things. This made it nice to be able to envision how it was once what it should be, safe and fun for the kids!

Thank you for sharing!

Write On!~


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Review of A Fake Smile  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A smile is worth a thousand words they say.....I say a smile can tell you a thousand words as well!! During times of happiness, sadness, anger and even madness we will slap a smile on our face. We use it to get through many situations and aspects of life...we use it to show love and we use it to hide our real feelings. An expression can be worth more that any amount of words!

Nice job!!~


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Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello! I came across your beautiful poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

The reader can for sure feel the overwhelming love that you have for your girlfriend. You use expressive and emotional words to describe it and that makes the reader feel the power of your love for her.

My only suggestion would be to play around with font style, text color and maybe center it. Really will make a great improvement!

Great job!


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Review of Any Time C-Notes  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love your pics/cnotes! They are truly beautiful and inspirational! I am so happy that I have stumbled across cnotes because I was not sure how people were doing them so I have learned something!

Thank you so much for sharing these perfect pictures~

Write On!~
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Review of WINTER  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello! I came across your poem and wanted to leave some positive feedback and friendly advice.

This was a well written, whispy flow of poem. It makes the reader feel the changing of the seasons, as though they themselves are part of it. You pull them in with the details and expressions.

Perhaps center it,change font style and add text color and it will make it even more eye catching!

Write On!


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Review by Jen~
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hello! I came across your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and some friendly advice!

I LOVED this and the serious message and meaning that it hold within it! You expressed very deep, openly raw emotions that I can relate to...the demons, the beast in control...your view of mental health is much like mine. CHeck out my dark poetry folder in my port sometime if ya want! This was well written.

I suggest that you try doing some line spacing and stanza grouping, change font style, text color and then center it once you space and line it up and it would really be a eye catcher and draw the reader in even more!

Good job!

Write On!

And Welcome!!!!


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Review of A Kiss For You  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello! I came across your poem and wanted to stop and leave some positive feedback and friendly advice!

I like the fact that this was written with deep emotions over the thought of a loss. Those emotions are raw and painful and you expressed them.

I suggest adding color and font style change and it will help pull it together more!

Live~Laugh~Love


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Review of Bereaved  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello! I could feel your pain through your words. You expressed such deep intense emotions that we all feel when we lose someone. It is so hard to understand. This poem made me miss my grandfather.

Only suggestion is to maybe play around with font style, text color and spacing.

Write On!


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Review of Transition  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello! I ran across your writing and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

I loved that you make the reader instantly feel their own childhood and memories!
As children we all want to grown up, then as adults we wish we could go back to our childhood! Thankfully the memories we have will last us a life time!

I saw a typo on this line:
be a part of the whorl wind of
(be a part of the whirl wind of)

Great job!

Write On!~!


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Review of Alone  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I came across your poem and wanted to leave some positive feedback and friendly advice!

I loved this! I can very much relate to it and I write similar to this as well. About the inner demons and the constant battle within.

My advice is to perhaps play around with the font style, text color and maybe center it. It will really pull it together!

Great Job!

Write On!~


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