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I love to do reviews! I can get lost for hours reading all the amazing work from everyone here! I am honest when I review, I love to offer advice or suggestions, sometimes another set of eyes can be a big help!! I know that I always appreciate another opinion or help so I just want to offer the same to others!!~
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Spotting ways to change up just a couple of words and make the flow even better. As well as noticing ways of making the writing stand out even more with adding text color or placement.
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Poems
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Review of Love's Embrace  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello! I came across your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback!

I loved the way this was written. It expresses the deepest of emotions that we all experience, love! It is a journey for sure!

My only suggestion is to perhaps try some spacing, font style and text color and it would really pull it together!

Write On!


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Review of The Promise  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello!~ I just had the pleasure of coming across your poem and reading it and I wanted to stop by and leave you some positive feedback!~

I was instantly pulled into this poem and was literally hanging on word by word, line by line. I loved the ironic type of life twist that you portrayed in here and you expressed such emotion.

This was well written, flowed smoothly and was an enjoyable read!!

Great Job!~

Write On!~

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Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello!~ I came across your poem and wanted to stop by and leave some positive feedback and friendly advice!~

This was a very deeply emotional and moving poem. The meaning of it and in it makes the reader FEEL the emotions you are expressing through your words.

Flows smoothly, well written and draws the reader in.

My only advice would be to maybe try font style, add perhaps a shade of blue to text color and try centering it. You will be surprised at how much it pulls it all together and makes it even more eye catching!

Great poem!

Write On!!

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Review of Stooge Dot Net  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!~ I came across your poem and wanted to stop and leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

This was a very cute, humorous poem. Well written, slap stick comedy from the good ol 3 stooges! Who could go wrong! It is truly classic comedy and you managed to capture that laughter into words and express it here!

My only advice would be maybe try adding some font style, text color and maybe center it!

Great Job!~

Write On!~


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Review of Your Person  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Hello! I just came across your poem and wanted to stop by and leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!~

I loved this poem! I was instantly drawn into it, relating perhaps. I believe 100% that you should always be who YOU are and not what someone wants you to be. It is important to stand for what you believe in even if you are standing alone.

My only suggestion is to try to font style change, text color, and maybe center it.

Nice job, easy read with smooth flowing words.

Write On!


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Review by Jen~
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
I am reviewing your piece today as part of the "Invalid Item"  reviewing challenge

I decided to weave my *Web1*web*Web2* throughout the poems and stories and came across yours~ *Spider* I would love to leave you some spooky, er I mean spectacular fangback , I mean feedback...Bahaha *Poison*

*Jackolantern* What I liked was: Oh my gosh! What DIDN'T I like is a better question! I was instantly drawn into this story. I 100% believe in spirits and paranormal and ghost. I have had many, many personal experiences myself to NOT believe! I loved the story line, how you weaved together the friendship of so many years, their past summers spent there with the present. How now she was able to look back and make more sense of why certain things were done the way they were. It all made sense to her after that night.


.Whatever was in that house did NOT want them or anyone in that room it seems. I love the way you draw the reader in so much that you cause them to FEEL the fear and panic that she is experiencing while being touched and shaken by something she cannot see! How scary!

*WitchHat* What I didn't like: Nothing~! I loved it honestly! Would not change a thing on it!

*Ghost* My suggestions are:That you continue writing such awesome pieces such as this one!~

*Candycorn* A good ghost story needs to grip the reader instantly and make them feel like they should be glancing over their own shoulder as they read this, and you did just that! Goosebumps given for sure! This was well written and truly just a great story that the reader literally hangs onto word after word!

*Rat*Great Job!!~

*Grave* Write On!~


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Review of The Secret  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello! I came across your poem and wanted to leave some positive feedback!

This was a emotion filled poem and it was well written, even and smooth flow line after line.

I love when you put this part:
They can’t hear.
This is my secret,
Our secret!

Mysterious!

Great Job!

Write On!


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Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello!~ I just came across your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback.

This was a short and simple poem that still expressed a awesome meaning. The sun can be a medicine like no other. It can lift your heart and your spirits!

Well written and nice flow.

Write On!


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Review of New Today  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello! I came across your poem and after reading it I wanted to stop by and leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice.

This was a simply put together well written poem. You expressed love and happiness that another day has come to enjoy and live for!

I only suggest maybe changing the font style, add text color and try centering it. It will really bring it all together!

Good Job!~

Write On!~


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Review of Ever Again  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello!~ I came across your poem and after reading it I wanted to stop by and leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

I loved the way the emotions and raw feeling flowed from this while reading it. You described something that a lot of us have all faced. It was well written, flowed evenly and smoothly and you captured the reader by sharing this.

Good Job!~

Write on!~


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Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello!~ I just had the pleasure of coming across your poem and reading it! I wanted to stop by and give you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

I loved the depth of the emotions that you expressed throughout your poem through your words!~ Love is something that is hard to describe with words but you did a great job!

I suggest maybe try playing around with some font style, text color, spacing and centering.

Overall a well written poem!

Write On!!~


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Review of Worm Meets Apple  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello!~ I just came across your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!

I found this to be a very enlightening and humorous poem. It was well written and had a even and smooth flow to it that allowed the reader to easily follow along and enjoy reading this!

My only advice would be to maybe make the text color apple green to really pull it all together!

Great job!

Write on!~


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Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello! I just ran across your poem and wanted to stop and leave you some positive feedback and friendly advice!~

I loved the depth and intensity of this poem. The reader is drawn in and can FEEL the emotions that are being expressed.

Well written!

My only advice is to add some font style, text color and centering it. I would remove the lines at the end only because it make it kind of choppy.

Overall a great poem!

Write On!~


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Review of Beaten  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This gave me goosebumps while I read it and brought tears to my eyes. The pain and despair that you can feel in the writer's words are so deep and raw with emotion. Once that far in,the chance of escape gets further and further away. Hopefully women in these situations can find the inner strength to fight their way through!

Great job!~

Write On!~


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Review of Dream  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello! I ran across your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback!

I truly enjoyed reading your poem. It invoked emotions in the reader as we all have been at that time where we have dreamed of someone.

This was well written, easy and smooth flow.

My only suggestion is to maybe play around with font style and some text color and maybe even font size. It would really pull it together. Also adding a cover photo helps draw attention to your piece.

Good job!~

Write On!~


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Review of My greatest dream  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This story totally captivated me. I could feel the pain and sorrow that you felt when those words came crushing through your heart. I cannot imagine the pain and let down you must have felt when the procedure did not take...I am glad that things turned out for the best and you have your gift from god now!

Write on!!~


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Review of Time's Value  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I ran across your poem and wanted to leave some positive feedback.

I enjoyed ready this poem. I have always wondered how extreme coupon people do balance their time out. I know it takes alot of work and time to do it but I have seen the savings that people can do and it is truly amazing! Great job in expressing the views of the balance between the two!

Write On!!~


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Review of Summer heat  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I just ran across your poem and wanted to stop and leave som epositive feedback!

I enjoyed reading this, it was well written, flowed smoothly and had amazing details. Details that made the reader feel the summer heat. And with the cold weather coming it was a refreshing reflection of a summer we already miss Ha Ha

Great job!

Write on!~


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Review of Shaman's Trance  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello! I came across your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback~

I enjoyed reading this. The flow was smooth and the reader can feel the writer's emotions expressed with the words. I don't think that we are ever truly alone in our thoughts.

My only suggestion is to perhaps add some text color to make it really pop~

Great job!~

Write On!~


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Review of The Terrible Gift  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello! I just had the pleasure of running across your poem and reading it! I wanted to stop by and leave you some positive feedback!

I truly loved this poem~ I loved the way you wrote it as it being an unwanted gift, passed on from generation to generation, cursing the next one in line. The damage that it does to the person and their family, destroying the life that they knew and throwing them into a new unknown life that is scary.

This was an amazing poem, well written, flows great and has the best meaning to it!

Great job!~

Write On!!~


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Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I just ran across your poem and had the pleasure of reading it, I wanted to stop and leave some positive feedback!

I loved this!! It was written in such a way that it flowed, the details were great and the reader could see the water as it swirled around and then became almost one with her.

Awesome writing, great form, placement and flow!

Great Job!~

Write On!~


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Review of Lovers  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello! I just read your poem and wanted to leave you some positive feedback!~

I liked the genre and meaning of your poem. The placement of it was eye catching and it flowed well. Showing the emotions and feelings of the life of a transgender.

I only suggest adding some color and spacing and it will really pull it together!

Write On!~


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Review of Hues of love  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello! I just read your poem and really enjoyed it. I like the many different comparisons of love that you expressed. It was well written and had an even flow to it.

To make it more eye catching I suggest playing around with font style, text color, and perhaps centering it. It will really add a lot of improvement to your poem!!

Great job!!~

Write On!!~

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Review of Birth Cry  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I just had the pleasure of coming across your poem and reading it! I wanted to leave you some positive feedback!!

You deserve it! I loved this so much! I am sure that readers can take this in a few different ways depending on them, with me, it made me instantly remember when my firstborn was placed in my arms the very first time. And then it made me reflect on when I had my other 2 kids...

This poem truly invoked emotions inside me and doing that is what a writer really wants! This was well written and flowed smoothly.

My only suggestion would be perhaps to play around with the font style, text color and maybe center it. It would 100% bring this together and just make it perfect in my eyes!

Great Job!~

Write On!!

Gladly gave you a deserving 5 Stars!!

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Review of The Wind  
Review by Jen~
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello! I just came across your Haiku and wanted to leave you some positive feedback!

I have yet to attempt this style and form of poetry, perhaps in school I did, but not in recent years. I think that by the definition of what a Haiku is, you have accomplished it! In 3 lines you described and got across the meaning.

I only suggest perhaps center it and add some font style change and text color!

Great Job!

Write On!~

Love my new sig!~


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