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Review of The Crossroad  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A doctor's life is always like that! balancing both job and private life becomes difficult. This write up is well written highlighting the dilemma between the career and family life. In a doctor's life though career comes first, it is good atleast to pay 50% of the attention towards family. Keep writing...
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Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*ButterflyG*Imagery & Emotion:The poem resonates the life of a privileged child who reigns the kingdom later. His insanity and his experiences are explained in the poem. As a child he never showed pain nor cried. The verses are written with good choice of words. Keep writing... Your writing matters.

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Review of Catatonia  
Review by saheli
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Kat,
The symptoms of depression are well explained in this poem. Distracted though my mind is blank is my favorite line. I also liked the the words that have been used in the poem. Well written. Keep writing...
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Review by saheli
Rated: E | (4.0)
As I looked upon your poem on this white page I gathered knowledge as to how to review a poem. The poem is meaningful conveying the message what to look in a poem. Whether the poem is loud and obnoxious or quiet and meek ? I also suggest to look for other attributes like subtle ending and so on. Good job done. Keep it up.
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Review of The Taste of You  
Review by saheli
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Lovely and Romantic! Words are magically woven. The poem reflects the prompt. Good job done. *Smile*
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Review of MY HATS  
Review by saheli
Rated: E | (5.0)
A superb career sir!!! The poem flows so well, at the same time giving us the chronicle of your pursuits. You have worn different kinds of hats and each hat has a golden feather!!! No doubt. I'm inspired by the poetic flow!!!
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Review of What Should I do?  
Review by saheli
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*ButterflyG*Imagery & Emotion:this poem is an expression of depression and helplessness where the protagonist is confused how to take life when there are so many emotions and feelings for her lover. The heart is expelled out in the form of a beautiful poem. These are simple words yet so meaningful. I can see the flow in the poem. No errors are notices.

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Review of Nightmares  
Review by saheli
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*ButterflyG*Imagery & Emotion:For some time I had really transmigrated to a place where I could see the horror along with the author. The story touches the reader and he can feel the emotions going through the protagonist.I liked the usage of words at certain places like 'dagger of icy fear stabbed deep into my gut' was the best. The nightmare is scary and the author has created an impact by describing it in a vivid way. The objective of writing is fully achieved when the story raises the same emotions in the reader as that of the protagonist. I tasted the story. It is nicely flavored and very delicious. Keep writing.

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Review of Good Man's Shadow  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*ButterflyG*Imagery & Emotion:A man is judged by his actions. all men have multiple personalities. He can be good, bad, treacherous, kind, evil, loving and caring. he has the capabilities of everything good and bad but only his deeds say us whether he is good or bad. A conceptual poem depicting multiple personalities of human beings. The various personalities are integrated in one person, but if his actions are good one should be termed good but his shadows show the real him, what he can also be. Thank you for sharing a very complicated thought. I feel there is a very thin line between good and bad.

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Review of Ellipsis  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*ButterflyG*Imagery & Emotion: Poetry is the most difficult form of comprehending. The beautiful expressions of the poet that has come out in appropriate moments gives immense relief to the heart. Poetry touches the heart of the reader as they are flashes of emotions brought out instantaneously. It has the glow and beauty of thousand bulbs lit together. The poetry though difficult to comprehend evokes beautiful thought. There is beauty in the words. the poems may not have the correct grammar but it has a concept,a imagery, an emotion and good choice of words. The presentation of poetry varies but the impact it leaves is strong.
The present composition that tells the beauty of the poetry is very exciting to read and gives food for thought. a nice rendering with good emotions and concept. Keep sharing.

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Review of Beaten Down.  
Review by saheli
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*ButterflyG*Imagery & Emotion:Beatn Down is a very apt title for the short on abuse. At the spur of the moment when one is abusing the anger rushes, the blood boils, the rage raises, the redness increases and the victim shouts louder than the offender. The victim after leaving it for a while feels helpless, not knowing how to react, all the reactions cool down but the hurt remains that compels him to drug himself and feel lonely.This is what I felt and gathered as I went through the write up. The poet has very nicely brought out the emotions to the readers and the reader can aptly imagine the scene. He can also feel the sullen emotions of the victim after a time gap between the scene and the present state. Keep sharing. The short is interesting and evokes thoughts. The purpose of the writer is achieved when it provides food for thought and you have accomplished the same very successfully.

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Review of Shoes  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The theme walk in your own shoes has been portrayed in the writeup, Walking in ones own shoes gives confidence and exhibits the personality of the individual. the author says very confidently that the shoes are the best way to project your personality or your actions. Walk in style in your own shoes. Don't compare yourself and don't worry what others are wearing or where from are they. bought. The one I'm wearing is my shoes and I need to show the world that I'm happy for what I'm. Walking in others shoes causes shoe bites and is not very convenient. Your thought about shoes are really good. Enjoyed your work. Keep sharing.
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Review of The....  
Review by saheli
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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*ButterflyG*Imagery & Emotion: A beautiful expression of the poet is evident in the poem. The words used in the poem have the right impact on the reader. I liked the concept of expressing love and asking him to come along to show the purpose of existence. I like the phrase 'heartless hearts. I even liked the lines 'Please do not ever flee through the holes in my heart
I ask that you walk these plains with me'. The poet's wants to sustain love in his heart and want a companion to take him along to reach the mountain tops or to remove all evil thoughts and deeds from him and make his pure existence a powerful, purposeful living. You have all the abilities and capabilities of reaching hearts through poems. Keep sharing. I love the poem.
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Review of Tumbling Stones  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
stones are clapping because of the tide that has brought them together. Nature is beautiful. Every action in the nature has got to convey to man beautiful thoughts, good lessons and evokes spiritual feelings. There is rhythm in nature. Stones applaud the pulsing tide.

Clapping stones join hands
Pulsing tides rise high
Rhythmic sounds touches me
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Review of Journatation  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Words are magical. They have the power to fill in spiritual feelings. Penning good thoughts everyday, cleanses one's mind thoroughly. When we do write a journal, we contemplate on our actions of the day, we weigh ourselves to know whether any substantial things has been done for the day. Self analysis and improving ourselves each day to be a better person than yesterday makes us more spiritual. Your poem is so beautiful that gives joy to the mind. Any rightful action that spreads happiness and joy is spiritual. The daily affairs carried out with a deeper meaning brings spirituality in us. Getting up early in the morning, showered by the morning rays of the sun, penning up our dreams and building new hopes everyday for better tomorrows are ways of extending our spiritual feelings. Keep sharing. Your writing matters
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Review of untitled  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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*ButterflyG*Imagery & Emotion:Holding sorrow or pain closer to one's heart will only increase the hurt and may end by eating you up. share your sorrows and agonies with people closer to your heart. or the best healing that one can expect is from penning it out. sorrow should not accumulate in the heart. what distinguishes man from an animal? Man has emotions that needs a vent. The emotions are to be expressed. Whether it is a failing feeling or a guilt. Kindly express and stay healthy. Teenagers especially have a problem of not sharing feelings with anybody. they pent up their emotions that leads to psychological problems of self accusation, no feeling happy from inside, getting lethargic etc.
As I read the above piece, felt like sharing my feelings about the effects of pent-up emotions. The author has presented the thoughts quite well. The choice of words are good. Keep sharing.

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Review of La Bella Vita  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*ButterflyG*Imagery & Emotion:Watching the little kids gives tremendous joy to the heart. Yes life sings to these innocent kid on the swing. A very beautiful imagery indeed! Yes we all remember our yesterdays seeing the present children at play. The poem is presented in a very food form. the last stanza really has an effect on the reader. Keep writing. Your writing matters.

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Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*ButterflyG*Imagery & Emotion:A beautiful poem with a good rhythm. More than any thing, the emotions of the stray cat has touched me. The poem portrays the feelings of the stray cat for the couple who walked by the porch, where the cat lived. Watching the three of them everyday, the cat had developed a love for them and desired to be a part of the family. The imagination of the cat as how it would be if the four lived together is amazing. The cat was worried when it did not see the couple together.

I liked the emotion filled poem and the good imagery. Keep sharing.


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Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*ButterflyG*Imagery & Emotion:yes, some people really feel very lonely in a social gathering and do not mix well with the people. her the author is inquisitive as to what might have happened in the life of a man who is not interested in the current gathering and also feels why nobody likes him? Thank you for sharing

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Review of Indecisive  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*ButterflyG*Imagery & Emotion:The poet's mental condition of dilemma and not knowing what to decide is expressively brought out in the poem. It;s a free verse flowing freely and the emotions have come out in apt words. a poem should flow out naturally without inhibitions and the words should gel with each other having a common thread flowing through. This is quite evident in the poem.Keep sharing your thoughts and frame of mind.

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Review by saheli
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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*ButterflyG*Imagery & Emotion:The story's opening scene creates curiosity in the readers mind and as the story unfolds, the readers can feel the helplessness of Sam, and can visualize the reasons for which he is tied up there. The story also bring about the torture, an innocent has to undergo for being good to every body. the cruel treatment could have been more strengthened to evoke the sympathetic feelings of the reader. Finally at death, the feelings of a person may be much more than what has been depicted here. This was a nice story. I enjoyed to the core. Good that I stumbled upon a story like this.

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Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*ButterflyG*Imagery & Emotion:Imperfections are the spice of life. No perfection stays for too long. all perfections are temporary for the moment. Perfections changes with time, with advancement and with mindset. I like to be imperfect and I know only then I'll get my love. This poem has a good concept, good flow, good rhythm. Good read. keep writing.

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Review of Sounds of Silence  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*ButterflyG*Imagery & Emotion:The subtle differences that distinguish sounds of silence from sounds of nature, which lead from from perdition to eternal peace and serenity has been discussed in detail. Sounds of nature cannot be perceived until it touches the emotional chord of sounds of silence. As you said there is a difference between talk and self realization. we may talk enormously about religion which does not lead to self realization. The true self realization is taming of mind to attain the God.Let the ripples that has caused in nature touch our heart, and let the sounds of silence of our souls develop a capacity to distinguish good from bad, to know what is real and what is unreal, to come out of dark towards light.A soul searching writeup. Keep writing.


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Review of The Dove  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*ButterflyG*Imagery & Emotion:The dove seeks an other land while the man keeps waiting with depression for the dove. Imagery and emotion are high. The poem flows smoothly. The striking comparison between dove and the man both in love, has brought out by the poet in a subtle way.

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Review of My Show  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*ButterflyG*Imagery & Emotion:It's an exciting attempt of writing a poem within a poem. I liked the idea of bringing a poem in a poem. I'm tired of hurting is like an outer covering of a fruit where you have described the ordeals of pretending and acting. The free write poem appears as if the thought has come out instantaneously.

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