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Review by saheli
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.0)
The poem defines friendship in a promising way. A friend is one who is always there in times of need, extending an helping hand. Metophorical description is absent in the poem, I think the poet should dwell more on at what occasions and how he helps his friend to come out of all the dificult situations and how he wipes the sorrow of his friend. However end rhyming is good. Keep writing. Your writing matters.
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Review of Who I am  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wonderful imagery. The poet is imagining himself to a falling leaf changing for a new season, ie he wants to become a changed person. He compares himself to a cloud, sailing ship, bird, snowflale, spring etc.,He is a nature poet and in nature he sees hope, love, greatness, recognition. I liked every line of the poem which has an indepth meaning.
Word choice, presentation, concept are too good. I appreciate this poet for giving us a good read.
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Review of DOVE  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautiful imagery, good flow and rhyming.


Please do share,
All that you think,
We really care,
Every word you ink
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Review by saheli
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I have heard lullabies where you thank God for giving a sweet child., or asking the stars to come down and give my child good sleep and dreams. I find this is a diferent kind of lullaby altogether. A new learning and experience for me. May these kinds of lullabies are popular in the tribal class.
A good connection is seen with each other verse. I liked it. Keep writing and sharing good novel ideas with the world. Well done.
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Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The poet is enjoying the summer picnic on a seashore with icecream and water melons. watching white sand and soaring seagulls is what he adores. I too enjoyed the summer sensations as I read through.
Good writing.Thanks for sharing.
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Review of Brain Strain  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Decision making is a very dificult task as all choices before us seems to be advantageous with some constraints or the other. Anyway decision has to be made. No decision is worse than a bad decision.
The composition has natural flow, thoughts unfolded sequentially to form a genuine poem. Our psychological bonding to our mothers is unique and we tend to share every thought with our mother. We feel at a great loss when mother is not there around to give us positive suggestions.
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Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
"Show me the sign" is a prayer to God for return of her love. The poem expresses the love in no uncertain terms. It is written in quartants with good rhyming and flow. I liked the voice of the poem showing intense feeling for her lover. Keep writing.....
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Review of Different Power  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The poet potrays a successful story of a couple, who inspite of their differences come up and do well in their life. He tries to preach the differences can act favoroubly if the diferences are accepted by each other and those diferences aptly appreciated. This compact story has been wonderfully related by the author. I found few spelling mistakes, if corrected is a fine poem.Keep writing. Your writing matters

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Review by saheli
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The author has profoundly succeeded in narrating the thoughts of a lunatic who is fedup of seeing those white walls of the asylum. The hallucinations experienced by the insane and his dreams of becoming sane, to live harmoniously with the nature has been superbly explained by the author. The narrator who is insane imagines different settings but is in despair because he once again sees those white walls of the asylum. It was an interesting and exciting read. Keep writing...

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Review of Last Gift  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A romantic story where the girl fantasizes her lover being by her side and loving her. This she assumes to be the soldier's last git as she knows that he would never return. She has to live her whole life remembering this last gift given by her lover. Beautiful story with a wonderful romantic touch. The ending is good where she feels the emptiness both in the room and heart. Good plot depicted in a correct manner. Keep writing...

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed"
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Review of A Day in the Life  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An emotional story which perturbs the heart. I liked the way the strory is narrated. The characterization of the small boy and Trunusca has come out live in the story. I also felt pity for the small boy. As far as the later half of the story is concerned, I felt it could have been dealt slightly better. The assault has been described in detail with the message giving a punch to the story. Keep writing. Your writing matters...


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed"
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Review of One By One  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The poet here feels that one by one, everybody drifts away, similarly he also gets away one day. But he also gives a message of optimism when he feels that the hearts love him, pray for him and they are all there for him always happily, with smile on faces, even without chasing for them.
Wonderful feelings expressed in a well tailored poem. Every word in the poem aptly used with a good flow of rhythm. I liked the way the poem is presented. Good job done. Keep writing..

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Review by saheli
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
TRUE, art is an expression of the heart. The innate hidden ideas, feelings, thoughts find an expression through writing. Writing is joy and fun. Every word in the poem is true. I reciprocate your feelings on art. This poem encourages writers to write and paint the pictures of their heart beautifully.
The emotions are beautiully etched. Good writing. Keep it up and continue sharing your thoughts.
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Review of Deceived  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Yes, It is true that you hurt people you love. This kind of situation arises basically between husband and wife.
A nicely written poem with good tone and emotions. The poem has a good flow Beginning and ending both contadict each other, yet both are true. The voice of concern is seen in the lines:
How long you have to weep.
You have not gotten any sleep.
We hurt other, and in the next minute we show concern and love. Keep writing. Your writing matters
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Review of You're Crazy  
Review by saheli
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A different concept altogether. good imagery. Every person has a coping mechanism. Some people cope up with sad situations by faking that they are feeling pleasant. Sadists feel hurt when others are happy. May be again we may pretend to be hurt when we are happy. Our minds have dual characteristicks. I am writing whatever I felt when I read your poem, because the poem is throught provoking.
I liked the poem because it is dealt in a diferent light. Keep sharing. Your writing matters
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Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The poet here is contemplating which path to take, either to choose a path which leads to the destined goal or a path which leads to a horrible den and ends up saying confidently that all paths go to same place.
I would like to differ-how can all paths lead to same place? A path of truth, faith, hard and smart work will lead towards your destined goal and a path of lies, malice, hatred and lethargy may lead, as said by you, to a horrible den. May be you are reffering that all paths lead us towards the God. Kindly inform me about your opinion about my thoughts.
Overall your poem is thought provoking with good flow, imagery and choice of words. I liked the tone o the poem. Keep writing..Your writing matters
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Review of mothers love  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
It's a very hard question to answer whether the baby should be saved or the mother. A rare concept well conceived in the poem and a very good advice given in a subtle way. I liked the voice of the poem. The rhythm goes well. The opening of the poem is strong.Keep writing. Your writing matters
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Review of Silent Love  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
'Silent love' an apt title for the poem. Though we feel that we are very strong, it is very hard to say a goodbye to a loved one. The last two lines of the poem depicts the depth of love. The tone and flow of the poem goes well.
My favourite stanza
You deserve the heavens
But I can only give you this
And a letter of love
That’s sealed with a kiss
Every stanza is full of emotions and feelings. The diction is consistent. well written. Keep writing... Your writing matters
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Review of Every Time  
Review by saheli
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Holding on for dear life with the tips of my fingers,
In a grip that's stronger than steel or chains.
The above lines are at its best. Discovering her more and more as she comes closer and closer-'Wow! beautiful!
A antastic poem in free write with good word choice, tone imagery flow and a good concept. Overall a fabulous poem. The poem has a good start but I feel ending could have been much better. Only my frank opinion. Enjoyed the words of every verse. Good write.Keep writing...Your writing matters
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Review of "A Man Among Men"  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A tribute to a brave, and loving father. Beautifully depicted. No errors.There is cadence and flow in the poem.
'A man among men' is an apt title as he possesses qualities which stand out in the crowd.
The poem is said in a good tone, The first two lines are impressive. Keep writing..
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Review by saheli
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
The meanings given to spirituality are great. It is true that being spiritual is to believe that all actions are transformation. Spirituality wants us to be fully active in our life and transform ourselves to attain a blissful state of mind and realize God.This may or may not be possible in one life.
Your write up is exemplary and educative. Keep writing. Your writing matters.
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Review of our first date.  
Review by saheli
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
A teenager in love. The meeting scene of the lovers has been described quite well.

Errors: The author should improve on his grammar. The plot is missing.

Imagery and tone is good. The title explains the subject matter. The theme of the story is a romance.I enjoyed going through the writeup.

Keep writing. You can write better.
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Review of "Slaying Dragons"  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The title suits the poem.

The tone, imagery, cjhoice of words are good. I especially liked the ourth stanza where fear is expressed very vividly.

When we make up our mind, and have faith in ourselves, one can overcome all the hurdles and troubles and can get potent energy even to slay a dragon.

I did not find any errors in the poem. The poem is fabulous.

Keep writing at wDC. Your writing matters.
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Review of Why?  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
'Why' by Snaflenerd is a short piece of writing on love disappointment. There are many things said while getting into a relationship to woo the lover and "I am not going to change my mind" were the words which have affected the main character here in this story. Once fallen in love with a person haunts and it becomes very difficult to forget the person. It was a good read. Keep writing your writing matters
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Review of THE ROAD  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
'The Road' by Christine Casello is a poem which is a good example of a metaphor. The poem is effective and describes the politicians who do not let anybody come in their way and who do not care to hurt anybody during their political play. They are suitable fined by the mayor. I liked the subject matter of the poem which is dealt in an interesting way. A good write. Keep writin at writing.com. Your writing matters
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