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Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The poet's lament about the overbearing weight which she should carry till the end and there is no excape from this burden. The joy of lightness and happiness is gone forever as the soul has deserted the body with time. That means every day is a despair with burdens of problems to carry. This is a depressing sad poem. The feelings of boredom, tiredness and depression are highlighted. The choice of words seem to be good. Keep sharing.
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Review by saheli
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This story will be liked mostly by the children. The story has good imagery. The jelly fish meeting with accident. Jellyish's encounter with nuclear bomb. I could imagine and felt how strange it would be! Good try for a school magazine. The reading was amazing,exciting and wonderful. It is just a child's imagination. How would the world of jelly fish bve if they started to live like human beings? Keep sharing such amazing stories
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Review of Today  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Happiness is happier when it comes after a sorrow. Any day, Any moment this heart can feel happy. The morning after darkness is very bright and fresh. The darkness so gloomy and bleak. But the hope in the darkness for the next day's light makes one happy. The central theme of the poem is good. The climb is adventurous and risky but still we feel good to face the hardships as there is some pleasure in enduring hardships. The climbdown is easy and relaxing. This also offers a pleasure. 'Today is a good poem with a natural flow, there are spelling mistakes like 'cannot', which is one word and should not be split. I enjoyed reading the poem as the poem is spiritual. You have ideas and talent, If writing is practiced, I hope you can contribute good works. Keep writing. Don't stop the pen.
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Review of A Reviewer's Sigh  
Review by saheli
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
An appreciation for the battle poems is resounded in your poem. The poem reflects your attachment for soldiers, your true love for them.Every word says that you are enamoured to the brave deeds of the veterans. The expression is too good with words echoing the true feelings. Keep sharing..
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Review of January Hush  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The poet here is imagining the snowflakes touching her skin which reaches her through the tangled trees falling from an orange greyish clouds. Good imagery and nice expression. Punctuation needs little more attention. Grey or gray? I feel it should have been grey. Keep writing and sharing.
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Review of A Passing Away  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A free style poem. The beguiled thoughts bring a tearing in the soul and a pounding in the heart. The ruined soul will be purified by God and his messenger, the smiling priest through litany. The God welcomes the passing souls. Good thoughts. No errors suggested but anyway can be made better. Keep sharing.
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Review of Take Care of Mama  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very emotional poem which makes the readers feel sad for the child. A good rhyming, poetic flow seen, The feelings of the child are well displayed. The end of the poem where the child says that she is going to miss her mother and join her very soon is highly emotional and the crux of the poem. Keep sharing.
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Review of My Friend  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The poem is quite interesting and emotional. I liked the way it is presented. Thed snow, the solitude, the silence of the freiend who is no more all described vividly. The depth in the tone of the poem is good. Once again I would like to say the emotions o sadness is painted well to the readers. Keep writing.
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Review of Lunacy: Chapter 1  
Review by saheli
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
As I read through the story, some of the incidents made my hair stand straight. I was too much engrossed in the story. The story has a good plot and keep the readers curious through out. It has all the qualities a novel should possess. As this being a halloween month, this story is apt for the season. The happy ending is a great relief to the reader. Keep sharing. You have lot to say.
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Review of Separation  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The feeling of togetherness amidst the different mindset, each complementing the other is the theme of the poem which is depicted quite well here. The silent conversations and the understanding between the two is quite evident. The poem is good tone and choice of words. Keep writing. Your writing matters
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Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Subtle love experiences and silent parting are depicted aptly in the story. The readers experience a feeling of warmth and sadness as they go through. It was a nice emotional experience. The title suits the story and makes suitable impact on the readers. Keep sharing. You have a very good talent of writing;
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Review of Falling Slowly  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read through I could feel how Jane must have felt with the ocean. A reverberating story which can be remembered often. The narrative has an impact on the reader. A good imagery and a gripping story. Keep writing and sharing wonderful episodes.
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Review of "Silent blows"  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Addiction or craving for something keeps fighting with us snatching our sleep, giving silent blows till its needs are fulfilled. The expression of thoughts flow with the words. poetry is the flow of emotions in a free yet gripping manner. The words are well knitted. Short and sweet and conveys the meaning. Keep writing...Your writing matters...
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Review of She  
Review by saheli
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A wife's earnest love for her husband, the hardships and the enjoyment she had with her husband is well brought out in this poem. I can see the poem flowing well with lovely thoughts and words. She has shared a life with him all through and cannot welcome a third person entering between them. Good presentation. Keep writing... Your writing matters
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Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A child's desire of getting Christmas gifts from Santa is quite well described here. The child's longing and the great pleasurable and thrilling experience of the child, when she sees the stockings stacked is inexplicable. The choice of the words, the begin and the end of the write up is good. I enjoyed going through the experiences of the author as a small child. Keep writing... Your writing matters
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Review of Miscarriage  
Review by saheli
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A touching write up. Last sentence really touches the heart. I could imagine the trauma felt by the protagonist as I read through. The stained jeans, the unwillingness to look up at anybody, the pain and the feelings are nicely brought out be the author. The choice of words are good and the sentences has an impact. Job done nicely. Keep writing..Your writing matters
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Review of Stars  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A very good imagery. A small poem but conveys a lot but as a poem needs a natural flow. A good subject and concept selected. The word choice is good.At places the couplets rhyme well and goes with a good tone.I would have written the poem with your beautiful thoughts

Illuminating the darkened sky
belonging to the glistening sun
The darkness blends with the light
An endless twinkle, a beautiful sight
Are these unseen pieces of glistens?
Are these unthinking minerals of fire?
So close you can almost touch,
Reach out to the sky,
Shooting star goes by


I have tried adding to your thought. Since they are your precious thoughts you can compose it in a better way. Little more application of mind, you can write wonderful poems. Keep writing and sharing.
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Review of A Sister Lost  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Blood is thicker than water. People come and go in our lives but the love for a sister is inexplicable. We grow together, share a lot of feelings, love each other and fight among each other. The memories cannot be erased by the people who occupy our lives later. Here the poet has filled the words with love for his lost sister who was glamorous with ego once. I liked the flow, choice of words and the presentation. The acrostic follows the title. I love to read more of your works when time permits. Keep writing. Your writing matters...
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Review of Man understood.  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Women always crave for men who is in a good job, possesses status and a good respect in society. She does not have to look at the shiniest star in the sky, when husband shines in his job. A well written inspiring piece for all men. It is good that the protagonist understood his wife's gesture. Hope all men understands like him.
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Review of Going Forward...  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Going forward I wont wipe my tears as it bridges the gap of love is the central theme of the poem well presented. I felt the verses a bit too long which can be cut short and simple words would have given more depth. But still the reader enjoys the emotions. Alliteration seen at places.I liked the line:"Ease to breeze like a flying trapeze."
Keep writing your writing matters
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Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem about forbidden love is great. A heart that loves cannot think if I should love or not love. Love simply happens. Later a feeling of sin settles in I feel. Anyway the author has done a good job with the concept of forbidden love. The word choice and the emotions felt as we read through. Keep writing. Your writing matters
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Review by saheli
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
/The poet has very nicely described how danger is Arica. He has elicited all possible events how, when and where a danger can occur and gives a warning to the tourist how careful he should be in this place of land o guns. Full rhyming seen in the lines nearly layed in six quartants. Good job doene. Keep writing. Your writing matters.
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Review by saheli
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
The poets expression for a heart that is lost is heart renting. I liked the poem which has a good opening where the protagonist is sure of his actions and his passions. all of a sudden feels the loss of heart in the abyss that can not be regained. The poem is sad and well presented. Though long, the word choice, depth o feelings, imagery are commendable. Keep writing. Your writing matters.
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Review by saheli
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is an unusual story I have read about a character Devourer of hearts. The character is well depicted which makes the reader to imagine how is it like to be a strange character like that. The journal entries made by the character are strange. Good character depiction with a good plot. Keep writing. Your writing matters...
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Review of Books and Banter  
Review by saheli
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The banter is very conspicous. There is nothing substantial about the book. Public speaking can be carried on with anything and everything and one can never stumble if one can speak on like this and can be spoken like this without any limit. Sky can only be the limit. I liked the way the words have flown without any fumbling or stumbling and the audience may be awe struck with the banter on the book. An enjoyable read. Keep writing ...
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