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Review of The Human Touch  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
It's the truth about living one's life . It's full of god and experiences . the choices you make defines the way you lead your life. sometimes it's full of troubles but eventually the smoothness does arrive. the patience and efforts to do good with your life pays off.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.


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Review of Dystopian Tree  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The poem is written as a unique perspective about bullying. a metaphor about the tree branches scattered around is a good example of the community set up.The best lines are:
With its stinging words and mockery
Howling us with fire
And drowning us to tire.
these are very representative of the unique approach taken here
An interesting work,
Jaya H.


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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
A sadistic view expressed in this poem the reader feels the gravity of the sad views and black night reflects it. It's overwhelming feeling displayed in the poem and that needs a sunlight to cure it. a reader wants to over with this nightly feelings and see the wave of hopeful feelings to arise.
An interesting but sad work,
Jaya H.

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Review of Fallen  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
It's another old poem with no title. A fallen angel with its wings is trying to seek redemption but still wondering about the old life.The curse of that life which has done some awful deeds , wants to recover with a will to make amends. The poem seems incomplete and thought is just expressed without any end to it.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.

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Review of Firefly  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The poem caught the enjoyment of fireflies in summer night. It's favorite of many children to catch them in the bottle and enjoy their glow, but that seems cruel, since eventually they die. instead as the poem suggests to enjoy their flicker at night.The lines I liked are:
Firefly, firefly
Lighting up the evening sky.
As you flit and fly about
Happy children run and shout.
These lines have caught the essence of the natural phenomenon.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
this brief introduction of Beacon scout group is informative for the people like me who didn't know anything about them. I didn't understand why it listed under the genre'comedy'. I didn't find any humor in it and members probably take this very seriously. The wording s in the oath may be humorous to some people but that's the way it is. the uniform colors are good to know, so whenever we see this uniform , will know whom it belongs to and what to expect from these scouts. all the signs with marks are interesting .
An informative piece,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good catalog of events of the spring in the nature is displayed here , in this poem.The Haikus for natural beauty is selected properly and all of them really describing changes in the nature during the spring.The last two lines are the ones I liked the best: listen to spring's serenade
resurrecting hope, It has some spiritual touch to it which is appreciated much. To listen the message is not always popular in people but the nature sends them all the time.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review of Parents  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
In this poem, act of parenting is discussed with the agreement that it is difficult to be a parent. It's a task where there is no school to learn the act, no standard way works,it all types of parents and their children. Its a responsibility one decides to take over without not knowing what one is getting into.to be a friend to the children is not right as well as to be extremely strict with everything. Ideally a balance between the too should be maintained throughout an with clear knowledge between the two about who is in-charge in the household.
A good theme,
Jaya H.
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Review of Another Sky  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
It is a pain travelling across. The imaginations are very prominent in this poem the whole thing is based on vivid scenes from another viewpoint.The grief one suffers is not like the another, only it appears different , which can make it better or worse, depending on the viewpoint. In this poem one wants to end the grief by ending the existence around. It seems the poem is written for a contest with highlighted words there which may be required by contest to include, which is sometimes very hard to do.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A prayer to face the world is well written with good flow and a rhyming scheme. a trust in god's guidance is amazing here, with it anything is possible and to make a decent human being is kept in his hands which are believe to be capable of anything, only one has to pray with a heart in it.Even the faith is not always enough but the prayer has to be with the intact belief.

An interesting prayer,
Jaya H.
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Review of Tennis  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
it's all about scoring the point to get access to winner's circle. The pain and swelling suggests to rest and quit but the ambition keeps on going regardless of bothering pain in the leg, and body is telling to quit, The one needed point keeps the athlete going and finally gets it done , which paid off the smile in tears appeared.
A good score,
Jaya H.

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Review by jaya h
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
The fiction is written well with a few spelling mistakes and the construction problems but the story is put together well . It is about a orphan who then became a slave due to nobody to take care of him or protect him from indecency. The world moves around with money and power this story emphasizes that
An interesting work,
Jaya H.

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Review of The Ocean  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Such a explosive thought of destruction explained in this poem. not accepting the love is understandable but to ruin the person with it is unheard of. But the poem is telling a story of such an act and revenge reaction to it is very scary. To think in such a way seems to be sickly and unhealthy, I hope it's only for a moment.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.


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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good Cinquain ,short but with feelings .the choice of words is important in this form and that one was done well.The emotions expressed in this short poem are excellent. It's rich and packed with emotions that's the main topic here.The rules of the poetry form here are followed very properly.
A good job,
Jaya H.


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Review of Give Me A Measure  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
The profound thought process, has created the poem about what makes us. By tasting measures of all virtues and vices, one comes to conclusion of death, the end of survival.the poem is written in free verses with no rhythm or rhyme. It is focused to the theme and flow is good but unpredictable.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.

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Review of STOP Wasting Time  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The essay is written with the thoughts scattered around all over the place. it needs editing with a good perspective in mind, with some focus to the point. The way it is now constructed, doesn't give the exact meaning to the topic, the reader has to to gather the info to make any sense of it.
A good topic, need proper expression,
Jaya H.

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Review of Car crash  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A sad story told with a placid way.no excitement or abuse expressed for the accident caused by a careless driver which affected the young life permanently. The suffering is beyond imagination to be dependent on computer for simple tasks but the courage it shows in the poem is very commendable and written without any grudge , whatsoever.
A sad story,
Jaya H.


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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
A victory in defeat is cherished in this poem.
as it mention in the description"Troubles are universal.Lasting defeat is optional. Hope is the focus."The poem flows through these statements smoothly . each time is the proof of these statements. after all winning is not everything, but connecting to others is more meaningful,the message is carried through out the poem. it's done well, and found some truth in it too.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.
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Review of In The Heart  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
When talking about the heart , the words are not enough. In this poem, an attempt is made to try to find things in heart or about the heart but that's not all. there are so many things heart can learn or cherish , no limits to that. Heart and soul of the matter is it can't be explained in few lines. It just heart-felt and can't be put into words.The poem is more like a prose here. it carries so many secrets and memories that it's not easy to sort out.The poem flows well but it gets little patchy in the middle.
An interesting theme,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A thoughtful article for critical thinking which is getting scarce in the world. The problems with the current world is getting an instant reward for any action.
A central idea of an article is good, why it starts with the pharmacy or pharmacist , I don't know but it's true in any profession . there is no privacy left in life and everything is in open with social media.It may be the modern world's idea of freedom but it actually can be harassment, and to save from the public attack, is not be a public figure surrounded by social media.
A thoughtful article,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
for a missing angel , the emotional plead to the lost one. To find a missing person is a hard job and very trying for the family members, no matter how much money one can spend the missing person is impossible to find unless there are vital clues available.
a sad story to read,
Jaya H.

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Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
The emotional turmoil raises so many questions when not to get into the situation like this is easy to do. but once you get into the tricky, scary situation there is no way out of it and answering emotional questions does not give you enough time to correct it.
an interesting work,
Jaya H.

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Review of Innocent Mistake  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The promise of policy change is just a invitation to the big fight among seniors, which a new member finds out too late. The story of the historical buildings is told with ease , but the details are quite revealing to him before it goes deep. a flow is good and some historical updates are worth studying.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.

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Review of Big Kids  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
To be just big kids is easy way out . no need to follow society's simple rules jut be the way you feel is what some people like to do. Rigidity is not in their vocabulary. To be easy-going is not always easy but one does try to be.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.


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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It's a very sensitive story. the sounds that are attractive to one are dumb for the other.The story moves well, the happy sounds were from the sad tell of a deaf girl is hard to believe but that's the story's plot. It's written well enough but needs some editing to make it more compact and to the point.
A good read,
Jaya h>

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