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Review of Thank you  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Love can change the person, In this case one gets fearless, may be a shy person got the courage once the relationship becomes intense. and the personalities rubbed each other with transfer of characteristics for both. It 's written as it comes in mind, with no attention to grammar here.
An interesting job,
Jaya H.


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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
It's weird fiction for Halloween late night show. Never really heard of Zombie, who is in reality. The questions raised by the host of the show are very valid and one wonders who got hold of Zombie to appear as it is. It must be all imaginary as most of the fictions are.
It moves well, and keeps a reader interested up to the end.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review of Return to dust  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The thought process is not very focused in this piece. It doesn't read like poem but scattered prose. It's emotional but not very clear of any expression of love.
It seems there is cry for escape from the situation ,but confusion takes over there without any clear way out of the confusion
an interesting piece,
Jaya H.

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Review of Raising Rake  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A person uses yard work to vent his/her anger, this is in the description of poem. That's a good way to release the angry feelings if one can be thoughtful enough. The poem describes the perfect actions of yard work with the instruments used to accomplish that. A flow is good, but no rhythm or rhyme noticed,may be it's not appaling to the subject matter.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
A stormy poem . it flows well but no rhyme or rhythm noted. Why the storm considered The mother Nature's gift , is not clear to me. all sorts of wonders are possible by the nature, it's unpredictable but the force is unbelievable as it's depicted in the poem.
A good read,
Jaya H.



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Review of She Talks with Me  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This essay is written with a light touch. It talks about the parental relationship with the teenager child ,to create a trust in child's mind decides the relationship's nature, close or open. When teenager speaks freely with a parent, their worries disappeared in thin air for each one of them.The last sentence' She talks with me. What a blessing that is!' The emotions in this essay are expressed strongly.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
a very informative essay which really introduces the steam technology for general reader who doesn't know any thing much. All is known about the steam is it generates energy but this essay tells us how and when the energy used in new technology.The research by Dr. Gloriosky will clarify more on this but for general public, whatever information is collected in this essay is more than enough, any more interested readers can follow Dr. Gloriosky 's research more closely.
An informative essay,
Jaya H.
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Review of Last Flight  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A poem on very different topic . I never read or write on dragon. but was curious to read this poem and it was totally new experience for me. The form used here is popular with romantic poetry but I flows well here. writing about imaginary dragons is hard but imaginations can cross borders which is shown in this poem.In this fantasy, the selection of words is good, and the 'last fight'seems to be flowing smoothly.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review of Theodore Rex  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A poem to remind us the old days. current situations are irresponsible and have lost the major values the nation stands for. It seems we need help on every front. the poem spells out all the problems but believing in one man won't save us, because damages are can't be fixed with one's policies which worked in past but may not be correct for the new age.
A good read,
Jaya h.


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Review of Pay It Forward  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It's a good write-up on the pay it forward bear club.I hope it still exists on WDC. The idea is great and work is not elaborate but simple enough for anyone to do,and everybody appreciates the results.I didn't know ROAK originated here but it does make sense after reading the write-up. I just approached them for maintaining my membership but need to talk to them again in a moth or so.This is very informative article, glad I came across it. I got many friends here though never met them in person.Though it feels great.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review of Just One Chance  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The story with the great moral here. It's written well with a good plot and developed with expert dialogue. The end was unexpected until one reads it through. A topic is unusual, I'm glad it's not a love story. The fiction gives the reader a hope of kindness is still around, everything is cruel in the society. That feel good feeling is at the core of the story. The character development was done well. It starts and ends at the right moment , no elaborate plots or events. It's simplicity is what makes it good read.
Jaya H.
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Review of Go Long!  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It's a good inspirational Acrostic based on the memories about the grandson. his name in what it reads in a poetic way. The flow is good and it depicts the picture of the memory from grandson's childhood which is very realistic way to put in the words.Though it may read like a prose, the pride to be a grandparent to the successful grandson is very touching.
A good read,
Jaya H.




good read,
Jaya H.
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Review of Unfinished  
Review by jaya h
Rated: E | (3.5)
a poem on words using word to express the thoughts. There are so many mixed thoughts here that it's hard to get a message out of them. words usually are tangible force if used for one's advantage, it can bring love, hate, fear , hope etc -all kinds of feelings in ones mind, as the mind chooses words can create a new relationship and can guide one through it. That's exactly what I red in this poem. The topic is interesting and flow is not always smooth here, but it suits the poem and it came out good.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
It's hilarious way to picture the corporate ladder.It may be in poetic presentation but lot of is prose here which could be allowed for rapper. the picture depicted here may be realistic , but as a reader I'm new to this setting so can't really comment on any of this dialogue.
an interesting work,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
it seems you are truly a devoted reviewer.Most of us review to get GPs. which helps to upgrade the membership, year after year.your experience on WDC is very similar to most of us. You have to find your niche on here and need some unknown mentor available on the site itself. If you are lucky , somebody does look after you and guide you step by step.you are on the road of enjoyment as it is, many more years to go by here and you will be mentoring newbies all the time. you have a great attitude and will be a real help to many newcomers on WDC.
An interesting work ,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
The view is well expressed in this essay. but there is another angle to this argument.The two battles mentioned here are too technical. The common resident of the country does not think so deeply, but change it affects him personally.The America is divided , culturally as well as politically. political division is expressed here. but the argument is not complete to the core of the society. I believe there are lot of unsaid matters involved here. It's difficult to solve many problems by selecting one side over other.
An intersting work,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
It's tea-lover's thoughts written in this essay with choice of tea, with names and brands. In hot weather drinking tea can't be pleasurable to me but everybody is different , everyone has different kind of cup of tea, some waiting for teatime and rewind.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.


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Review of Consequence  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
once is enough to slip on a slippery path, once heart is broken, it takes a long time to mend, it can be repaired provided the other one has a strong mind and strength to tolerate a blow to the heart with loving consideration and patience .Sometimes the of strength and selfish attitude can deny to pardon, it's then tough situation.
An interesting topic,
Jaya H.


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Review of Decomposition  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
The death wish in this poem is expressed with vivid imagination. it's contradictory to the common practice since burial underground is common way here in USA, but the wishes expressed here are to leave the body out in air to be decomposed naturally.
A weird thought process, though interesting,
Jaya H.


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Review of For Mom  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A realistic picture of Mom is depicted here. The mom who finds the solace in routine work, keeps her sorrows away and attends her duties regardless which makes a sensitive person sad to look at her and grateful for her humble service.
A flow is good and simple narration makes it neat.

A good read,
Jaya H.


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Review of My Poems  
for entry "2 Poems About My Love" 
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
A typical love poem, full of feelings for a dead lover.The soulmates never want to be separate from each other, want to be one in each other's love.The feelings are so strong the poem is engulfed in them.
it seems the love pulling the person from reality, or may be in dreamful ways.
A good read,
Jaya H.



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Review of Vain Quest  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
eternal search goes on.Finding a perfect human being is very difficult task that is questioned in this poem. This search has no end , and the questions posed here remained unanswered, unless one decides to take up on creating the perfect mold as one wishes.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.

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Review of Here I Am  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The beginning is great for you at WDC.
I hope you will see many anniversaries here, that WDC will keep you busy writing, with so many contests, and groups, if you decide to participate. or you can start your own blog which gives you more freedom to write for whatever you wish.
Good luck,
Jaya H.

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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
It is an emotional poem.
there are some spelling mistakes but it still conveys the expression well.It's very realistic life story of a woman with simple life ample desires. The simplicity of the words as the life, makes the poem more pleasant to read.
A good read,
Jaya H.


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Review by jaya h
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
A thoughtful article on snail mail-which is the phrase came after media development by technology. Nobody has any patience anymore , everything needs to done yesterday,how we arrive to this stage is amazing. I personally feel the personal touch is taken away with emails,twitter, facebook and texts( with all kinds of quick communications)
a good read,
Jaya H.

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