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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Everybody's idea of freedom is different, in this fiction there is one outlook of an old man is depicted. The flow is good, but there is no plot as such,just a narration of one person's thoughts about life in general, There is a good picture of old man's personality
A good read,
Jaya H.


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Review of words don't know  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The powerful words can bring any heart closer. When words is only expression to be used , it can get sometimes very tricky if the choice of words is not appropriate. In the poem, one seems to be capture someone's heart, I wonder, is it enough to do so?
An interesting work,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
it's an emotional plea of failed attempt to save a girl from falling.In this world one can't save all the time. the will and an effort to do it is an act of kindness.The poem is about a ghost or imagination of a girl? it's little confusing when read the description about the item.
A good read,
Jaya H.


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Review by jaya h
Rated: E | (4.0)
It's very poetic prose with solid message behind each word. A flow is good and all the events are familiar but the message behind is well drafted. The topic is good and the script is well done,last 4 lines are comprehension of the thought process went in the piece.
A good read,
Jaya H.




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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good story written for children with a good message here. A shrewd fox gave it to Jackal who was humble but intelligent enough to make a fool of the lion.Sometimes the act of wisdom wins over the strength or power. this story is a good example of that belief.
A good read,
Jaya H.



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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The title fits this poem. Her description is thorough, can picture her, but is she a diamond in rough? what is rough here? every stanza gives her immense qualities but her pain is not revealed- that could the rough part.A flow is smooth and the choice of words is apt.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
it's a short poem but it captures the spirit of the ester. As Haiku IS Supposed to be 3liner, you don't have be feeling bad about being a short poem. only thing is, whether it follows rules, and it does.Though it is not on natural beauty, the subject is allowable now. and it does expresses the emotions of ester.
A good reading,
Jaya H.


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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It's written in Hindi, India's national language, so very limited audience here. The poem is written well, with the concept of new human of the new world. Where morality is considerably down and values have changed. The poet calls this new person as made up/ unreal person.
real good thoughts,
Jaya H.
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Review of Little Writings  
for entry "Cinquain poem: Music" 
Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
A good poem about the music. As always music has tremendous effect on the listener. The variety of music can be found everywhere for various moods. But no matter what kind, it always soothing , especially a soft one.The responses to the music are many times, it can be provoking or soothing , suits all the moods.
A good read,
Jaya h.
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Review of DEPRESSION  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
a good acrostic on depression. all the mental points that defines the depression are mentioned here in poetic fashion. Truly there is no escape from the symptoms except one has a strong mind to begin with, where the the depression doesn't get the foot in.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review of SILVER SUN.  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Being in the sun and Moon, does brighten the life ,but soul needs different energy to illuminate which is acquired by some one who is mystery in this poem.That another light can be of love or encouragement source which is not clear in the poem but thought is imagination indeed.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.


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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
A sad story about the friend's demise,it is full of emotions, expressed in a few lines. The question posed her for whom do we mourn? the survived or the dead one? IT is hard to answer but we shed tears for loss it is ours in this case.somethings are never forgotten just like the friendship from early childhood because we shared so much that it's hard to forget.
A good read,
Jaya H.


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Review of Young Mother  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The title says about young mother,but words talk about a young girl needs to be mature and simply beautiful. Is it so memorable due to the beauty?There is a mention of an infant, but it loses in the flow and confuses the reader.}
is it the mother is so young that her being a mother is hard to imagine?
An interesting work,
Jaya H.

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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
}a poem about the mother's day, starts with a mother's usual busy day. but on day of celebration achild wants mother to relax and enjoy the day. It's a day to pamper mother and to show her your gratitude. The poem is like a tribute to a mother on mother's day .
a good read,
Jaya H.


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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good thoughtful, compact poem. It flows well with a clear message with no going around the bushes or divert from the focus.The general principles of life are narrated her with the reasoning attached to it. It goes with the title and flows smoothly.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review by jaya h
Rated: E | (4.0)
It's like believing in reincarnation. Though it's religious belief, it can be argued here for the rub of a famous sentence. There are many times in life one wonders whether it is worth living the life given. but it's necessary to face the life and play the cards dealt for one, there is always a purpose to be selected , otherwise life gets futile.
A good read,
Jaya H.


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Review of Out of Order  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good description of writer' block. It should be cured by some prompts on WDC. but it doesn't always work. The description is apt and flows well. there is some rhyming noticed but no rhythm at all. to get this poem out is a big deal as it is, considering the un responsive muse.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A strange story. Written well but to what effect? There is no plot or suspense, may be some of it created by curiosity in general. To get mixed with in stranger's emotion is not a good idea. especially for a young mother and child . anything can happen which could be beyond anyone's control or power. The struggle to get free is unimaginable.
An interesting story,
Jaya H.

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Review of For Shaina  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The footnote makes it clear. The poem itself doesn't tell the whole story. There is a suggestion of a loss but actual story is hidden in the words for reader's imagination, which can't be accurate or to the point.
It's a sad poem, the act of love is expressed in every word but the loss is misguided . A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review of SHY, am I?  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It's a cry for acceptance in the society. the poem is difficult to understand but it's moves well. there is some rhyming bot didn't notice any rhythm. may be for the topic it may not be possible or needed. the title is decieving but it prompts a reader to read it.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
on a beautiful spring day, one doesn't needs any encouragement to visit a park. This poem is picturing a spring day in a park which is done well and picture perfect. such a visit to the park changes one's mood and nature makes one happy. plus lot of health benefits.
A good read,
Jaya h.



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Review of Who am I?  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
An age-old question is tried to to get answer to, which is hard to find. but only with serious meditation and with devine help, it's possible to solve it. At least the search is set, and the God's help is requested so humanly limitations are accepted here. The quest of identification is long race to run. and no success is guaranteed here . The poem is very thoughtful and written with honesty with apt words.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review of Shattered Glass  
Review by jaya h
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The poem is heart wrenching about the accidental death, leaving behind the daughters who never expected this sad future for them.
The poem is written with heartfelt condolences, The style and a choice of words used is very apt.
A good read,
Jaya h.


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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This is entangled episode and hard to comment. The facts are not very clear to word any opinion about it. It is always a good idea to help anybody who needs it but if your work is affiliated to the act, it needs to comply the rules and regulations defined at the work place. Otherwise it can be a questionable act of kindness as it appears here.
An interesting document,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
A good tribute to the mom. The flow is good with emotional display all over. There is no rhythm or rhyme, but the theme is expressed well. Mother's love is so unconditional that one can never forget it and it becomes like a guide light in the life of a child.
A good read,
Jaya H.


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