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Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
very amusing poem. The patient friend might have enjoyed it, depending how serious the condition was.It's easy to suggest all those things , but staying in hospital can be very cumbersome and to keep a happy face could be very trying.But instead of visiting with a long face, it's a good way to see the patient.
A good read,
Jaya H.


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Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
IT's not only emotional but sad poem. The thoughts are of a hopeless living and unloved, unwanted feelings all over the poem. It's answer is death or association with satanic powers. The thoughts are very depressing and reading it makes it reader depressed.
An depressing poem,
Jaya H.


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Review of God Smiled  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It sounds like eulogy, reads like a dream feelings. It flows well even if there is no rhyme or rhythm of any kind. The Imagination of the entry to the heaven is amazing and picture depicted well. The memories make a reflection on the mind and then imaginations support the plot of the poem.

It reads well,
Jaya H.


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Review of Invisible Pain  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A truth about the pain caused by words is well expressed here. It may not be visible with broken bones but it could be as painful and it can 't be healed with any treatments but just by training one's mind, which can be very difficult to do. A thoughtful document, written well.
A good read,
Jaya H.



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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The moral of this story is clear , but it's not appealing enough. The moral should be enjoy it when you can fully ,without worrying about future adversaries. The story is told well, since it's a contest entry , there may not be room for independent expression. It coposed well with a rhymong scheme but sometimes it feels rhyming is deliberate.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review of There is a road  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
A mysterious road is displayed here but the directions are vague. The reason for being on this road is not well documented. IT may be road to happiness or free of stress/pain. But that is for a reader to imagine, it not very clear here, but it suggest that.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.



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Review of The Real Santa  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It's the poem with thoughtful idea and a clear message. The everyday Santa is always there for everybody in many different forms but it's visible only with a soul search. It's the spiritual experience and poem has depicted that idea very well. it doesn't need Christmas or any time period in particular.
A good read,
jaya H.


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Review of Just Let Go  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The message here is 'just let go' The lyrics are well written, the fear of death and stress of living life is well documented. A flow is good and message is clear. The focus of the lyric is well adjusted between the lines. finding relief from the stress and looking for the security seems to be hard here.
A good read,
Jaya H.


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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
here is a lesson from one life to another. The document written well, it flows smoothly. to talk to the stranger with any interest can backfired but the experience displayed here is quite touching, an old woman's life stories wewre patiently listened buy a stranger and it helps to shape the stranger's lifeis very interesting.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
A story about the fretful search for younger brother in woods. The search path is well documented and desperation is also depicted well. but finding a mansion or an old house instead of the brother was not comfortable feeling, unless the brother to be found inside the house.
A good reading,
Jaya H.


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Review of Mother  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The poem is not clear about what's it trying to say? seems even the author can't be sure about the theme. whether is it about a woman lost, or a mother or imaginary woman?It's very confusing to read. It has a choppy flow right from the beginning, and it remains as a mystery free verses.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.


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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The title is apt. it's Julie- flash fiction, alright. the fiction starts as usual, but then it takes an unexpected turn to a mysterious way with characters acting funny and the end is totally unbelievable. It probably written for a contest, so no freedom of word count or the theme.
A good read,
Jaya H.



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Review of Sunday Night  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
It is a piece that has nothing to do with the title. it's just an expression of living life without a typical American dream. going against the current is usually unsafe and here it seems maddening effect on the mind with a use of bad language,unnecessarily.
An interesting document,
Jaya H.



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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A thoughtful opinion is condensed in this article. A chase of happiness is age-old and never ending. it has to be felt not created. Your mind does a trick of creating hell or heaven in any circumstances, making a right choice is always the key to the happiness. an interesting phrase I found here : Happiness is obtained through despair.
A good read,
Jaya H.


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Review of The Last Morning  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The other character in this story is surprisingly a pet-dog was a well kept surprise at the end. The short story is simple and written with simple prose. It moves with the speed of everyday activity in life. The mention of a tear wasn't telling any reason behind it but may be separation mentioned in info above.

A good read,
Jaya H.


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Review of Supernatural  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The poem about the supernatural is well versed. The free verse had covered all aspects of supernatural step by step,The last 4 lines says the all:
I am the supernatural
I am everything spontaneous
that happens in the presence of mankind
I am the very thing you fear and every thing you love.
A good read,
Jaya H.


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Review of Summer  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The poem depicts a picture of the Summer. the nature is always faithful with all the seasons appear at a designated time without fail. Human mind does expect that the is season the heat and sunshine. All the sporty activities are well documented here, it seems there is a touch of sorrow expressed for it's appearance only for once a year.
A good work,
Jaya H.


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Review of Halloween Night  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good story with a plot developed well by keeping the mystery intact until the end. To select a costume and find the a right stage for the show takes lot of thinking and efforts. When the plan works like in this fiction, the whole efforts paid off and makes it memorable event like in this case.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review of Five Fun Haikus  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
all hiakus are good .I liked the last one. they all are not necessarily funny, but composing them may be fun activity. I thought Hiaku is mainly written on the Nature. but any subject with three lines with proper composition. These are general observations caught in words as poem.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review of After Summer  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
It is a mysterious free verses. It's mystical 'you' is all over the poem.The title and the poem has no connection, at least I didn't find any.The life goes on like the poem suggests, sometimes plsnnned , sometimes full of surprises. If it's a search for the god , implied here, it's not very clear.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.

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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
it's facing reality with courage is a positive tone of this sad self story. Experiencing blindness which was unexpected and took long time for doctors to diagnose is heartbreaking.But when the person so determined with positive attitude the suffering gets diffused to an experince to talk about.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.

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Review of *Life*  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A good poem speaks about up-and downs of a life. It covers all aspects of life , god and bad. At the same time it adds a vigor to live life in full. The positive and negative facts make the life complete as the poem suggests. A flow is smooth and topic is well handled.
A good read,
Jaya H.


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Review by jaya h
Rated: E | (3.5)
A funny situation, well described here. Sometimes we fall for the trap originated by stupid idea and there is no way out of it , but sit through it , bored to tears.
All the story flowing well with step by step as it happens and trying to see the tolerable facts of the situation.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.


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Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
It is a love story. Though the plot is mysterious and the letter which is the plot itself is not very clear to the leader . The unwritten ideas float around but nothing substantial comes out of it.It may be a love-triangle is creating such a confusion, but it will be better for a reader to have a clear idea , what's in the document.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.

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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
A short poem on silence of night is not saying much. The night is not seem that silent after all but does some disturbing act to the souls to make it restless morning. 'the eternal slumber 'is a confusing phrase in this poem, which makes the poem mysterious.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.

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