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Review by jaya h
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
A war story of the nuclear weapons is not favorite of mine. the explosion described here left 40 millions dead in one stroke, is it what expected to happen to establish harmony?
An interesting episode,
Jaya H.


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Review of UNSAID  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
in this short poem , the love takes the prominent position in subject line.It seems to be ended abruptly, what is the message here is not clear, but just announcing the love affair?It 's started with reasonable questions but ended abruptly without any message or thought process.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.



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Review of the red roses  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
It's a sad story but told with a brave front. The life is unpredictable but when one knows the end is near, all emotions play havoc on the loved ones. The story written with the reason hidden for the short life, the sickness is not spelled out , probably a cancer, but what is there to hide it from the wife? how come she never find out the symptoms? it's hard to believe that she never knew. but that's the central idea of the story , it needs little editing as well as few spellings need to be corrected.
An interesting document,
Jaya H.




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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
the caterpillar's life is described well in the poem.
for a contest, with all its rules and restrictions , it is not easy to write to fit into it. Te demand of including certain words does restrict the composition but the poem is done well within its limit. The atmosphere is painted realistically.
a flow is good with no rhyme or rhythm observed.
A good read,
Jaya H.


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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The honest feelings about the autistic child are expressed by the mother in this document.The attitude is amazing here, when parents of autistic child can say this:we're presented an unexpected, precious, and often humorous gift. The gifts are what keep us going – for, as with everything good in life, they balance out the bad and show us our son and situation in an ever-changing, beautiful light. Then the child is very lucky and his chances of making it big in this world are not even great but very sure too.

A good read,
Jaya H
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Review of How Ironic  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It's a thought provoking piece .it make reader think in different way to think about family/relationship, it definitely has nothing to do with blood relation everything changes with a dollar sign, especially in this day and age, this materialistic attitude has changed all the feelings. whatever is written here is simply eye opener, but that's not enough to change oneself , that is if you are compassionate you can turned away from other peopleneed s to save the life , but if you are after dollar , it can change in any circumstances, people's attitude is hard to change, for sure.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A nice walk in forest during the spring when even the bad mood turns into a good by concert of nature being played around. The morning walk brings the good health in addition to uplifting one's mood. It 's written well I liked the best is:There is something about spring, with its kinesthesia of renewal that's uplifting, even spiritual. New buds forming and bursting forth in bloom, winged insects dining on nectar and carrying pollen to continue the arc of life, the scurrying of woodland creatures as they frolic in respite from winter. You can almost hear it, almost feel things growing. It's almost palpable.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review of When God Calls  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The thoughts about the god's support in every part of the life are with a strong belief in god is in this document.I do not know the scriptures quoted everywhere in this document but all of them are the proof of god's support even against Satan's wishes , nothing can deter the things meant to do with the god's wishes or support. When the belief as strong as established in this document there is nothing can stop one to try do anything one wishes, with god's blessing anything is possible with a guaranteed success.
An interesting piece,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
to feel one self great is unheard thing but with winning life's battles and survive the opposition can do the trick. In this life's story , an approach to fight the diversities and obstacles is well documented but everyone goes through this kind of fights so I didn't find it very unusual. the gratitude towards the family members is well mentioned and well deserved too. The piece is honest but with a touch of boasting there which could have been avoided or may be
it's may be just me who noticed it, others may not feel the same way.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.
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Review of To Robin Williams  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
It's a tribute to the actor Robin William, who died due to the fear of being incapacitated, had the courage to end his life. The fear is number one cause of changing life's mode of actions, and it takes over one's mind and controls all the actions person takes. The actor who really remember for his comedy and superb acting died alone and made the admirers very sad. The poem is short but full of respect for the acting career of Robin William, and it flows very well with the immortal relation to him a life after.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This is like a metaphor, talking about crows on the face but behind it seems like human life stories. every one tries for delightful event and goes for it full vigor and efforts. The efforts do pay off whenever one gets what he/she is looking for.The flow is good, little mysterious scenarios sometimes, but otherwise it flows per theme which is unique as well as rare to read.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.
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Review of Half Moon Risin'  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A nice romantic poem with a dreamy situation is being viewed in a romantic moonlight. The tunes are heard in the head, but the format is not meant for the lyric, but a feeling for longing is in every line.The overflowing love is assimilated with the night and moonlight but other side of it seems little sad and not upbeat , because dream may remain only a dream , that sensation reflects the upbeat mind into sad mood just waiting for the fairy eyed companion-the one existed in a dream on such a romantic night.
a good read,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good cause for the walk when one get hits with cancer and that someone is dear to you , you wanted to help anyway you want here A charity walk for children's cancer is documented , a noble cause and heartfelt efforts increase the spirit of awareness, helping others help yourself too, in other format , A good article about the charity walk and its need is well informed here , The article is composed well in simple words. It's easy to read and get the jinx of it by reading it.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review of Cows and Math  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
living on the farm surrounded by cattle sometimes has some advantages too, it seems. The title is weird enough to make you read, what's going on here hoe=w the math and cows are connected, the only connection is the life spent with cows who felt encouraging to do algebra homework.
, The good grass growth inspires one to do good in everything in life including the homework,The connection is far fetched but you can never predict anybody's inner bonds or feelings.There is no plot or no message as such in this document.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
a fiction about the daily life of a factory worker who doesn't know the life any different or better, they are stuck in routine probably all will die due to the polluted air created by the factory they worked in. but now they never realize the danger but just joke about it and passed the routine without a complaint, since they really are not aware of any thing to complain about , but together they lead the life of the factory worker and joke about their life and death don't get harried by living conditions or the lifestyle.
a simplicity of life is narrated well,
Jaya H.
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Review of The Power  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
a helpless plea in this poem which really read likes a prose. sometimes the power wanted needs to earned , which is forgotten by a writer.especially in love the kind power a person requested/expected here is not just there but one needs to to build it around the relationship. which could be strong enough to get that kind power to control the life of them. In this write-up, the story is only one sided, there is no way of knowing the response from the other side, there is not even a mention of other side being considered enough.
An interesting problem discussed here,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It's an honest personal story. came out good but didn't prompt me to read another portfolio mentioned here.It's the story of a temper but it's also called for a defense mechanism, to blame only for misbehaving kindergarten student is not correct on teacher's part without finding the initiator, in my opinion, why one should tolerate injustice?
but there are also different viewpoints to the incidents like this, tick tac toe is not always recommended , hence the bad tempered person is always punished.
A good read,
Jaya h.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
A good informative article about a laser therapy. It gives all possible options which removes the fear from the patient's mind about this new technique. There are so many options to choose from, one just have to ask questions about the right one.The best thing about it if you don't feel comfortable to go through this treatment , you are not anyway forced to do so.It is nice to know what to expect from the treatment and what is involved in it, only thing is missing is the cost of each treatment.
An interesting article,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
A chanting god'name is the topic of this devotional poem. The chanting the god's name makes the one calmer and belief is spread all over. I liked the phrase used here: 'As I intone.' The god's name has a power to wash out all the bruises and the belief relieves the pain.The flow is good with followed certain rhyming scheme in all 15 lines. It has focused to the topic and message is clear.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
It is a reality picture depicted in this fiction. To impress a guest is common urge to everyone, especially when a guest is from other country and a relative. The husband and wife always have different ideas of innovation and clashes are normal. here in this fiction which moves well and full of realistic scenes for household, the guest doesn't demand perfection , neither praises nor comments on the household at all but shows cooperation in the matter with an offer to help out, which is unthinkable, but could be possible.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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Review of 343 Firemen  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
It's a great tribute to Engine 42 fire fighters during twin towers attack by terrorist on Sept. 11 , 2001
it is in the history of USA the, the worst memory for every resident. It was a challenging job for firefighter, and their efforts cost many of them their own life.Their struggle was amazing, but they didn't survive to tell their story to all of us.But by the people who survived the calamity had told many experience they watched with their own eyes. Everything was so unfortunate and didn't have to happen, but it did.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review of Memorial Day  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Most of the people use The Memorial day as holiday-one more long weekend of the year. but writing about it is a tribute to the people who gave their life for the country as well as its people. The document describes the purpose of holiday and its evolution for 3 generation very well. The concert event is news to me, I was not aware of the magnitude of the event,it must be great to share with military families and their friends where they can share their pain and experiences. The piece is done well with respect and love.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review of The Wait  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem is about the loss in life. Though it's not spelled out the loss in tremendous to change the lifestyle as well as hopes in life which became hopeless.the words 'Nothing is left but the wait.' are the theme of the poem. which appear after each kind of loss. It's a depressing thought all over.
A good read,
Jaya H.


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Review of No Sudden Moves  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
It's a story of the house cat and little girl. the story moves well depicting the event of eluding a capture by the cat and Little girl's experience of cat's vicious nature.Since it's new the little girl, the story evolves around it.
The plot is not big and message is not there.
An interesting narration,
Jaya H.

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Review of Pop Dolls  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
It's satire on the dolls like looking ladies plastic surgeries, and made-up from head to toe. It's not spelled out , but obvious by the tone of the document who is described here. the game here is away from reality, but full of false youth. some tactics to be youthful are disgusting but prevalent in society.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.

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