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Review by Shylah
Rated: E | (4.5)
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#989394 by ~*~Damiana Returned~*~


This was a nice poem to read. It stuck to the fourth of July theme really well. Not only did it have the freedom symbols, the wording backed it up. Great result on the freedom contest last year though. Nicely done.

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Review of You are not alone  
Review by Shylah
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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#989394 by ~*~Damiana Returned~*~


This was an interesting poem. I thought you captured the theme in the description really well and it carried a good message. Nicely done.

I only noticed one typo.

Have you ever bought a freindship card

I think that should be friendship.
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Review of Draped  
Review by Shylah
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I thought this was really interesting to read. The style and the wording also caught my eye. How you repeated the first verse as the last with only one word change I thought was really effective. Nicely done.

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Review of Another Shot  
Review by Shylah
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great work. I can see that the question posed at the end and the general situation could apply to many aspects of life, including thoughts and feelings. Really nicely done, very enjoyable.

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Review of Obliterate  
Review by Shylah
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
That was interesting. I thought you did well. Having the speaker describing the situation as reality and how it contrasted with what they imagined it to be like. Good work here.

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Review of Disappear  
Review by Shylah
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Nice work. I thought this poem was well done. The use of the first line in the last line was also really effective, bringing it back full circle almost.

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Review by Shylah
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is another well ordered folder. Good work at keeping all poems under one main theme. The titles look really interesting and I'll be checking them out. Nicely done.


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Review of Devotion  
Review by Shylah
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well done at matching the contest prompt to the stages of parenting. At least until teen years. I thought it worked really well and it was enjoyable to read. Nicely done.

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Review of RAW Poetry  
Review by Shylah
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Nice idea. Not sure about clutter, but this is very well arranged. Interesting contest though. it was a good idea to put up the link at the top for anyone who didn't know about it.

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Review of Spilling Over  
Review by Shylah
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
The contents of this folder look quite interesting. I see that there is a nice variety of poem themes and types from the titles and descriptions. Good work.

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Review of My Rhyming Haiku  
Review by Shylah
Rated: E | (4.0)
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#989394 by ~*~Damiana Returned~*~


Nice work on this style of poetry. I thought you captured the sense of summer really well. It's certainly something to look forward to. The layout was nice. Good work.
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Review of Quake  
Review by Shylah
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I thought this was a very interesting wording on the experience of an earthquake. Tying it in with dance styles was something I haven't seen before. Good work, nicely done.
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Review by Shylah
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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This was an interesting poem to read. I thought you captured the setting really well, giving it a cold undertone what with being late at night, on one that seemed quite dreary. I guess that climate was normal for the location. Good work.
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Review of Because I Said So  
Review by Shylah
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Nice work. What made me smile was your quote pasted below. Good theme to do with it.

In here, I have the right to change my opinion...on a daily basis if need be.

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Review by Shylah
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This monologue about a delay in the changing of seasons made me smile. As it happens, last month was the coldest in 40 years of winter here acording to the TV, so I can totally relate with it, alas. Nicely done.

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Review of Robin's South  
Review by Shylah
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I thought this list was interesting and amusing. As someone who has never seen those adverts, I can still say that reading them, I can clearly see the wording as working well in an advert. Nicely done.

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Review of Review Sig  
Review by Shylah
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is another really nice signature. I like the way the text doesn't overpower the image. My first thoughts were, that it looks like a great place to visit. Very nice.

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Review of Super Fantastic  
Review by Shylah
Rated: E | (5.0)
This signature is really nice. For once I can't guess how it was made with the text the way it is. I thought it was very effective, a great choice of colours and designs.

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Review by Shylah
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very nice. A good effort at creating a blog. What really stood out for me was that you'd put up a selection of links directly to your favourite entries at the top. Something I've not seen before. Great idea.

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Review by Shylah
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Well, I have to agree, that list would certainly prove addiction without a doubt. Although number 1 could be termed a different way. *Laugh*. But regardless of my thoughts, Nicely done.

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Review by Shylah
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
That was really amusing. A good selection in this list. Certainly sounded like a fun contest. Number four was the one I found most amusing. Nicely done.


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Review by Shylah
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Firstly, even though it was ages ago, well done on the win. I enjoyed reading this and I thought the comedy aspect was well placed here. Good work.

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Review of Do-Over  
Review by Shylah
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Nicely done satire. I could clearly imagine each setting, including the expressions of those involved. Well, more so that last example. Good work, very amusing.

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Review by Shylah
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Well done on this article. What most made me smile was the footnote comment. It was interesting to read in regards to the date this was written then think about current events.

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Review by Shylah
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good article. I found this really interesting to read. As someone who hasn't really selected January 1 to make resolutions, I tend to make them further in, at least that was the case this year. But it could be fun to try it next year. Well done.


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