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Review of Checkmate  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is an eerie story that I enjoyed reading because I was able to insert myself into the characters, actions, and be fully aware of everything. In my imagination I saw the details and heard the conversations. I was drawn to your story because of the word CHESS that was in your title.

Thank you for writing about this story with chess as part of the plot and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Innocence Heals  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I could feel happiness, joy, love of life and togetherness as I read your poem. Inside your scene there is a sense of feeling body warmth. Being close to someone like a child with an adult who takes care of this child is gives love a wonderful meaning. Seeing the two together in my imagination reminds me of my childhood.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of In Between  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
There in lies the challenge. It is difficult to across the board do all of these things because there are so many variables. Yes, it would be wonderful to have love as it should be, peace because love is more important than anything else in this world, and all the other good things of life.

The problem as I see it and understand it is we are flawed because of our flesh and sinful natures. Living in the spirit only makes all the good things you mentioned possible, but humans do not focus on the things of the spirit. Living together is ok, but in my early years until graduating high school I had to share space wit other people family and others while away at school. When I finally graduated I was thrilled to be able to go home instead of thrilled to go to college. You are in a good place I think because you embrace possibilities and also have boundaries.

These thoughts came to my mind as I read your words. I enjoyed being guided from the beginning to the ending because I was interested in your thoughts and it felt like you wrote this just for me.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about your thoughts with me and WdC members.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I felt like I was reading the newspaper as I read your words. You would make a great reporter/writer for a newspaper. As I read your story I could feel the excitement of the situation, the concern about Great Britain responding to the tea being thrown overboard, and the protesters fright because of being caught. It was as if your words grabbed me and propelled me from the beginning to the end of your article. I was moved along gently but the intensity of the story kept me reading and wanting to know more. I like your writing style because if felt to me like we were sitting together and you were telling this story to me personally.

I could easily visualize the tea party. The characters are vivid and realistic because this is what people do when they feel cornered and unable to find any other means of dealing with a situation. The scenes are detailed and it seemed as if I was involved helping pitch the tea overboard or watching the event and reporting this story. I felt compelled to help and empathize because in my mind I was able to be a part of everything. I learned more about this event because you took the time to write about it, thank you. Now I'm thinking about getting some tea and enjoying this beverage. I can almost taste it, but my mind thought of it tasting salty because of your story.

The way you set up the presentation of this article is very good because it looks similar to the way a story is set up in newspapers. The added information in lighter print is helpful because I needed this information to better understand this article, thank you.

Thank you for writing and sharing your newspaper article with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I've enjoyed this challenge for seven years and counting because if not for challenging me to enter contests, I probably would not engage in writing, editing, and entering contests as often. It also is a great way to stretch beyond my normal writing abilities because of the different genres in the many featured contests. My brain is exercised when I discover contests that require writing within a specific genre that I'm not familiar with, so I research the genre and write for the featured contest of my choice within the offerings and learn how to adapt. The Contest Challenge gives me better memory muscle when I must enter a contest each month. If I forget the penalty is needing to make up the missed months challenge which can be more difficult because some contests are not run every month. Editing is something that is not regularly on my to-do list and when I write for a contest I must present the very best item possible. One other perk is being in the WdC community active which I might not do as regularly except for finding challenges like Jodies activity. It has helped me make new friends because of the reviews I've received over the years for the items I've written for The Contest Challenge.

The Contest Challenge forum is fantastic. It is inviting and friendly. The links at the top make navigating the page easy. All of every months contests for every year are neatly gathered together and easy to navigate whenever the need arrises. It is easy for me to find my handle and make certain I have entered all required contests.

Jody you've done a wonderful service for this community which I appreciate. It is priceless and I can not pay you what you deserve. I can feel your kindness through this wonderful activity you host for the WdC community. Thank you Jody for all you do for everyone.


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Review of Obama Care?  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow! This wouldn't be do bad if the cost of living was only about $50 or less. Are these people crazy, cruel, or completely insane or all of these, really! I can feel your disgust, sadness, worry for the people your are supporting, frustration, and other emotions through your words. If I could help you by doing research please let me know and I'll see what information I can find.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about your challenges with me and WdC members.


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Review of Journal 20240527  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote this story with passion as if you were rippling out your passionate emotions and sharing them with the reader. I could easily feel tenderness yet the drive for explosive relations. Seeing the scene through your words is vivid and detailed so it seemed as if I was looking through your eyes or the eyes of someone viewing the events. Your story is clear and easy to understand.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Praise and glory to God for showing you how to join our community. I am very glad you are here and enjoying this website. I enjoyed reading about your adventure signing up and spending time here. It was as if you were talking directly to me and sharing your experiences.

Thank you for writing and reading and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of " PEACE "  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My heart is full of joy and happiness because of your words that glorify God and show thankfulness. Your words have uplifted my spirit. My spirit is full of contentment and excitement for God and this day that He has made. Your words added to my focus and thrill of life and for God and all He does each day. These things were evoked as I read your words.
Safe travels and many blessings.


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Review of Falling  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
There is so much to love and you showed a lot of it in your poem. I felt like I was with you during those wonderful times. I could feel the spark of joy and other happy emotions as the two of you spent time together. And together as you wrote is the best place to be. Your poem showed me this too. I can see two people together enjoying each other's company.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetry word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I studied history in high school, but have not explored more of this subject for many years. For this reason, your information is very new to me. It is well written so that readers can understand the information and even refer to other sources. It is of a good length allowing the reader to take in new information easily and without being overwhelmed.

Thank you for writing about this part of history and sharing it with me and WdC members.

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Review of Going around  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem is an interesting map for imagination. I could see an old van traveling all around Australia with two people having a blast and enjoying a wonderful trip. The scenery is vast and changing as the miles and time ticked by with each revolution of the tires. I'm glad you had a nice trip and invited me to come with you through your poems words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about your trip with me and WdC members.

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Review of Beyond The Pale  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I hope this is not serious but if it is please consider God's everlasting love for you and everyone no matter who they are. The adversary the one of darkness and deceit has no love but will not win the battle at the end of times. Your words tugged at my heart. I could feel the despair and loneliness. The emptiness sucked in sadness and enlarged it because life is precious and in an instant could be destroyed forever.

Thank you for writing and sharing your dark story with me and WdC members.

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Review of Seaweed  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You poem reminded me when there was seaweed in the Severn River in MD. I walked through it and enjoyed knowing it was thriving, but probably not so much now that the solution is terribly bad now. It is sad and horrible that things are so polluted the seaweed is disappearing or struggling to survive. I felt joy because of the seaweed knowing it sustained water creatures. Your poem is easy to read and understand. I'm you wrote it because it is a good tribute to seaweed.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem about seaweed with me and WdC members.

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Review of The veil  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your words I felt uneasy because of the implications that intruded on my mind. I could see this from two different points of view. One is from a heavenly and Godly point of view and the other is from the opposite point of view. You have value and worth to God. You could be deceived and see the other point of view. My point of view is there is spiritual warfare and perhaps you are caught in the middle of this with everyone else. It felt as if this also was full of questioning and possibly being in the middle of a situation like tug of war. These ideas are what were in my head as I read your words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Writing about the time zones was funny, I enjoyed laughing. Many thanks for making my day. The parts about The Writers Cramp and Writing dot Com time is, of course, a serious matter and so is the part about the prize(s). I've entered the Writers Cramp and enjoyed the adventure. There were no distractions and the article makes sense and is believable. Believable because I know about The Writers Cramp and your words express dedication and support for this activity.

Thank you for writing (cramp or not: a muscle relaxer, maybe) and sharing your word art about time, WdC, and The Writers Cramp with me and WdC members.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The turmoil in your poem is real enough but underneath the pressure and social demands I believe are worse. I know sometimes when people are pressured to not make mistakes they wind up making more mistakes. The rhythm of your poem is smooth and I was easily guided through it without any distractions.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art poem with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I guess this means to not get caught up with material things, but focus on spiritual things. I try not to get too focused on material things and focus on spiritual things.

Thank you for writing and sharing this quote word art with me and wdC members.


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Review of Floral Pearl  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I didn't know about the Floral Pearl, or didn't have the flower and name together. The rhythm is smooth and nice to read. I can see the butterfly enjoying the flower and imagine the flower benefitting from the butterfly's attention.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the butterfly and flower with me and WdC members.


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Review of Wolfs pain  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Your spooky story reminds me of some old time werewolf movies I didn't want to watch. It also made me think of some of the horror story author's. Your fictional story is believable. I could imagine the bloody scene. The change from human to werewolf is easy to imagine also.

Thank you for writing and sharing your werewolf word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Doubles?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
How strange it is to have very, very close similarities in two different relationships. I guess there is a reason that might be known or not. I could see and hear the doubles like an echo as I imagined your story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about your unique situation with me and WdC members.


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Review of Adr  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a different character development system for me. I haven't seen this until finding your item. I looks like information for a game, but it could be used to develop a character for a story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of priorities  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Relationships can be challenging and I know from your words that sometimes people expect too much from someone. Walking away without trying to communicate and repair a situation can be a possible solution, but sometimes working through challenges can fix things.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about relationships with me and WdC members.


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Review of First Date  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Oh boy! When I got to the "Hello Kitty Stuff" I couldn't help it I had to have a hearty laugh. The snakes idea got me to thinking maybe the snakes were big enough to eat people and Rob was going to be the appetizer. The conversation, characters, scene, and plot are believable. I imagine this could turn into a horror story possibly.

Thank you for writing and sharing your snake word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Banging My Head  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sadly, your poem is dark and in a way a horror story because it feels like this is a never-ending cycle. I hope things are much better for you. Your poem is clear and concise. I don't know how you feel, but I can relate because there have been times when it seems there is no hope. Taking one step at a time and being kind to yourself is important.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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