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by Jeff
Rated: 18+ · Book · Biographical · #1399999
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#992988 added September 10, 2020 at 5:57pm
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S&M

"Barrel of Monkeys | Day 8




"S&M"
by Rihanna
from Loud (2011)


All due blame credit due to Jayne for introducing me to redaction poetry, where you take existing text and selectively redact sections to create a poem from what's left. Naturally I immediately through of turning an already dirty song into even dirtier poetry. This one's stretching the 18+ rating of this blog... definitely NSFW, folks. *Scared*

Full Redaction Poem

FORMATTED

come on...

feels so good being bad
pain is my pleasure
chains and whips
excite me

come on...
come on...

the affliction leaves
me wanting more

i may be bad
but I’m perfectly
good at it

come on...
come on...
come on...

i like it
i like it

oh...
oh...
you turn me on

give it to me
strong

make my body
say ah, ah, ah

sex in the air
i don’t care

come on...
come on...
come


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