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My first short story upload

Finally, I have uploaded my first short story to writing.com.

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Lost Property - Part 1  (18+) Part 1 - A chance meeting on a train that leads to a double cross and death #2324956 by Bill Whyte

A man is in a desperate hurry to catch a train to London. During the journey, his fortunes change dramatically after a group of passengers forget their bag. There is more in the left behind property than Tom bargained for, so much so that it changes his life especially when the owners of the bag catch up with him and deliver him a message. The owners of the lost property are not as united as they first might appear. There is danger, intrigue and shifting allegiances in this short story of drugs, money and gruesome death.

It's in 4 parts of about 1800 or so words. Let me know.