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Team Ahimsa Blog Relay, Various Contests

by THANKFUL SONALI Party Hopping!

Rated: 18+ · Book · Community · #2257034

Birthday Bash Relay. Excited on Second Place! Now for various WDC contests and activities

Team Ahimsa ▼
Members of Team Ahimsa
Richard ~ Distractions Abound Shanachie THANKFUL SONALI Party Hopping!

My Turn ▼
Entries to be judged:
"Day #1: A Pandemic-al Birthday. - BLOG RELAY, JUDGED" "Day Four: SCARIEST BIRTHDAY EVER - BLOG RELAY, JUDGED" "Day Seven: AN INCONVENIENT BIRTHDAY - BLOG RELAY, JUDGED"

For

The WDC Birthday Bash Blog Relay [E]
#1803384

Form teams, take the baton, and for 9 days share stories for chances at fantastic prizes!
by iKïyå§ama

Thanks! "
2021 Blog Relay Winners!"

"Note: They came, they ran the race, they conquered! ..."

"Congratulations November 2021 Winners!"

FORUM
30-Day Blogging Challenge ON HIATUS (13+)
WDC's Longest Running Blog Competition - Hiatus
#1786069 by Fivesixer

FORUM
Poetry Topic of the Month Contest (13+)
Win Exclusive MBs. It ends at midnight at the end of each month. Suggest the topic.
#2216416 by Happy 25 Birthday Writing.com

Daily Flash Fiction Challenge (13+)
Enter your story of 300 words or less.
#896794 by Arakun the Twisted Raccoon

FORUM
The Daily Poem (13+)
A Week of Poetic Craziness
#2133562 by Jayne

FORUM
Muffy's Mischievous Challenges (18+)
Fun mini challenges for the SuperPower Reviewers to enjoy
#2319692 by Maryann

STATIC
12 Days Of Christmas 2024 (E)
12 Days. 12 Tasks. Complete them all and you'll receive a special gift!
#2331810 by Jeremummy

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10 Most Recent Blog Comments:

THANKFUL SONALI Party Hopping!

Sep 23, 2025 at 12:54pm
In response to "Who stole the treasure?"

Thanks Ẃeβ࿚ẂỉԎḈĥ and StephBee (bravehearts both) - I hope Jimmy is a legit suspect, I've had him aid and abet you there!

Prompt is too long for my myopic eyes to plod though, so just picked a name I saw!

StephBee

Sep 23, 2025 at 12:33pm
In response to "Who stole the treasure?"

OMG!!

This story is hilarious, BUT like Ẃeβ࿚ẂỉԎḈĥ

sez, it doesn't really follow the rules for this month's story. You can do this!!

1 Like

Ẃeβ࿚ẂỉԎḈĥ

Sep 23, 2025 at 11:53am
In response to "Who stole the treasure?"

You can remove the numbers.
Choose one or more suspects from the list. (Since StephBee and WW, aren't characters in the mystery scenario.)

You still have time to edit!
You may be the ONLY entry once brought up to rules' standard.

The Cop Shop Mystery MB is up for grabs!
You have 7 days left.

Anyone else reading this ... What are you waiting for? See some previous winners of Cop Shop stories highlighted in the ..."Comedy Newsletter (August 27, 2025)"

It's really not that difficult.

And, it's lots of fun! ...

1 Like

bas

Sep 4, 2025 at 10:14pm
In response to "Where to Begin? How to End? The list goes on!"

Thanks for the mention, You are always fun to work with and Write world was a great contest :).

1 Like

StephBee

Sep 4, 2025 at 6:23pm
In response to "Diamante -- Mountain"

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE POEM

The poem talks about how a mountain can challenge us.

WHAT I LIKED

I liked the positive message of the mountain. Some people may think of mountains as hard to overcome, but if one buckles down and puts their mind to it, they overcome any mountain that's in their way.

STRUCTURE

This is a diamante poem. The rules involve having 7 seven lines, first and last line, just one word which is a noun, 2nd and 6th lines, 2 words which are adjectives, 3rd and 5th lines have 3 words which are verbs, 4th line has 4 words - nouns. Diamantes don't have to play hard by the rules, but they should take the shape of a diamond.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font and make it easier to read on WDC.

DESCRIPTIONS

The descriptive words blend in words you expect to find like "massive" and "unsurmountable," but also those words associated with emotional mountains like "anxiety" "resolve," and I really enjoyed how the poet made the subtle connection there with the physical and the emotional.

PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening sets the stage for the poem. I enjoyed the emotional approach to the poem - it helped to make it personal. The poem followed the prompt and used one of the following words: mountain, beach, or forest. Good luck in the Bard's Hall Contest.

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Elycia Lee ☮

Sep 2, 2025 at 11:24am
In response to "Where to Begin? How to End? The list goes on!"

You are so sweet!

Thank you!

1 Like

Lornda

Sep 2, 2025 at 11:02am
In response to "Where to Begin? How to End? The list goes on!"

Thanks for the mention in your post! I'm so glad we met you over at the SPR group.

2 Like

🌖 HuntersMoon

Sep 2, 2025 at 11:00am
In response to "Where to Begin? How to End? The list goes on!"

Awwww. That's so sweet of you Jezebel Sonali...

2 Like

Ẃeβ࿚ẂỉԎḈĥ

Aug 28, 2025 at 9:29am
In response to "Ganesha Chaturthi"

I missed your post on the NF. I saw it was celebrated on 8/27. I hope it was a lovely celebration for you and your loved ones.

1 Like

Ẃeβ࿚ẂỉԎḈĥ

Aug 12, 2025 at 9:54am
In response to "Quiz"

You're very welcome, Sonali. Their imagination soars with your creative input. They are lucky to have you.

1 Like

September 20, 2025 at 9:29am

#1097731

Literacy Day - Acrostic Poem

Liberation comes from education
In every home, a bookshelf
Teach them the joy of the alphabet
Endless possibilities - sharing ideas
Read, Write, Communicate, Laugh, Cry together!
Across towns, countries, continents!
Create, reminisce, ponder...
Your most precious insights on paper

Delight in the written word!
Admire great works of literature!
Yield to the joy of being literate!

WORDS 67
LINES 11
Topic #3: September 8, ~ International Literacy Day
FOR "Poetry Topic of the Month Contest"

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